【正文】 t reply to your in time because I was busy pr。如I39。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，語法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確，句式表達(dá)符合英語的習(xí)慣。第二段介紹的是自己的旅行計劃；第三段是暑假的其他安排。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目要求的所有要點。語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使上下文意連貫。保證句式準(zhǔn)確，注意英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語的不同，不能逐詞翻譯。其次注意使用正確的英語句式來表達(dá)。寫作時，我們應(yīng)根據(jù)題目給出的這些內(nèi)容要點，組織語言，表達(dá)清楚。m terribly sorry I couldn39。m terribly sorry I couldn39。請根據(jù)以下要點給他回封郵件： 沒有及時回復(fù)的原因, 你打算去哪兒旅游，以及你暑假的其他安排。16．（注意書寫的規(guī)范：大小寫、標(biāo)點符號等的正確運用?？忌荒苓z漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和高分句式，語言要規(guī)范，信息表達(dá)清晰、完整，意思連貫?！军c睛】本文思路清晰，時態(tài)運用要正確，敘述清楚條里，層次分明，所用句式句型比較高級，像If we don’t let off fireworks, cleaners don’t need to clean up so much rubbish everywhere./ They think Chinese people have been used to letting off fireworks since hundreds years ago. / I think we should follow the rule because good environment is more important than anything else.。 我認(rèn)為我們應(yīng)該遵守這條規(guī)則，因為良好的環(huán)境比其他任何東西都重要。我們應(yīng)該保護(hù)它。他們認(rèn)為中國人幾百年前就習(xí)慣放煙花了。如果我們不放煙花，清潔工就不需要到處清理那么多垃圾。另外，如果人們不夠小心，可能會引起大火。他們認(rèn)為煙花產(chǎn)生的煙太多，會造成嚴(yán)重的空氣污染。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點、語法錯誤（時態(tài)、主謂一致等）。要運用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有連貫性。仔細(xì)閱讀所給材料，認(rèn)真審題，確定主題，根據(jù)主題和所給要點列出提綱，所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表格中的信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，語句通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范。時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時。你們班級的同學(xué)們就春節(jié)是否能燃放煙花進(jìn)行了討論。如，火災(zāi)……3．……（發(fā)揮至少一點）1．千百年來已經(jīng)習(xí)慣燃放煙花2．沒有煙花，過春節(jié)更無趣3．……你的觀點……（自擬至少兩個觀點）Dear Major,We have had a discussion about whether to let off fireworks at Spring Festival. All the students in our class give the ideas. 【答案】Most of the students don’t agree to let off fireworks at Spring Festival. They think fireworks produce so much smoke that it can cause serious air pollution. What’s more, people like letting them off at midnight, it is always so noisy outside that many people can’t sleep well. Also, it may cause big fire if people aren’t careful enough. Some children like playing with fireworks, so it’s dangerous for their eyes. If we don’t let off fireworks, cleaners don’t need to clean up so much rubbish everywhere.On the other hand, some students don’t agree. They think Chinese people have been used to letting off fireworks since hundreds years ago. Moreover, Chinese traditional culture is missing. We should protect it. People will feel less interested than before without fireworks.I think we should follow the rule because good environment is more important than anything else. Protecting environment is protecting ourselves.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文。文章的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。請根據(jù)表格所提供的信息,給市長寫一封信介紹大家的觀點，同時談?wù)勛约旱南敕ā＝K中考模擬）書面表達(dá)常州市政府發(fā)文，從年2月1日起，市區(qū)禁止燃放煙花爆竹。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。修改潤色。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。初寫短文。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求?！军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如want sb to do, be allowed to do, in my free time, be strict with, decide to do, municate with, as much as possible, share...with..., help sb do, be busy with以及get on well with。My name is Susan. There are many rules in my 【答案】My name is Susan. There are many rules in my family. My parents want me to clean the room every day. I am not allowed to play puter games in my free time. I can’t go out on school nights. I must go to bed by 10 pm. I think my parents are too strict with me. Sometimes I feel bored, but I understand they really love me. I decided to municate with my parents as much as possible, sharing my happiness and sadness with them. And I should often help them do housework because they are busy with their work, too. I’m sure if we trust each other, we will get on well with our parents.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文，針對父母對你要求過多你感到厭煩這一問題，你是如何解決的。（3）你決定與父母多交流，為父母做些家務(wù)。天津中考模擬）假設(shè)你是 Susan，在家里你的父母總是對你有很多要求，你是否有時感到厭煩？你是怎樣解決的？請你根據(jù)下列要點提示用英語寫一篇短文。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。修改潤色。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。初寫短文。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求?！军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如show great interest in, at that time, unfortunately, 比較級and比較級, raise money, give up, in addition, offer to do, what’s more, get good grades, feel proud of, pay back以及try one’s best等。The Moving Story of He SihanRecently, the moving story of He Sihan has been reported on CCTV. The 14yearold boy is a student in Grade 9. He________________【答案】Recently, the moving story of He Sihan has been reported on CCTV. The 14yearold boy is a student in Grade 9. He has lived with his aunt since he was only one year old. When he was a little boy, he showed great interest in painting. At that time, they led a happy life. Unfortunately, his aunt got a serious disease in . Their family became poorer and poorer after that. So he decided to do something for his aunt. By selling the pictures he painted, he raised money for his aunt to treat her disease. You can’t imagine what difficulties he faces, he never gives up. In addition, he offers to do all the housework. What’s more, though he is busy, he studies hard and gets good grades.I feel proud of him. Because he never gives up and tries his best to pay back his aunt, no matter how hard the life is.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文，介紹何思汗的感人事跡。（2）短文的題目和開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。（4）思汗勇于面對困難、主動承擔(dān)家務(wù)且刻苦學(xué)習(xí)。（2）年姑姑患上重病，何思汗的家境日漸貧寒。請你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示，寫一篇短文。13．（【點睛】本文要求以“Bikesharing”為題，根據(jù)表格的內(nèi)容提示，寫一篇短文，表達(dá)自己對共享單車的看法和建議。s known that it has many advantages.，F(xiàn)irst of all, it39。s health.（優(yōu)勢） However, it also brings some problems. For example, some people throw them away after using bikes. Even some people damage them, and some bikes are stolen.（難題） In my opinion, everyone should try to be civilized and follow the rules of using bikes. As long as we take good care of bikes, it will make our life better and better,and our environment will be more beautiful.【高分句型二】（建議）【解析】【詳解】這篇短文內(nèi)容豐富，表達(dá)了所有要點，語言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。s very convenient for people to go somewhere.【高分句型一】Also, it helps to reduce the traffic pressure. There will be less pollution because of bikesharing. Besides, bikesharing helps people take more this wa