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② 評分 以滿分 15分 為標(biāo)準(zhǔn),給同伴的習(xí)作打分。 字?jǐn)?shù)要求: 80詞左右 體裁: ______________________ 寫作順序: _______________________ 時態(tài): ___________________________ 人稱: ______________________ 關(guān)注以下寫作三要素: 記敘文 以時間、事件發(fā)展為順序 以一般過去時為主 第一人稱 1. I once had an experience… 2. It was the most unfettable experience that has ever happened in my life. 3. The most unfettable experience in my memory was one day my classmates and I went to the park. 4. I will never fet the military training. 5. There are a lot of memories in my heart that I can’t fet. When I was … years old, I .... 各式開頭: 6. As we all know, everyone has something special in his life. I think I will never fet … because on that day … 7. I think my junior high was wonderful, because it taught me to be … 8. Whenever I open the book full of photos, I always look back when I … 9. I still remember the most valuable time that I have ever had. 10. Everyone has a different junior high. It may be wonderful, exciting or hard. I have a …junior high.