【正文】 注意過渡性語言的使用。注意文體、人稱和時態(tài)。還應使用一些較好的句型或者短語，增強文章的表現(xiàn)力。首先應注意在短文中要包括題目中給出的所有信息，不能遺漏要點，并注意表達的層次和條理?！军c睛】本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。11．G解析：My junior high school lifeMy name is Tony. I am studying in Grade time goes by, my colorful junior middle school life is ing to an end. I’m glad to tell you something about my school life. Our campus is clean and beautiful, and there are all kinds of activities. Our teachers teach us rich knowledge and how to behave ourselves. They also encourage us to work hard. We all get on well with our classmates. Besides, we learn from each other and make progress together. I thanks for my school, my teachers and my classmates. Wish them better.【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我的初中生活。根據(jù)內容提示可知本文會用一般過去時態(tài)和一般將來時態(tài)，注意一些常見句式的應用。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。構思提綱。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如get good results, spend+時間+on sth, be strict with, however, care for, as well, once upon a time, help sb do, cheer up, be ready to, tell sb to do, try one’s best to do, be full of以及it is adj to do sth等，增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c睛】點睛：首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時可適當運用表示轉折、因果、并列、比較等關系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標點符號誤用等，還要檢查語法結構是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并可適當發(fā)揮。6．D解析：Dear Editorial Office,I am writing to remend as The Most Popular Teacher．She is Miss Zhang.She is my English teacher． She is in her forties． Her small round glasses make her look smart． She often works to high standards and is willing to work extra hours． She is kind and helpful， too． She always helps us with our study． She loves jogging， so she looks healthy． To my surprise， she has donated blood many times since 2001． She has also decided to donate her body for medical research after her death． I really love her and I want to be a teacher like her in the future． I think Miss Zhang is the most suitable person to be the Most Popular Teacher．I hope that you agree with me． Yours sincerely，Beth,【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇給材料作文。英語作文一般分為三個部分：第一部分：交代寫信目的——朋友Jack熱愛中國的唐詩宋詞。5．D解析：Dear Jack,I’m glad to hear from you. I know you are interested in this poem Song of the parting son. Now I’m writing to tell you something about it.Song of the parting son is one of the most popular Chinese poems. It was written by Meng Jiao, a famous poet in Tang Dynasty. It describes a mon matter in daily life—a mother making clothes for her son, which is familiar to most of us. It mainly shows how great a mother’s love can be. In a word, this short poem has touched many people’s hearts. If you have any other questions about this poem, please tell me.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】這是一篇材料作文。首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作。s expensive to travel to the UK, which costs 20000 yuan, But I still want to travel to England.I hope I will have a good time there!【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文。在比較的時候，作者用了多種方式，使句子不單調，比如在比較溫度時，直接用比較級“higher”在說旅館時用了“l(fā)ess fortable ”，比較食物時，用了“as…as”等。另外，一定要注意題目要求，把每一個信息都進行比較，不要有漏掉。雖然字數(shù)要求不多，但可以很好地考查考生英語寫作的基本功，需要考生對常用的英語句型熟練掌握。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應用第一，三人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)和過去時態(tài)，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。短文里還使用了一些較好的短語和句型，如In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow.、Now the government takes measures to improve the pollution and the city bees cleaner and cleaner、More and more people have their own cars and live a fortable life、There are thousands of tourists from all over the country every 。然后是家鄉(xiāng)現(xiàn)在的樣子，這里主要以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主。注意句式的多變，長短句結合、簡單句、并列句或復合句穿插使用，提升文章的檔次。題目中用表格的形式，給我們對比的家鄉(xiāng)的過去和現(xiàn)在，我們應用正確的英語將這些內容表達出來，并對將來提出兩點希望。請用英語寫一篇約100詞的短文。你馬上就要畢業(yè)了，在初中的學習和生活中你一定有很多收獲，請給學弟學妹們提幾點建議吧！要求：1. 內容完整，語言流暢，書寫規(guī)范清晰。The survey shows that many students have bee shortsighted at a very young age. At present,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________18．書面表達假設你是某英文報紙“Teenagers”欄目的編輯Betty，日前收到了Lucy的來信。請根據(jù)下表所提示的內容，用英語寫一篇短文，并發(fā)表自己的觀點。 I’m the mother of a fourteenyear –old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ? 寫作要點：1. 表明自己的看法。請認真閱讀下面的郵件, 根據(jù)信中的內容和你的實際情況給他寫封回信。給別人帶來快樂,自己也快樂。學會對自己微笑面對困難與煩惱學會微笑（考試失利、被別人誤解等）。請你用英語寫一篇關于學生網(wǎng)上交友的短文，介紹人們不同的觀點，并表達自己的看法。12．　　近年來霧霾天氣在中國許多城市頻頻發(fā)生。提示：（校園干凈而美麗，活動非富多彩）；老師（傳授知識，教會做人,經常鼓勵）；同學（和睦相處，互相學習，共同進步）。語言連貫、通順。請以My Unforgettable Middle School Life為題，根據(jù)下面的思維導圖，寫一篇短文介紹自己難忘的校園生活并描述對未來的期盼。參考詞匯：梅西 MessiDear classmates,I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 footballthemed schools by 2020. Thank you for your attention.9．目前，許多中學生不重視課外閱讀。Hello!Dear Amy, thank you for caring.Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Li Ming8．書面表達為了配合“足球進校園”活動，你們班開展了一次主題班會。他們希望你們實現(xiàn)自己的理想。要點如下： （1）. 雖然你大部分功課你都學得比較好，但是你對自己不滿意。為此，編輯部策劃開“A Letter to My Teacher”專欄，邀請你以信件的形式重新投稿。The summer holiday is ing. I think it’s a good idea to travel abroad.