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第二句有特別風(fēng)格,第三句太過自信,第四句,表示謙虛?! feel quite certain that as a result of the course in filing which i pleted at the crosby school of business, i can install and operate efficiently a filing system for your organization. 我相信在克洛斯比商業(yè)實(shí)習(xí)班修完一門課后,我能夠替貴公司設(shè)置同時(shí)操作一套檔案分類系統(tǒng)?! am confident that my experience and references will show you that i can fulfill the particular requirements of your bookkeeping position. 我想信我的經(jīng)歷和推薦人能夠告訴您,我能夠符合貴公司簿記員一職的特定需要。 應(yīng)征函的語氣 應(yīng)征函要發(fā)揮最大的效果,語氣必須確信、自信、有創(chuàng)意而不過份夸大,如能事先洞察雇主的愛好,或其別人格特性,按照物以類聚的原理,應(yīng)征函假設(shè)能配合雇主的特性,求職的人一定能夠比其別人占上風(fēng),獲得面談的時(shí)機(jī)。 may i have an interview? my residence telephone is (042) 4398. you reach me by calling that number until june 30. after july 2, my address will be kent house, bretton woods, new hampshire. 可否惠予面談?我住處為43981號(hào)。您可在每天下午二至四時(shí)(星期二例外)打731430號(hào)通知我。我從上午九時(shí)到下午五時(shí)都可接通?! £惛木渥樱?hoping you will give me an interview, i am(我希望您惠予面談) anticipating a favorable decision, i wait your(等候您的佳音) trusting your reply will be satisfactory, i remain(靜候滿意的答復(fù)) 哀求式的句子,不夠完好(漏掉面談時(shí)間): wont you please give me the chance to interview your? i can be reached by calling kenmore 69781. 懇請(qǐng)惠予面談。 (b)改寫后(較佳): if my application has convinced you of my ability to satisfy you, i should w