【正文】 考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文。該文中以下幾個(gè)句子用得很好。寫作亮點(diǎn)：短文中作者按照題目的要求，給我們介紹了持不同觀點(diǎn)的學(xué)生各自的理由，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，要點(diǎn)全面。并注意上下文要語句貫通。要注意把每一個(gè)要點(diǎn)都表達(dá)出來，不要遺漏任何一個(gè)，書寫時(shí)一定注意時(shí)態(tài)的正確使用。根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)寫一篇80100詞左右的英語短文，而且要做到表達(dá)清楚，語句通順，意思連貫。，騎電動(dòng)車不安全；，騎電動(dòng)車也快不起來。注意：；，書寫工整、規(guī)范；。10．上周，你們班就初中生能否騎電動(dòng)自行車上學(xué)進(jìn)行了一次討論。用了賓語從句，如：Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for ，如：Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful ，也是提分的經(jīng)典句子。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，所寫的句子應(yīng)該符合英語語法，不能是漢語式的句子，要使用一些高級(jí)詞匯及句式。參考詞匯：尊重respect短文首句：I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.【答案】I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. After all, study plays a key role in their life. They also agree they should respect their parents, who look after them every day. Besides, they’re ready to serve the society and in their opinion it’s really meaningful. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for future.From my point of view, we need to make some good friends so that we can learn from each other. Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful life.【解析】試題分析：英語教育網(wǎng)站開展主題為“How can a teenager have a successful life?”的討論，采訪了一些同學(xué)參與討論，寫出他們的觀點(diǎn)及自己的觀點(diǎn)。請(qǐng)據(jù)上經(jīng)用英語寫一篇短文參與討論，并闡述你的觀點(diǎn)。9．書面表達(dá)。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如get together，enjoy the full moon， share our stories等。m glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the MidAutumn Festival to you. The MidAutumn Festival falls on the 15th of the 8th lunar month. It’s a big day for us Chinese people. All the family members get together to celebrate the festival. In the evening, we usually have a big dinner. And then we go outside and enjoy the full moon. The moon that night looks the brightest. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together to eat mooncakes, and share our stories.For me, the best part is to enjoy the moon and eat mooncakes. Mooncakes taste very delicious. They look like the moon, big and round.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本篇寫作是以書信的方式向筆友介紹中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日中秋節(jié)，要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)來寫。Dear Jessica, I39。內(nèi)容須包含以下所有要點(diǎn)：1. 中秋節(jié)的時(shí)間；2. 中秋節(jié)的傳統(tǒng)習(xí)俗及慶祝方式：全家人一起吃飯, 賞月, 吃月餅等；3, 我最期待的活動(dòng)。8．李華的英國筆友Jessica來信說, 她想了解中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日中秋節(jié)。s more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford ；另外文章中還使用了恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，如Also, What’s more, But, sometimes, After all等等。例如They can be seen everywhere so that it39。分段敘述使文章的結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，主題明確，有層次性。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目要求的所有信息。語句之間注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使整篇文章意思連貫、表達(dá)流暢。通過審題可知，這篇短文應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，第三人稱來敘述，短文可以分成兩段或者三段，一個(gè)內(nèi)容一段或前兩個(gè)內(nèi)容合到一段。題目中利用表格的形式給我們列舉了短文的主要內(nèi)容，包括：共享單車的優(yōu)勢(shì)；存在的問題以及你自己對(duì)這件事情的看法。t return shared bikes in time. Sometimes shared bikes take up too much of the road, so they are in our way.I think we should encourage more people to use shared bikes properly. After all, it39。s easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What39。，文章的開頭部分已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)?！澳愕挠^點(diǎn)”一欄用2―3句話展開合理想象。社會(huì)現(xiàn)狀自從出現(xiàn)，飽受贊譽(yù)。還要注意句子的關(guān)聯(lián)。寫作時(shí)要注意遣詞造句，不能受漢語的影響，要用地道的英語表達(dá)，注意時(shí)態(tài)，語態(tài)，單詞拼寫，語法等問題，用好簡(jiǎn)單句，適當(dāng)用復(fù)雜句。參考詞匯： 對(duì)某人微笑 smile at sb. 誤解 misunderstand短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，不要逐字翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫通順。給別人帶來快樂,自己也快樂。有益于身心健康。學(xué)會(huì)對(duì)自己微笑面對(duì)困難與煩惱學(xué)會(huì)微笑（考試失利、被別人誤解等）。s time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go 。s time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go sightseeing.In my opinion we can have a talk with our parents. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. We need to relax ourselves after working so hard at school. It39。How will you spend the ing summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions. __________________________________________________________