【正文】 這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結構是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數是否符合要求等。修改潤色。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。初寫短文。有了提綱，我們就可以根據提綱和主題確定相關的寫作材料。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數符合要求?！军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。根據要表達的內容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內容。Hello!Dear Amy, thank you for caring.Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Li Ming【答案】例文Hello!Dear Amy, thank you for caring.Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination. I have got good results in most of my subjects, but I am not happy with myself. I think I must spend more time on my studies.My parents are really strict with me. However, they care for me as well. Once upon a time, I failed in my physics exam and felt stressed and sad. They had a close munication with me and helped me solve my problems and cheer up again.My teachers are also ready to help us. They hope that we can realize our dreams. They tell us to try our best and not to give up. Life is always full of ups and downs. It39。 （2）. 第2要點和第3要點要用2—3句話作適當發(fā)揮。他們希望你們實現自己的理想。 （2）. 你的父母對你嚴格要求，但是也很關心你。要點如下： （1）. 雖然你大部分功課你都學得比較好，但是你對自己不滿意。句型：被動句型，現在分詞作狀語，主語從句。文章條理分明，三個要點提示都已表達清楚，并進行了適當拓展，所給單詞也都全部用上。：該題要求寫作體裁為書信格式，所以例文用第一人稱I進行寫作，在文章結尾也按照標準書信格式進行了收尾。提示詞語： Chinese classes, learn, attend, culture, prepare提示問題： ● When and where will the Chinese Summer Camp be held?● What activities will be held at the Chinese Summer Camp?● What is your advice for Jack?Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in ourschool this summer holiday . .Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in our school this summer holiday.The Chinese Summer Camp will be held in our school from July 10th to July 30th this summer. The activities of this Chinese Summer Camp are as follows:First, you will attend Chinese classes, learning the meaning of Chinese characters. Second, you will take part in different parties, knowing the history of China and Chinese culture, especially Chinese holidays, which will impress you deeply.What’s more, you will have chances to visit some museums and the Great Wall. What you should prepare is a pair of shoes for the visit. If you have any questions, please tell me. I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】：這是一篇提綱類書面表達，只給了一些要點提示，但都不很明確。以及狀語從句等；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時可適當運用表示轉折、因果、并列、比較等關系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標點符號誤用等，還要檢查語法結構是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，詞數是否符合要求等。句型：When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins；Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference。例文點評：例文采用的是三段式；用第一人稱來敘述為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么；時態(tài)采用的是一般現在時，描述建議時，描寫具體，條理清晰。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談談我們面臨的主要環(huán)境問題是什么，為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么，以及你的期望。8．環(huán)境保護人人有責， 如果我們每一個人都能珍愛美麗地球 保護自然資源，相信我們的家園會越來越美好。要注意上下文的連貫，將這些內容有機的連接起來，不要逐句翻譯。作文應包括4個主要內容，一個是社會現狀，第二個優(yōu)點，第三是存在的問題，最后發(fā)表個人的觀點。，文章的開頭部分已給出，不計入總詞數。諸多優(yōu)勢隨處可見，出行方便有益健康，減少污染費用不高，負擔得起存在問題未及時歸還占道擋路你的觀點我認為參考詞匯：公共自行車public bicycles注意事項：，要求語句通順，意思連貫。7．共享單車自從2016年在江陰投入使用以來，給人們帶來了諸多便利，受到人們的追捧，改變了人們的出行方式，但同時也遇到了一些挑戰(zhàn)，是國民素質的“照妖鏡”，請你根據表格中信息的提示，給21世紀英文報寫一篇關于共享單車看法的稿件。s more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford ；另外文章中還使用了恰當的連接成分，如Also, What’s more, But, sometimes, After all等等。例如They can be seen everywhere so that it39。分段敘述使文章的結構清晰，主題明確，有層次性。首先短文內容完整，包含了題目要求的所有信息。語句之間注意使用恰當的連接成分，使整篇文章意思連