【正文】 ol, and have a better life!五、網(wǎng)上購物Shopping Online With the help of the Internet, shopping is not a difficult click your mouse to choose the article you like, and the shopping is needn39。t step out of the seems easy and there39。s always a trap（陷阱） you are careless, it will bring you some may find the color of the article is different from what you want, or the size is either too small or too you want to be different, you39。d better not buy clothes you put on the clothes you bought online and go out, you will students think that it is easy to use them to keep in touch with parents and , they can be used to listen to music or take others think that Ywe don’t need to talk with parents and classmates with mobile phones, because we meet them every mobile phones may influence our my opinion, it’s not wrong to follow the fashion, but the most important thing is how to use the mobile phone in a right truly, Wang Lin七、與父母相處的話題：這類作文難度較大，掌握基本句式，背誦范文非常必要。假如你是Han Mei, 下面是一封你的筆友Alice 給你發(fā)來的,請你根據(jù) 的內(nèi)容給她寫一封回信，與她交流看法，并幫她排憂解難。提示詞語：listen to, mother39。s love, care about, municate with, get along with, smile 寫作要求：，書寫工整；，也可以適當發(fā)揮；Dear Han Mei，I39。m afraid I39。ve got a big problem mother talks too much to always tells me, “Be careful while crossing the street.” “Put on more clothes.” “Did you do a good job at school?” and so 39。m annoyed(煩惱)。What shall I do?Alice例文：Dear Alice，As a teenager, I met the same problem as now I can get along better with my are some ideas for mother talks much, because she cares about it39。s not a good way, but it shows your mother39。s I think you should listen to your opinions aredifferent from your mother39。s, you can municate with her, and tell her what you are I39。m going to study in Canada, so I39。ll have to find a room to live know housing is very thinking help me find a room at a lower price(about 150 dollars).Please If your mother doesn39。t take your advice, just keep silent and give her a hope me if you have any good am looking forward to seeing you I say here can help you a 八、應(yīng)用文：Li Ming Yours（一）. Han Mei例1：根據(jù)中文大意，寫出意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于80詞的短文。假設(shè)你叫王明，昨天收到了筆友David的，得知他不久要到北京來學習中文。他想了解如何學好中文。請你用英文給他回復(fù)一封，介紹學習中文的體會和方法，提出你的建議，以及表達你幫助他學好中文的愿望。Dear David，I39。m glad you39。ll e to Beijing to learn is very useful, and many foreigners are learning it 39。s difficult for you because it39。s quite different from have to remember as many Chinese words as 39。s also important to do some reading and can watch TV and listen to the radio to practice your your best to talk with people in can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you have any questions, please ask 39。m sure you39。ll learn Chinese to see you soon in Wang Ming 例2：李明要到加拿大上大學，必須找一間住房。請幫他發(fā)一封電子郵件給Jenny, 叫她幫忙找一間較便宜的房間(大約150美元)，因為那里的房租較貴。李明的郵箱是Liming @, Jenny的郵箱是[url=mail to:Jenny@]Jenny@[/url]From: Liming @ To: [url=mailto:Jenny@]Jenny@[/url]Subject: Help Rent a Room Date 30/06 9:04AM Dear Jenny，To: Kayla @hot Cc: NoneSubject: Penpal wanted Hello, Kayla，I’m am 15 years ’m glad to know that you would like to have a also want to find a penpal from the I’m free, I like to listen to the music, go hiking and play ’m good at English and can learn from each otherand be good hope to hear from you （二）.明信片：Jenny正在北京玩，她昨天去參觀長城，很快樂。她要把長城介紹給她的父母，長城大約6500公里長，用大石頭在大山上建成的，她很高興自己成為一個真正的好漢。請幫她寫一份明信片，上面有一張長城的圖片。時間是2月4日，星期四。地址是加拿大阿爾伯特省艾得蒙頓市公園路522號。Thursday, February 4thDear Mom and Dad, We are having fun in I visited the Great is about more than 6500 kilometers is so long and so you know? It is mostly made of big is made at the top of the big is a picture of it for 39。m proud of myself because I have bee a true miss Jenny（三）.發(fā)言稿：在一次英語班會上，老師請同學們以“Proud of My School”為主題發(fā)言。請根據(jù)下面所給的提示寫一篇發(fā)言稿。字數(shù)要求在80～100詞之間。文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、地名。提示：①What does your school look like？②What fun do you have at school？③Why do you like your school？Proud of My School My school is very big with several tall are over 1，000 students in my have a big playground, a big soccer court and two basketball 這個錯誤也正是急功近利的學生容易犯的。所以只背誦模板是不行的。那么針對這些易犯錯誤，該如何改進，提高寫作分數(shù)呢？1端正心態(tài)，保持認真的態(tài)度，強化英語基本功。作為一個考生，首先應(yīng)該有端正的考試心態(tài)，答題一定要非常認真仔細，那么對于寫作來說，就應(yīng)該盡量避免我們常說的“低級錯誤”，比如：拼寫錯誤，單詞使用錯誤。這只有在平時注意積累，注意改正自己的錯誤，才會避免低級錯誤，才會are lots of trees around our have lots of fun at class we play games and do lots of sports, like a big teachers in my school are as kind to us as our feel proud of my school because it is one of the best schools in my Our School Clean為主題的英語班會，請以班長的身份準備一篇70詞左右的發(fā)言稿。提示：不隨地吐痰，不亂扔垃圾，不在墻壁上亂涂亂畫，每天保持教室內(nèi)外清潔等(不要逐句翻譯)Good afternoon, everyone!We39。re studying in this 39。s our duty to keep it clean and 39。s not polite to spit in public places, such as in the library, in the should neither draw pictures on the walls nor throw any litter onto the think we must make it a rule to do some cleaning every everyone tries his best to do something useful for our school will be more 39。s you!附 易犯錯誤一：模板中的句型套用不正確，不完整。比如：我們在書信結(jié)尾的時候會說I am looking forward to hearing from am looked forward to hear from you。這種現(xiàn)象非常普遍，可見，學生的寫作態(tài)度并不是很端正，很認真。易犯錯誤二：模板中的句型和實際寫作內(nèi)容不匹配。比如：有的圖畫作文第二段要求根據(jù)圖畫所表達的含義進行深層次的論證，而學生套用的句型卻是第二段寫對比的句型，顯然是沒有正確理解句型使用的語言背景。再比如：小作文的摘要，是要根據(jù)漢語文章歸納出中心內(nèi)容進行英語寫作，這個一般都是客觀的描述，而學生卻用了一個寫圖畫作文的模板，通篇都是“我”認為，這如何又能得高分呢？易犯錯誤三：模板套用千篇一律，沒有新意。再好的模板，如果所有的學生都是用也就變成了一張白紙，沒有任何亮點。而運用正確的語法結(jié)構(gòu)。2重視動筆之前的審題和構(gòu)思。動筆之前，一定要認真審題和構(gòu)思，要盡量明確寫作的形式，內(nèi)容，比如，是寫書信，還是通過圖畫表達含義等等，這些要弄明白。然后要注意看寫作要求，這一點至關(guān)重要。比如，圖畫作文的第二段，有的要求用實例證明主題思想，有的要求深化主題，這兩個不同的要求所體現(xiàn)出來的具體內(nèi)容是不一樣的，如果沒有認真審題的話，見題就寫，沒有嚴謹?shù)膶懽魉悸?，很容易造成跑題，偏題，不符題意的錯誤，也就不能使模板中的句型和內(nèi)容相匹配。3學會活用模板，注重素材的積累，同時要適當加入自己的內(nèi)容。我們在初練寫作的時候套用模板是正常的事情，也是一個必經(jīng)的過程，只有先試用別人的東西，才能學習和積累寫作素材。模板要活學活用，不要一字不差的照抄無誤，而是要根據(jù)自己所要表達的內(nèi)容進行更改。寫作不一定要字字句句都是難詞，長句，而是要學會運用一些常見詞的常見短語去表達，這樣才能真正顯示寫作的水平。這就要求學生在平時的學習中注意積累常用的短語或者詞組，以備寫作之用。另外，關(guān)于寫作素材，不僅僅指寫作常用的詞匯，句型或者語法結(jié)構(gòu)，還要包括所用的事例。比如：2001年的寫作真題，要求寫“愛心”，第二段要求用實例證明主題。有的考生見題就寫“我考試面臨很大的壓力，我的朋友是如何幫助我排解壓力的”，這顯然就是素材貧乏造成的后果。題目中的“愛心”是指“大愛”，陌生人互幫互助的心態(tài)。如果寫“汶川地震，希望工程”這類事例，顯然非常符合題目要求，而且事例又廣為人知，比寫“朋友如何幫助我”更生