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3 、保護文物古跡,不到處亂涂亂刻,不攀爬觸摸文物。直接影響著中國“禮儀之邦”之形象。要注意準確運用時態(tài),語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句;盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。參考詞匯:method club. n 社團 colorful Wele to our school! 【答案】Wele to our school!I will graduate from my school. Therefore I’d like to share something with you. Firstly,because of many subjects in middle school, it is important for you to have your own study methods. In order to be better at study, you must do more exercise to keep healthy. Secondly, you can join in some club activities to make school life more colorful in your spare time. In other words, please keep balance between school life and study. In addition, it is a good choice to make more friends and read more books. At last, if you have problems in school life, please talk with your teachers or parents. They are always there waiting for you. I hope you will have a wonderful school life.【解析】本文是一篇給材料作文。 內(nèi)容要點如下:,好的學習方法很重要;,保持健康;,使學校生活豐富;,多交朋友;。[高分句型二]Staying with your family is just like being with my own family, which reminds me of the saying, “East or west, home is best.” 住在您們家里就像住在我自己的家里一樣,這讓我想起了一句話:“天下之大, 家最美好。文章可分為三段,第一段表明寫信的目的;第二段分析感謝的具體原因;第三段寫出你在住家媽媽Sarah家里的感受。英語作文,要忠實于材料,不必擴展,注意用好連詞,多用非謂語,慎用較難的句型,一定不能寫錯句。動筆前先要認真閱讀要點,圍繞要點組織材料,然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達出來,在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當發(fā)揮,注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。) 每一個生命個體都和這個世界發(fā)生著聯(lián)系,你也不例外。文章中以簡單句為主,也使用了并列句和復(fù)合句,調(diào)整文章結(jié)構(gòu),使用復(fù)雜句型、短文和較高級的句型,提升了文章的檔次。作者根據(jù)題目要求就如何創(chuàng)建和諧班級發(fā)表了自己的看法。另外一個難點是使用正確的英語將自己的所想表達出來,英語的表達習慣和漢語是不同的,寫作時,不能逐詞去翻譯,而應(yīng)從文章、句子的整體考慮,首先確定這篇短文使用什么人稱、時態(tài)來敘述;可能用到哪些詞匯、短語和句型,每個句子應(yīng)以簡單句為基礎(chǔ),如主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)或主系表結(jié)構(gòu),然后再變化成較高級、復(fù)雜是句型,如復(fù)合句、非謂語動詞形式等。提示詞語: important, respect, trust, help提示問題: ● Why should we build a harmonious class?● As a member of a class, what do you usually do?● What else do you need to do?We should build a harmonious class because ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】We should build a harmonious class, because it’s important for us to grow up happily.As a member of the class, I respect and trust my teachers and classmates. When I have someproblems, I always talk to them and listen to their advice. When some of my classmates are sad,I’m always ready to give a hand and cheer them up.Of course, there is more that I should do. I’m really good at English, but some of myclassmates aren’t. I will help them. Then we’ll make progress together.【解析】這篇作文給出的寫作背景是:你們學校英文報刊在以Building a Harmonious Class為題征文,你來為??陡?,談一談如何創(chuàng)建一個和諧的班集體、你通常是怎么做的以及你還需要做什么。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。s our duty to help our parents do some housework. So you can help my parents wash the dishes, clean the room and make the bed. I hope you can take care of yourself and your family by doing housework.Of course, if you like, I will teach you how to cook delicious dishes.Love,Amy【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語,為文章增色不少,如be glad to,hear from,unlike in the West,on the table,a sign of,help sb. do,do some housework,wash the dishes,clean the room,make the bed,take care of,how to do等。所以,考生不能遺漏要點,要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分數(shù)。而She often wears a pair of small round glasses, so she looks very smart./ When I am sad, she always cares about me and listens to my problems carefully./ She said she would like to be a volunteer to help more people when she grows ,豐富了短文內(nèi)容,使表達多樣化,是本文的亮點。當我憂傷時,她總是關(guān)心我,而且仔細傾聽我的問題,……。要求條理清楚,語句通順,可做適當發(fā)揮。開頭介紹了作為中學生,獨立很重要,接下來介紹我們應(yīng)如何培養(yǎng)自己的獨立能力,最后指出不要總是依靠其他人。s very important for us to……, It’s our job to……, We can….., We should……, We sometimes need to……等句式的應(yīng)用。s very important for us to independent. What should we do to makeus independent?___________________________________________________________________【答案】As middle school students, it39。11.(另外,可以用到first, second, third, finally 等一一列出觀點,使文章更有條理,次序。開頭已給出,但不計入總詞數(shù)。 get more knowledge。你校校園網(wǎng)就你們學校開設(shè)此類課程的必要性廣泛征求同學們的意見。亮點說明:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù),語言表達符合英語習慣,準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致,特別使用一些亮點詞句,如be kind to, each other, be in trouble, give a hand, try one’s best to do, take care of, get on well with, help sb with等。主要內(nèi)容包括:你對友善行為的認識和理解,你平時做哪些友善的事情,以及你這樣做的美好愿望。北京中考模擬)“友善”是一種美德,它猶如陽光和雨露照耀并滋潤著美德的形成。第二部分:文章主體——呼吁大家保護環(huán)境。英語作文一般分為三個部分:第一部分:開篇點題——描述圖片內(nèi)容。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】I can see a boy and a girl in the picture. They are ing back from school. On their way home, they find so much rubbish outside the dustbin and decide to put it into the dustbin. The boy also es up with an idea. He puts up a sign on the dustbin to remind people of protecting the environment. The city is our home. We should protect it. Therefore, when we see someone litter, we should stop them and pick up the rubbish. The environment should be protected by everybody. We should be civilized citizens.【解析】【分析】本文是一篇看圖作文。8.(It is very important for us to have a lifelong learning 。They also believe that寫完后反復(fù)閱讀修改推敲潤色,人稱、時態(tài)、單復(fù)數(shù)一致等。第四段要表述作者自己的觀點。Nowadays, many middle school students are taking all kinds of afterschool classes at weekends or on holidays. There are two different opinions about it.Some people think that_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________