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第二句有特殊風格,第三句太過自信,第四句,作者表示謙虛。 4.I feel quite certain that as a result of the course in filing which I pleted at the Crosby School of Business, I can install and operate efficiently a filing system for your organization. 我相信在克洛斯比商業(yè)實習班修完一門課后,我能夠替貴公司設置并且操作一套檔案分類系統(tǒng)。 2.I am confident that my experience and references will show you that I can fulfill the particular requirements of your bookkeeping position. 我想信我的經驗和推薦人可以告訴您,我能夠符合貴公司簿記員一職的特定需要。 應征函的語氣 應征函要發(fā)揮最大的效果,語氣必須肯定、自信、有創(chuàng)意而不過份夸張,如能事先洞察雇主的喜好,或其他人格特性,根據物以類聚的原理,應征函若能配合雇主的特性,求職的人一定可以比其他人占上風,獲得面談的機會。 May I have an interview? My residence telephone is (042) 4398. You reach me by calling that number until June 30. After July 2, my address will be Kent House, Bretton Woods, New Hampshire. 可否惠予面談?我住處電話為43981號。您可在每天下午二至四時(星期二例外)打731430號電話通知我。我從上午九時到下午五時都可接通。 3.陳腐的句子: Hoping you will give me an interview, I am……(我希望您惠予面談) Anticipating a favorable decision, I wait your……(等候您的佳音) Trusting your reply will be satisfactory, I remain(靜候滿意的答復) 4.哀求式的句子,不夠完整(漏掉面談時間): Won‘t you please give me the chance to interview your? I can be reached by calling Kenmore 69781. 懇請惠予面談。 (b)改寫后(較佳): If my application has convinced you of my ability to satisfy you, I should wele the opportunity to talk with you, so that y