【正文】 修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。構(gòu)思提綱。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如either...or..., be based on, keep healthy, such as, have time to do, take part in, in order to, stronger and stronger以及all kinds of等，增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。要求：1. 內(nèi)容必須包括以上要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；3. 語句通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；4. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及校名。假若你是來自九年級三班的李華，請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容，用英語寫一份不少于80詞的倡議書。they can’t help playing with other apps while 。Would you like to study on apps?Smartphones are being more and more popular nowadays, more and more students like to use them to study. 【答案】Would you like to study on apps?Smartphones are being more and more popular nowadays, more and more students like to use them to study. Students can often practice speaking English on phones. There are many exercises on apps, this makes it easier for us to learn by ourselves. But other students don’t like to use them. Their eyesight has been worse since they used mobile phones. Also, they can’t help playing with other apps while studying. This leads to bad results in their study. I think it is useful for us to use mobile phones . I can learn more at home without paying much money. But we should use them in a proper way.【解析】【詳解】閱讀題干，這是屬于看法類的作文，那么在寫這類作文時，首先要分別寫出支持和反對兩方面的看法及原因，最后要說明自己的觀點(diǎn)看法來進(jìn)行總結(jié)。這引發(fā)了學(xué)生們是否喜歡用app學(xué)習(xí)的討論，為此，英文報Teens 將在下期開設(shè)專欄討論這一話題，你采訪了一些同學(xué)，寫了一篇題為“Would you like to study on apps?”的報道。，開頭句“regard my English teacher as one of my best teachers.”直入主題，正文部分詳細(xì)描述了老師如何耐心的多方面的幫助自己， is so kind and helpful that I can’t forget her in my school 。要求: ，如teacher. classmate或trip等:2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校姓名。寫作中注意使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。（3）提示詞：get along with；colorful(adj.)；knowledge；habitI Expect My School LifeI will study in a high school soon. Everything is new to me. ____________________________【答案】One possible version: （118 words）I Expect My School LifeI will study in a high school soon. Everything is new to me. I hope my school is big and clean with a large dinning room. And the library is full of different kinds of books. So I can read them in my spare time. I can get along well with my teachers and classmates. I can help each other with my classmates. At the same time, I expect my school life is colorful, after class I can listen to music, play chess and basketball. To get more useful knowledge or information, I can surf the Internet. I will keep a good eating habit. Do exercise often to stay in good spirits. Try my best to make great progress.As long as I stick to it, I can achieve my dream.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，題目中給出的材料較為齊全。請以“I Expect My School Life”為題，寫一篇80詞左右的短文。注意書寫的規(guī)范：大小寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號等的正確運(yùn)用?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文思路清晰，時態(tài)運(yùn)用要正確，敘述清楚條里，層次分明，所用句式句型比較高級，像If we don’t let off fireworks, cleaners don’t need to clean up so much rubbish everywhere./ They think Chinese people have been used to letting off fireworks since hundreds years ago. / I think we should follow the rule because good environment is more important than anything else.。我們應(yīng)該保護(hù)它。如果我們不放煙花，清潔工就不需要到處清理那么多垃圾。他們認(rèn)為煙花產(chǎn)生的煙太多，會造成嚴(yán)重的空氣污染。要運(yùn)用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有連貫性。時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時。如，火災(zāi)……3．……(發(fā)揮至少一點(diǎn))1．千百年來已經(jīng)習(xí)慣燃放煙花2．沒有煙花，過春節(jié)更無趣3．……你的觀點(diǎn)……(自擬至少兩個觀點(diǎn))Dear Major,We have had a discussion about whether to let off fireworks at Spring Festival. All the students in our class give the ideas. 【答案】Most of the students don’t agree to let off fireworks at Spring Festival. They think fireworks produce so much smoke that it can cause serious air pollution. What’s more, people like letting them off at midnight, it is always so noisy outside that many people can’t sleep well. Also, it may cause big fire if people aren’t careful enough. Some children like playing with fireworks, so it’s dangerous for their eyes. If we don’t let off fireworks, cleaners don’t need to clean up so much rubbish everywhere.On the other hand, some students don’t agree. They think Chinese people have been used to letting off fireworks since hundreds years ago. Moreover, Chinese traditional culture is missing. We should protect it. People will feel less interested than before without fireworks.I think we should follow the rule because good environment is more important