【正文】 Subject The Civilized City, the Healthy LifeWays of doing ride bikes, reduce air pollution, throw rubbish into the bins, keep the city clean, plant more trees,…Your opinion……(至少2條)注意：(1)詞數(shù)80100左右，短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；(2)文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校及自己的姓名。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。構(gòu)思提綱。增強邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。家規(guī)是中華民族傳統(tǒng)文化的重要組成部分。+形容詞+should、in【點睛】這篇短文涵蓋了題目要求的所有要點內(nèi)容，表達準確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。內(nèi)容提示：：遵守交通規(guī)則，不闖紅綠燈等；：吃健康食物，不吃垃圾食品等；：進行體育鍛煉時，不要弄傷自己，不私自下河游泳等?！军c睛】點睛：首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時可適當(dāng)運用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標(biāo)點符號誤用等，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Editorial Office,I am writing to remend as The Most Popular Teacher．She is Miss Zhang.She is my English teacher． She is in her forties． Her small round glasses make her look smart． She often works to high standards and is willing to work extra hours． She is kind and helpful， too． She always helps us with our study． She loves jogging， so she looks healthy． To my surprise， she has donated blood many times since 2001． She has also decided to donate her body for medical research after her death． I really love her and I want to be a teacher like her in the future． I think Miss Zhang is the most suitable person to be the Most Popular Teacher．I hope that you agree with me． Yours sincerely，Beth,【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇給材料作文。近日，又至畢業(yè)季，師生們忙著互致臨別贈言。為了實現(xiàn)自己的夢想，正在為此作出努力。Dear Bill,Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【答案】例文Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. Teaching is my dream job because I would like to share my knowledge with my students and help them solve problems. I am outgoing and helpful. I get on well with children. Besides, the school39。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體。m really looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerelyLi Ming【答案】Dear Ms. Yang,I would like to be sunshine I am good at both English and I am sure I can teach exchange students Chinese am also helpful and I am always ready to help those in ,I am patient enough everything in have such a good knowledge of the Chinese culture that can help them know the beauty of can make good plans for their trips because I know Nanjing am outgoing and I think it’s easy for me to make friends with them,I am free from 4:. to 5:. on can teach them Chinese during this can also spend the whole Sunday morning showing them around Nanjing.I will be very happy if I am chosen to be a really looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Ming【解析】【分析】這篇書面表達是寫一封作學(xué)?！瓣柟庵驹刚摺钡淖运]信。為了讓他們更好地在南京學(xué)習(xí)生活，校學(xué)生會面向全體學(xué)生招募“陽光志愿者”。例文點評：例文采用的是一段式，寫的是閱讀的好處，時態(tài)采用的是一般現(xiàn)在時，描述倡議時，描寫細致，條理清晰。3．4月23日是“世界讀書日”，你校英語俱樂部正在開展主題為“多讀書，讀好書”的活動。學(xué)生除了要把所給要點提示都表達出來外，還要進行適當(dāng)拓展，使文章內(nèi)容充實。t w 6 about it. Try to be at the dinner table. You can watch other people and f 7 them. When you still have no idea of what to do, ask the person next to you. If you like the food, you should say what you think of it. Of course, you will thank the hostess and host for the meal, and say goodbye to them. Usually a thankyou card is n 8 after the party.1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. 參考答案Ⅰ. 15 CBDCB 610 BDBBC 1115 ACBCD 1620 CBACB Ⅱ. 1. are written 2. is spoken 3. is visited 4. was set 5. was used 6. must be finished 7. will be bought 8. will be awarded 9. must be taken 10. should be praised 11. is produced 12. will be sung 13. needn’t be done 14. was sent to 15. was given 16. Was built 17. Will be put 18. Are made by him 19. Was broken by him 20. is cleaned 12. will be sung 13. needn’t be done 14. was sent to 15. was given 16. Was built 17. Will be put 18. Are made by him 19. Was broken by him 20. is cleaned Ⅲ. 1. arrived 2. ar二、英語書面表達專項訓(xùn)練2． 中國傳統(tǒng)文化源遠流長，代代相傳。t do it now.It _______________ _______________ _______________ by you now.14. Lucy sent me a New Year Card last week.A New Year Card ________________ _______________ ______________ me last week.15. I gave this book to the library.This book ________________ _______________ to the library.16. Did they build a bridge here a year ago? a bridge here by them a year ago?17. Will you put on an English play in our school? an English play_______________ ______________ on in our school?18. Does he often make model planes ? model planes often_______________ ______________ ______________?19. Did he break the window yesterday ? the window______________ _______________ ________________yesterday ?20. We clean the classroom every day.The classroom______________ ______________ every day.Ⅲ. Fill in