【正文】 thismorning‘sjournalforanadjustmentmanagerpromptsmetoofferyoumyqualificationsforthisposition3．(a)havingreadyouradvertisementinthenewyorktimesforanaccountant,ithoughtyoumightbeinterestedinmyapplication.(b)inyouradvertisementforanaccountant,youindicatedthatyourequiretheservicesofapetentperson,withthoroughtraininginthefieldofcostconsidermeanapplicantforthearemyreasonsforbelievingiamqualifiedforthis，可用類似的句子：1．ihesitatetostateadefinitesalary,but,aslongasyouhaverequestedmeto,ishouldconsider6,500amonth，但既然您要我說明，我認為月薪六千五百元就滿意了。2．a(chǎn)lthoughitisdifficultformetosaywhatpensationishoulddeserve,ishouldconsideramonthafairinitial，我以為起薪每月很合理，求職信《怎樣寫英文求職信？》。3．ifeelitispresumptuousofmetostatewhatmysalaryshouldfirstconsiderationistosatisfyyou,whileiamservingmyapprenticeship,ishouldconsideramonthsatisfactory。最初余僅想要如何工作得好，使您滿意。在學(xué)徒（試用）期間，月薪即可。提到待遇時不要過分謙虛或表示歉意，下列句子不宜使用。1．a(chǎn)sforsalary,idonotknowwhatto$4,500amonthbetoomuch?至于起薪，我不知怎么說，月薪四千五百元會不會太多？2．doyouthinkishouldbeaskingtoomuchifisaid5000dollarsamonth?若要求月薪五千元，會不會太高？3．youknowwhatmyservicesareworthbetterthanido.alliwantisaliving。我僅想夠糊口即可。應(yīng)征函或自薦函的結(jié)尾用語，試比較下列各句：1．（a）軟弱、羞怯的：ifyouthinkicanfillthepositionafteryouhavereadmyletter,ishallbegladtotalkwith，敝人愿和您一談。(b)改寫后（較佳）：ifmyapplicationhasconvincedyouofmyabilitytosatisfyyou,ishouldweletheopportunitytotalkwithyou,sothatyoumayjudgemypersonalqualifications．（a）懷疑，不妥、不安全的：ifyou‘reinterested,letmeknowimmediately,asi‘msureandinterviewwillconvinceyoui‘mthemanforthe，請即告知，敝人深信與您面談可以使您相信，敝人適合擔(dān)任此職。（b）改寫后：mayihaveaninterview?youcanreachmebytelephoneattaipei884525betweenthehoursof795:309:？您可在每天上午七至九時，下午五時半至九時電884525號。3．陳腐的句子：hopingyouwillgivemeaninterview,iam……（我希望您惠予面談）anticipatingafavorabledecision,iwaityour……（等候您的佳音）trustingyourreplywillbesatisfactory,iremain(靜候滿意的答復(fù))4．哀求式的句子，不夠完整（漏掉面談時間）：won‘tyoupleasegivemethechancetointerviewyour?icanbereachedbycallingkenmore。請打電話k69781（b）改寫后：mayihavetheopportunitytodiscussthismatterfurtherwithyou?mytelephoneiskenmorecanreachmebetweennineandfiveo‘clockduringthe？我的電話是k69781。我從上午九時到下午五時都可接通。5．太過自信的句子：iamquitecertainthataninterviewwillsubstantiatemystatementsbetweentwoandfoureveryafternoonexcepttuesdayyoucanreachmebytelephoning。您可在每天下午二至四時（星期二例外）打731430號電話通知我。6．較具體有效的句子。mayihaveaninterview?myresidencetelephoneis(042)reachmebycallingthatnumberuntiljunejuly2,myaddresswillbekenthouse,brettonwoods,new？我住處電話為43981號。六月三十日以前我都在上址，七月二日以后，我的新址為新罕不夏州布列登林肯特屋。應(yīng)征函的語氣應(yīng)征函要發(fā)揮最大的效果，語氣必須肯定、自信、有創(chuàng)意而不過份夸張，如能事先洞察雇主的喜好，或其他人格特性，根據(jù)物以類聚的原理，應(yīng)征函若能配合雇主的特性，求職的人一定可以比其他人占上風(fēng)，獲得面談的機會。比較下列各句語氣上有何不同：1．ithinkthatishouldprobablymakeagoodbookkeeperfor。2．iamconfidentthatmyexperienceandreferenceswillshowyouthaticanfulfilltheparticularrequirementsofyourbookkeeping，我能夠符合貴公司簿記員一職的特定需要。3．irecentlypletedacourseinfilingatthecrosbyschoolofampetentnotonlytoinstallafilingsystemthatwillfulfilltheneedsofyourorganization,butiamalsowellqualifiedtooperateit，我自信不僅可以設(shè)置一套檔案人類系統(tǒng)符合您的要求，而且可以有效地操作。4．ifeelquitecertainthatasaresultofthecourseinfilingwhichipletedatthecrosbyschoolofbusiness,icaninstallandoperateefficientlyafilingsystemforyour，我能夠替貴公司設(shè)置并且操作一套檔案分類系統(tǒng)。第一句顯得語氣太弱，寫信的人有點羞怯的樣子。第二句有特殊風(fēng)格，第三句太過自信，第四句，作者表示謙虛。