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最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查,確保正確無(wú)誤。文章時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),人稱(chēng)主要用第一、第三人稱(chēng)。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外,還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言,大小寫(xiě)是否正確,格式是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。有了提綱,我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫(xiě)作材料?!军c(diǎn)睛】寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起:認(rèn)真審題。Last Friday,we had a reading party, which was held on Friday in our reading room. Then we are going to hold an activity to share the feeling with others at 3:00 on Friday afternoon. All of us are fond of buying books on the Internet. We are going to buy some books on the Internet next month. As far as I am concerned, on the one hand, the books on the Internet are cheaper than those in the bookstore. On the other hand, there are all kinds of books, so we needn’t go from one bookstore to another .Best wishes!Yours,Cathy【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文,向外教介紹俱樂(lè)部中讀書(shū)交流會(huì)的活動(dòng),并且告訴外教同學(xué)們現(xiàn)在喜歡網(wǎng)購(gòu)圖書(shū)并闡述網(wǎng)購(gòu)圖書(shū)的好處。2可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié),使內(nèi)容充實(shí),行文連貫。(2)本周五的下午3點(diǎn),大家將共同交流讀書(shū)的體會(huì)。俱樂(lè)部的同學(xué)們很喜歡網(wǎng)購(gòu)圖書(shū)這種便捷的方式,并打算在本周五交流讀書(shū)后的感受?!驹斀狻窟@是一篇給材料作文,介紹畢業(yè)典禮活動(dòng)計(jì)劃。 ,開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾己給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。8.書(shū)面表達(dá)初中就要畢業(yè)了,校報(bào)“英語(yǔ)角”欄目向同學(xué)們征集畢業(yè)晚會(huì)的計(jì)劃。文章最后的兩句話也點(diǎn)明了文章的主題。點(diǎn)睛:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意按照事情發(fā)展的先后順序,這樣可以使文章條理清楚。最后玩具的意義得到了升華,表達(dá)了作者的期望(I hope I can be a soldier),上升到了保家衛(wèi)國(guó)的層面,這樣的一篇作文是有深度的,能夠讓人感動(dòng)的,是一篇優(yōu)秀的范文。A(n) _________ I have__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】A(n) toy gun I haveEveryone has an object that she/ he like best. So do I.In my drawer, there is a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth. It’s a black toy gun and it can shot some small plastic pills for ten meters. When I was young, I played with other kids with my toy gun. They all admired me and put me in the place of leader. I was so happy then. When I was a little boy, I liked watching the war movies best. I was eager to have my own toy gun. One day, it was my birthday. I asked for it when my father came back. My family was poor then and my father didn’t promise me. From then, father worked harder and came back more lately. A week later, father put a box to me. A black toy gun in it! I was moved with tears. In order to get it, father worked late and hurt himself. He died a month later.Now I hope I can be a soldier and own a real gun to protect my country and family. I will remember my father’s love forever. Every time I miss him, I’ll take out the toy gun and say “Thank you, my dear father!【解析】寫(xiě)作分析:這篇作文需要就自己最喜歡的物品展開(kāi)描述,要求是進(jìn)行描述,并談?wù)勀闶侨绾蔚玫剿模约八嬖诘囊饬x。還要注意句子的關(guān)聯(lián)。參考詞匯: 對(duì)某人微笑 smile at sb. 誤解 misunderstand短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn),不要逐字翻譯,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使短文連貫通順。有益于身心健康。m sure that nothing can beat me and I will win!等等。其次短文使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱(chēng),短文主要使用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí),動(dòng)詞形式變化準(zhǔn)確,尤其注意了不規(guī)則動(dòng)詞的過(guò)去式形式,語(yǔ)法規(guī)范,用詞準(zhǔn)確?!军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,短文作者根據(jù)題目要求,寫(xiě)了一篇演講稿。其次要注意英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)是不同的,不能按照漢語(yǔ)思維,逐詞翻譯。題目中用問(wèn)題的形式給出了提示,審題可知,文章應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容:首先敘述你生活中遇到的一件困難的事;然后介紹你是如何克服了這個(gè)困難,最后取得成功的;最后說(shuō)一下你自己的感受。(3)詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右(開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出, 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。所以,考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn),要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式,盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。而to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees./ What39。;;;;(自主發(fā)揮,至少兩點(diǎn))參考詞匯: civilized 文明的 make joint efforts 共同努力 obey 遵守【答案】Since creating the civilized city and countryside, all the people in Zibo have made joint efforts(共同努力). Their good behavior can be seen everywhere.As junior students, we have also made some contributions to the civilized Zibo. Forexample, to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees. Also, for our own and others’ safety, we obey the traffic rules and never run red light. In addition(此外), we no