【正文】 o Wuling Mountain, taking us two and a half tell the truth, Wuling Mountain is a really attractive spot, where the scene was beautiful first climbing mountain, I felt excited, and walked fast, only take some pictures now and was a large number of tourists that day, making the path noon, I had a simply lunch, for I took some food with had returned at four o’clock, laughing and but happy, we arrived home safely and I like many swimming is my favorite I am six years old, my parents often took me to a swimming taught me how to swim and told me not be afraid of I became very interesting in I go swim every afternoon in the swimming is really a great you swim in the water, you will feel like a lovely fish, feeling very the way, I took part in the swimming match last week in our I won the match!We had moved house 9 months that we had lived in a same house for 20 nextdoor neighbours have lived in their house even long, so we have known them for the full 20 are a lovely retire couple, Bob and has just gone in hospital because of a serious illness and is not expected took a 2hourround trip to visit her on Sunday in sang some happy songs so told him all our , we couldn’t hold back we hugged and cried together, Jean It was cloudy day with little rain in the stood at the roadside waiting for a taxi while suddenly I felt a voice beside was a boy who was wearing poor felt very disgusted that I tried to pull myself boy kept follow me shouting out “Big brother!Big brother!” and I didn’t answer him at heard him call out again, which makes me I shouted at him that we had no money to , the boy said to me, “Brother, will you please to help me cross the road!” I held the boy’s hand firm and helped him cross the After fill my gas tank I walked in to mother of the girls were digging through her had bought some small snacks for her children but still needed five more dollar to pay for sighed and started to pick out the snacks to put it back.“I got it,” I said and put the money on the Mom turned and looked me with watery sudden she stepped forward and hugged felt the burst of warmth in my Mom let me to go and said, “Thank you.” She smiled, grabbed the snacks and hurry out to her stood there watching them I stare from the window of my hotel older gentleman was helping a young girl as she struggled walk down the ate in the hotel restaurant in that watched as the same young girl continued to get up from the table and reach for her grasped it firmly with both hand, leaning made her way out of the restaurant, I drank me coffee in the hall the next noticed a sign saying “Special Olympics Relays”.Ah, I thought, that mustn’t be what the walking lessons were all On the morning of the Olympics, I felt forcing to watch Elizabeth’s Olympic cheered as she crossed a finish line—the second smiled as she stood on the award platform, and tears slipped down his told the crowd, “I especially want thank my grandpa for believing in me when I have no one else.” I found her said, “Congratulation!” As we talked, she said that she and her parents were hit by a drunken driver at three years was the only smiled but hugged her grandpa.“Everyone gave up hope whether I would walk grandpa was the only one who doesn’t.”Yesterday afternoon, I went back home and found the door to my house the doormat was a pair of shoes were belonging to my got into the house and headed direct to the found her weep tried to ask her why was wrong but she couldn’t , she became much seated her down on the bed and bring her a glass of waters to drink and helped her cool she was stable, she told me the reason of her thought great wrong had done to her.第五篇：經(jīng)典短文改錯(cuò)動(dòng)詞形，名詞數(shù)。還要注意形和副，物ing,修人用ed。遇連詞，必停住，多詞少詞須關(guān)注，介詞冠詞占多數(shù)，固定搭配非謂語，反身代時(shí)主賓同。短文改錯(cuò)錯(cuò)不錯(cuò)，每句至少改一個(gè)。 day is my dad’s afternoon I went to the shopping center downtown, and hesitated for 猶豫(v)a moment,and then offered my seat to old lady thanked me a lot and sat [be] ready to help others in the years ,I travelled to BT and Ia [~ly],I had an accident and hit another car,and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two Iaway,and that my mother would not sleep if she ,I told them stories and how I was enjoying a result,nobody knew[the] still think that it was the righ thing to world is not only hungry,but also 渴的(adj).this may strange,since nearly 70 % of the earth’s surface is covered with and most of the animals can only drink and use the 10% of the waterfresh need for water is day by when steps are taken to deal with this problem immediate [~ly],can we avoid a serve worldwide water shortage短缺(n)later of the first [is]to develop ways to reuse to a water purifying it can be separated from waste matters and treated with 4.[2012唐山is a sick friend,or attend a wedding or[a] birthday still remember one day last year when Tom,a disabled some flowers to his mother to express his life to his mother’s patient was finally admitted to a key university.’ tears in her eyes,she could do nothing butfor li ran “take it easy”he he sent her to a nearby [it] was not long before the girl’ had an 8yearold son named tony,who enjoyed listening to music very he a [for]Tony,hoping that he could bee [a] famous pianist one little boy into the piano day after day and seemd to enjoy if you don’tAttend ，到場(chǎng)，參加bleed ，紗布，絲綢confidence ，信心