【正文】 注意：；，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；，郵件的開頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。My Happiness After reading Guo Mingyi’s “Happiness Is So Simple”, I am deeply moved by his view on happiness. As for me,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Happiness is important in our life. In fact, happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it.I will never forget one thing. Once, I had a bad mark at a math test. I was shy and afraid to meet my parents. But when I got back home late, my parents knew what happened, they said to me: “It doesn’t matter, my child. Remember we’ll be always beside you when you need help. We believe you can be better next time. Never give up!” I was moved and made up my mind to work harder and harder.I feel happy. Whenever I am in trouble, I can feel my parents’ love. I want to be a good child for my parents.【解析】【詳解】幸福就圍繞在我們身邊，簡單得觸手可得，平凡得召之即來，這篇作文要求寫一寫自己的幸福觀，描述自己對于幸福的定義，描述一件到幸福的事，最后談?wù)剳?yīng)該如何創(chuàng)造幸福，要注意敘述流暢，在描述過去的幸福往事的時候要注意正確使用時態(tài)，可以使用到的短語表達(dá)有：happiness is always around you 幸福總在你身邊；put your heart into it 把你的心投入其中；had a bad mark at a math test 數(shù)學(xué)考試成績很差；afraid to meet my parents 害怕見家長；got back home late 回家晚；be always beside you一直在你身旁；need help需要幫助；Never give up永不放棄；made up my mind to下定決心去做…；in trouble有困難。那你的幸福觀又是什么 呢？請以 My Happiness 為題寫一篇短文。此處according to, in memory of, a kind of, on the day, wele to do sth, all over the world等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。15．（其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，作者根據(jù)表達(dá)需要使用了一般過去時、一般將來時態(tài)和一般將來時態(tài)，動詞形式變化準(zhǔn)確，語法規(guī)范。寫作時，應(yīng)注意英語句式表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句子的整體考慮，寫完整的句子，利用簡單句的基本句型，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語。題目中列出了三個要點，我們應(yīng)根據(jù)這些要點提示，來組織語言，充實內(nèi)容。請你按照以下提示給他回一封。分條逐一闡明理由并提出合理的相關(guān)建議。Can Teenagers Take a Trip Alone?Nowadays, there is a message on the Trouble Wall attracting most of the students’ attention.______________________________________________________________________________【答案】Can Teenagers Take a Trip Alone?Nowadays, there is a message on the Trouble Wall attracting most of the students’ attention. The summer vacation is ing, and we hope to take a trip alone, but our parents don’t allowed us to do that, what should we do then? I like to travel to different places with my friends, so in my opinion, teenagers should be allowed to travel by ourselves. Here are my reasons.Firstly, we can see the beautiful scenery and get to know the different cultures. Secondly, our parents are too busy, so it’s difficult for them to acpany us all the time, we have to learn to look after ourselves. Traveling is a good way to train our selfcare capacity. But we need to get ready to deal with something unusual that may happen during the trip. But considering the safety, we must make plans in advance. Take notes of some important selfhelp knowledge. All in all, traveling alone is good.【解析】【分析】這是一篇話題議論文。我們，可以獨(dú)自出游么？”這是本月我校英語“煩惱墻”上最令人關(guān)注的內(nèi)容，并引發(fā)了大家的熱烈討論。另外，寫作時，還需注意語句間的銜接，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢?？忌紫纫喿x前面的提示去認(rèn)真審題，確定出文章的中心，用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)來表達(dá)。請你根據(jù)要求談?wù)剬ψ约旱目捶ǎ?. 手機(jī)的正面作用；2. 手機(jī)給人們帶來的煩惱；3. 如何防止成為“手機(jī)控”。最后短文中使用了一些較好的句型和短語，如In fact, they think that more and more people will take part in the environmental protection and our government will take more measures to improve our environment．、As a result、However、hey say a number of trees will be cut down and there will be more and more private cars.、Therefore, we will have even more environmental problems and live in a world with less energy available．、But in my opinion, I think we will find ways to solve our problems and everyone will live more happily等。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目中要求的所有信息，并根據(jù)表達(dá)的需要，進(jìn)行了合理的想象和補(bǔ)充，使文意更加的充實。題目中用表格的形式給我們呈現(xiàn)了這些內(nèi)容，我們需要用正確的英語將他們表達(dá)出來，首先我們應(yīng)注意英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語的不同，不能逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句子的整體考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)木湫?、詞匯和短語，以簡單句的結(jié)構(gòu)為主，如主謂賓、主系表等，點綴幾個并列句或復(fù)合句，提升文章檔次。請根據(jù)表格中的內(nèi)容提示，用英語寫一篇短文。句型：By doing so, our world will bee more and more beautiful；we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勆钪心阍撛趺醋觯约斑@樣做的意義。10．（其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，文章第一段引出主題，使用了一般現(xiàn)在時；第二段回憶過去的生活，主要使用了一般過去時；最后對未來提出希望，用到了一般將來時?！军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，回憶了自己的初中生活，并描述了自己的感受。其次應(yīng)注意英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯。題目中用思維導(dǎo)圖，列出了一些文章中會用到的關(guān)鍵詞，供學(xué)生們參考使用。首句已給出。此處on one’s way, see sb doing sth, at that time, without doing sth, offer to do sth, learn from等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。:80100。,不敢獨(dú)自穿過十字路口。8．（接下來說出自己對此事件的看法，不信守承諾會導(dǎo)致失去別人的信任，對大明的建議是除了認(rèn)錯之外，還需要再次保證永不再犯。The Importance of PromiseDear editor,People always emphasize（強(qiáng)調(diào)） the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise. Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it. Yours,Tony【答案】The Importance of PromiseDear editor,People always emphasize（強(qiáng)調(diào)）the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise.Recently, a thing happened to my friend, and I think it was really his fault. Last weekend, my friend Daming had a date with his friend Lingling to watch a movie. But he totally forgot it that day because of his review for his exam. So Lingling got too angry to forgive him. In my opinion, it was really his fault. Forgetting the date not only led to Lingling’s anger, but also made her lose trust in him. Keeping promises is always the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation. What Daming should do now is to ask for forgiveness and promise that he will never do that again.Promise is very important. Everyone should kee