【正文】 。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。構(gòu)思提綱。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下表格內(nèi)的要點(diǎn)提示，并結(jié)合你的家庭實(shí)際情況，給你的英國筆友Sam寫一封信，向他介紹一下你的家規(guī)，并向他展示一個(gè)溫情智慧的中國家庭。家規(guī)是中華民族傳統(tǒng)文化的重要組成部分。句型：被動(dòng)句型。：例文采用三段式；用第一人稱來敘述講成語故事活動(dòng)；因?yàn)榛顒?dòng)已經(jīng)舉辦，所以時(shí)態(tài)采用一般過去時(shí)；對(duì)參加活動(dòng)的過程描寫完整且條理清晰。提示詞語： Chinese idioms, story, collect, share, learn from, acient提示問題： ● What did you do during the activity of Telling Chinese idioms story?● What did you learn from the activity?● What do you think of it?【答案】The activity of “Telling Chinese idioms story” was held in our school last week.In order to take part in this activity, I collected lots of Chinese idiom stories in advance. Many students, including me, actively shared the Chinese idiom stories in the activity. After each story, the teacher explained the meaning of idioms and how to use it correctly. We learned a lot from our teacher. I did lots of reading in the process of preparation. My reading ability has improved greatly. What’s more, I realized the richness of Chinese acient culture. I really had a good time on the activity.【解析】【詳解】：這是一篇提綱類書面表達(dá)，只給了一些要點(diǎn)提示，但都不很明確。近期各校都在開展學(xué)習(xí)中國傳統(tǒng)文化活動(dòng)。最后玩具的意義得到了升華，表達(dá)了作者的期望（I hope I can be a soldier），上升到了保家衛(wèi)國的層面，這樣的一篇作文是有深度的，能夠讓人感動(dòng)的，是一篇優(yōu)秀的范文。寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇文章講了自己最喜歡的玩具槍，描述玩具槍的時(shí)候有適當(dāng)?shù)募?xì)節(jié)補(bǔ)充，例如a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth（用黃布包著的玩具槍），這里用到了過去分詞作定語，作者還描述了玩具槍的功能（small plastic pills），順便還描述了自己小時(shí)候玩槍的經(jīng)歷，準(zhǔn)確使用了時(shí)態(tài)。A（n） _________ I have__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】A（n） toy gun I haveEveryone has an object that she/ he like best. So do I.In my drawer, there is a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth. It’s a black toy gun and it can shot some small plastic pills for ten meters. When I was young, I played with other kids with my toy gun. They all admired me and put me in the place of leader. I was so happy then. When I was a little boy, I liked watching the war movies best. I was eager to have my own toy gun. One day, it was my birthday. I asked for it when my father came back. My family was poor then and my father didn’t promise me. From then, father worked harder and came back more lately. A week later, father put a box to me. A black toy gun in it! I was moved with tears. In order to get it, father worked late and hurt himself. He died a month later.Now I hope I can be a soldier and own a real gun to protect my country and family. I will remember my father’s love forever. Every time I miss him, I’ll take out the toy gun and say “Thank you, my dear father!【解析】寫作分析：這篇作文需要就自己最喜歡的物品展開描述，要求是進(jìn)行描述，并談?wù)勀闶侨绾蔚玫剿模约八嬖诘囊饬x。要求：1. 請(qǐng)?jiān)陬}目空白處填上你心愛物品的名字；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。最后可以用說理的方式來介紹做作業(yè)的必要性，例如用到了improve our skills提高我們的技能，在這里也有一點(diǎn)亮點(diǎn)，就是說作業(yè)也要有變化性，要豐富多彩，體現(xiàn)了作者的深度思考，總體來說出色地完成了既定的寫作任務(wù)。其次，開始具體陳述觀點(diǎn)，陳述的時(shí)候要適當(dāng)使用實(shí)例，相關(guān)用到的短語有have some difficulties in doing在做…的時(shí)候有困難，review the knowledge復(fù)習(xí)知識(shí)，think over the difficulties來回思考難點(diǎn)，Little by little一點(diǎn)一點(diǎn)地。寫作過程中要注意邏輯準(zhǔn)確，注意正確使用連詞，借助實(shí)例、實(shí)際經(jīng)驗(yàn)來佐證自己的觀點(diǎn)。s all. Thanks.【解析】寫作分析：審題之后能明白寫作任務(wù)是要寫出一篇小論文，討論每日的作業(yè)到底是不是必要的。s necessary for us to do daily homework.Doing daily homework can help us understand what we have learned in class. For me, I always have some difficulties in mastering all of what I have learned in class. Through daily homework, I review the knowledge and think over the difficulties. Little by little, I have a better understanding. So I always believe “Practice