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③點(diǎn)評(píng) 由亮點(diǎn)欣賞到不足的修正(篇章結(jié)構(gòu) 分析 細(xì) 節(jié)點(diǎn)評(píng) ) 欣賞角度 : 1. 寫作基本要求 :人稱 , 時(shí)態(tài); 2. 要點(diǎn)齊全; 3. 結(jié)構(gòu) : 開頭,正文,結(jié)尾; 4. 好詞好句。作文的標(biāo)題,開頭已經(jīng)給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 Body:圖表內(nèi)容 ( ) Ending:說明個(gè)人看法 ,并號(hào)召大家 … → 人稱和時(shí)態(tài) → 中心主題句 → 過渡詞 → 結(jié)尾句 3. 注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)、大小寫;保持書寫工整清楚。 如今,越來越多的中學(xué)生擁有手機(jī) , 就學(xué)生是否可帶手機(jī)來學(xué)校,你校在社會(huì)上做了調(diào)查,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下圖表內(nèi)容,用英語(yǔ)寫一份調(diào)查報(bào)告。 who idea reasons 老師 不同意 上課發(fā)信息,玩游戲,考試作弊。 集體賞析,共同進(jìn)步 Exerc isesTask 3 Everything has his advantages and disadvantages. Use it in the right way. Everything has his advantages and disadvantages. Use the mobile phone in the right way. Check and rewrite 二次修正 重寫作文 Listening& Reading material Is it good for students to bring phones to school? It has been discussed all over the country. Here are some of their opinions: Miss Cao (a teacher from Middle School) As a teacher, I don’t agree that the s