【正文】 1 2 34 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】We had a class meeting and decided to go on a trip on the mountain on Sunday. We set off by bus at seven o’clock in the morning, and we got to the mountain at 8:00 . We felt very excited and began to climb the mountain. When we got to the top, we found a lot of rubbish there. So we picked them up with our bags and put them into dustbins. After about two hours, we cleaned there and made the mountain more beautiful. We were all tired but happy.【解析】【分析】這是一篇看圖作文，介紹我們?cè)谝淮闻郎竭^(guò)程中保護(hù)環(huán)境，撿拾垃圾。短文中使用了較豐富的句型和短語(yǔ)，如They pete for the first and cheer for the winner.、The student who jumps farthest must share the experience with his classmates.、Though the ball is very heavy, they throw balls again and again until they are satisfied with the result.、I think exercising is very useful to them.、Second, if they do sports every day, they will be healthier than 。第二段中發(fā)表了自己的感想，升華了文章的主題?？梢院?jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，穿插使用并列句和復(fù)合句，調(diào)整文章節(jié)奏，提升文章檔次。文章可以分兩段，第一段介紹圖片內(nèi)容，第二段談?wù)撟约旱南敕?。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。參考詞匯：智能手機(jī)smartphone；掃碼scan the QR code；交通工具a means of transportation。安徽中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)共享單車(chē)為我們的生活帶來(lái)了極大的便利。修改潤(rùn)色。初寫(xiě)短文。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如want sb to do, be allowed to do, in my free time, be strict with, decide to do, municate with, as much as possible, share...with..., help sb do, be busy with以及get on well with。（3）你決定與父母多交流，為父母做些家務(wù)。此外文章使用了一些主從復(fù)合句，使得文章上下文邏輯關(guān)系更加合理。 be happy with。短文首句：In order to know more about the ideas of students on their future jobs，we made a survey in our class．【答案】In order to know more about the ideas of students on their future jobs, we made a survey in our class. Here are the results. 45% of the students would like to bee businessmen in the future. Because they think if they are rich, they can buy whatever they want. 28% choose to be teachers. They can not only teach students much knowledge, but also feel happy with them. 20% hope to be doctors. In their hearts, doctors can cure sick patients as well as saving people39。12．（【答案】I’d Like to Say “Sorry” to My TeacherHow time flies! I will graduate in a few months. I always feel sorry for one thing in my heart. I’d like to say sorry to my English teacher, Mrs. Chen.When I began to learn English, I hated remembering new words. So I wasn’t good at English. Once I copied my deskmate’s paper during an English exam and handed it in. I got an “A”. Mrs. Chen didn’t know the truth and praised me in class. Now I still remember her words clearly, “ It’s a good beginning. I believe you will be better and better.” When I heard these words, I really felt regretful in my heart. I decided to tell Mrs. Chen the truth and say “sorry” to her after class. But I didn’t.Since then, I have tried my best to learn English well. And my English is being better and better. But I’d like to say sincerely. “ Sorry, Mrs. Chen.”【解析】這是一篇要求介紹你三年的初中學(xué)習(xí)和生活。11．（內(nèi)容包括：學(xué)生近視原因：（not enough）、做作業(yè)、用電腦等（for a long time）防止近視的方法：，多進(jìn)行體育活動(dòng)（eye exercises）（have the good habit of）個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)：如：我認(rèn)為，我們應(yīng)該了解保護(hù)眼睛的重要性，盡最大努力保護(hù)我們的眼睛。（2）開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。10．（：通過(guò)增加狀語(yǔ)，定語(yǔ)，連詞，使句子意思飽滿充實(shí)。注意書(shū)寫(xiě)的規(guī)范：大小寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)等的正確運(yùn)用。我們豐富多彩的學(xué)校生活帶給我們?nèi)绱硕嗟男腋?，我們將永遠(yuǎn)記住這些日子。在老師的幫助下，她努力工作，在周三下午的英語(yǔ)演講比賽中獲得了第一名。寫(xiě)完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤（時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致等）。本文人稱(chēng)主要是第一和第三人稱(chēng)，使用的時(shí)態(tài)有一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、一般過(guò)去時(shí)、現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)，一定注意時(shí)態(tài)的轉(zhuǎn)換。天津中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)假定你今天是英語(yǔ)課上的值日生，請(qǐng)根據(jù)表中信息完成主題為“班級(jí)新聞”的值日?qǐng)?bào)告。如果是可有可無(wú)的細(xì)節(jié)，則可視具體情況進(jìn)行增刪。4. 列出要點(diǎn)，組織語(yǔ)言在認(rèn)真審題、弄清題意的基礎(chǔ)上，我們應(yīng)逐個(gè)完整無(wú)誤地把內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)列出來(lái)，我們可以在每幅圖畫(huà)的旁邊用簡(jiǎn)單的詞語(yǔ)標(biāo)出其所表達(dá)的要點(diǎn)，這樣，既可以提醒自己不要漏寫(xiě)了要點(diǎn)，又能防止過(guò)分發(fā)揮。從寫(xiě)作體裁上看，可說(shuō)明介紹，可敘事記人、可寫(xiě)景狀物，也可以發(fā)表議論?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縏he doctor looked him over carefully and he had to stay in hospital for a few days. 醫(yī)生仔細(xì)地檢查了他，他不得不住院幾天。注意作文中必須包含圖片上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。圖片顯示的內(nèi)容是：圖一，打籃球；圖二，有一個(gè)學(xué)生摔倒了，腿受傷了；圖三，同學(xué)們趕忙送他去醫(yī)院。本題是由and 連接的句子。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，避免使用漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語(yǔ)。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Build a harmonious societyBuilding a “harmonious society” plays an important part in achieving Chinese Dreams. As middle school students, what should we do?First of all, we should love our motherland. Let’s take a great interest in the development of our hometowns and take an active part in our school’s activities. Secondly, let’s fill the world with love. We should show our respect for old people, our parents and our teachers. We should also care for each other and help those in need. Finally, let’s work together to save energy and protect our environment, including animals, trees, flowers and grass.Let’s start right now and try our best a little bit every day, every hour, and every minute!（B） My friend Li Ming had an accident yesterday.When school was over, Li Ming went to play basketball with his classmates on the playground. They played very happily. Suddenly, Li Ming fell down and hurt his legs. He couldn’t help crying. His classmates hurried to take him to the hospital. The doctor looked him over carefully and he had to stay in hospital for a few days. His