【正文】 在收尾部分表達了作者積極的人生態(tài)度，表示如果還有機會自己還樂于參與，這樣使得這篇文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整，表意更加清晰。寫作亮點：既然這是一篇記敘文，就應(yīng)該完整地呈現(xiàn)故事，需要加上必要的背景，指明時間（Last summer），地點（in rural area），簡要概括事件（teach children English），這是文章首句的點睛之筆，信息量豐富?！敬鸢浮縇ast summer,though it was hot,I volunteered to teach children English in rural I arrived there,I couldn39。 At present only a few students do some reading after class. Here are several reasons. ▲ ▲ ▲ ▲ ▲ ▲ 【答案】At present only a few students do some reading after class. Here are several reasons. First of all, quite a lot of students are burdened with too much homework. Still others haven’t formed a habit of reading. They would rather spend their spare time on TV or on the Internet. However, reading has many benefits. Through reading we can learn more about the world. Besides, it can help us think better. Last but not least, reading can make our life more colourful. Here are my suggestions. For one thing, teachers are supposed to limit the amount of our homework so that we can have more time to read. For another, it’s a good idea to form reading clubs and learn from each other.【解析】 略10．寫作某英文網(wǎng)站的“ Student Life”欄目正在向中學(xué)生征文，標題為“ A time when I made someone happy”，請你寫一篇英文稿件，內(nèi)容需包括以下要點:1. Who was the person you made happy?2. When was it?3. What did you say or do?4. Why did it make him/her happy?5. How did you feel at that moment?注意：1．詞數(shù)：100左右（題目不計入總詞數(shù)）。請你根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容寫一篇短文，對這一現(xiàn)狀進行分析并提出建議。點睛：這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如at the beginning of； know about；make a speech等；When ；Although ；Then ；From then on,等的運用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理；同時語言流暢，內(nèi)容完整，是一篇不錯的范文。語言力求準確，簡潔。s very important to be confident【答案】It’s very important to be confident. Selfconfidence can bring us courage to stick to what we do. So it’s valuable to us.When I was in Grade 7, once my teacher asked me to make a speech in class. Although I practiced it for many times at home, I still felt nervous and forgot thewords at the beginning of it. Then I breathed deeply and relaxed myself. You can’t believe how happy I was when I recalled the speech and finished it teacher thought highly of my performance and I got much encouragement from my classmates. From then on, I have bee more and more confident.To build confidence, firstly we need to clearly know about our own advantages and try to develop them. It is the most important that we should put in enough effort to what we do. Then we can finally make it and gain more confidence.【解析】本文內(nèi)容應(yīng)包含表格中所提供的所有信息。假如你是李華，請你為?？⒄Z園地“自信助我成長”專欄寫一篇短文，談?wù)勛孕诺闹匾?，分享一次使你更加自信的?jīng)歷，并說說我們?nèi)绾胃幼孕拧?．自信賦予人力量，帶給人快樂。恰當?shù)闹V語也為文章增色不少，例如用到了“Practice makes perfect”熟能生巧這個諺語。寫作亮點：首先用一個自然段來闡明寫作的主題，表達出自己的觀點（認為作業(yè)是很必要的），可以借助it is necessary for sb to do…這樣的句型。首先需要陳述正反兩方面的觀點，其次結(jié)合自己的實際經(jīng)驗，發(fā)表自己的觀