【正文】 ge students to pursue famous brands.[3]After all, most of famous brands are [7]far beyond their consumption ability.[3]Besides, [8]it is not famous brands but a person’s noble character that really makes him high class.[3]Therefore, college students should attach more importance to cultivating a good character [9]rather than pursuing famous brands.【亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評(píng)】[1]“有…傾向”。[2]過渡銜接詞語，使文章條理清晰、意義連貫。[3] follow表示“跟隨，追求(趨勢(shì)或時(shí)尚)”[4]用于引出原因。[5]which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句。[6] it為形式主語，不定式為真正主語。[7]“遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)超出他們的消費(fèi)能力”。beyond表示“超出…范圍”。[8]強(qiáng)調(diào)句型，此處是強(qiáng)調(diào)主語。not…but連接并列成分。[9]“而不是”。佳句臨?。篒t is irrational for college students to pursue famous ：對(duì)大學(xué)生來說，了解校園以外的世界是非常必要的。___________________________________________________________________________：In modern society, famous brands to some extent are equal to fashion, which have a great attraction to young college ：在世界上或許沒有什么游戲像賭博像賭博的那么有害和危險(xiǎn)了，它經(jīng)常會(huì)導(dǎo)致一個(gè)人破產(chǎn)，還會(huì)玷污人的心靈。___________________________________________________________________________：Therefore, college students should attach more importance to cultivating a good character rather than pursuing famous ：很多同學(xué)經(jīng)常玩電腦游戲，這是浪費(fèi)時(shí)間，而不是一種有益的放松方式。Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write A Letter Applying for a Bank should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese：1)簡(jiǎn)單介紹個(gè)人情況2)說明申請(qǐng)助學(xué)貸款的原因、數(shù)額3)保證會(huì)合理利用貸款并表明還款的決心A Letter Applying for a Bank Loan_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________行文思路本題屬于情景式命題，要求寫一封申請(qǐng)信。根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：簡(jiǎn)單介紹自己的情況，表明寫信目的：申請(qǐng)助學(xué)貸款。說明申請(qǐng)助學(xué)貸款的原因、數(shù)額。保證合理利用貸款并表明還款決心，最后表示感謝。高分范文A Letter Applying for a Bank LoanSep 12th, 2008To whom it may concern，I am a freshman of Lianhe University, [1]majoring in Applied am writing in the hope that I may obtain a bank loan to support my study in Applied Physics for the following four parents are both laidoff workers, so it’s [2]beyond their power to finance me through the college education.[3]To make matters worse, my mother has suddenly fallen ill and is expecting a major operation.[4]Therefore, [5]with the college tuition being a much heavier burden on my family, I am pelled to apply a RMB20,000 bank loan.[6]I give you my promise that the loan would be used properly.[4]Meanwhile, I’ll [7]spare no effort to work hard both in the study and my future career in order to pay back the would be greatly obliged if my application is I am looking forward to hearing from you yours，Song Xue【亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評(píng)】[1]“主修…”，現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語。[2]“超出…的能力范圍”。[3]“使事情更糟糕的是”。[4]過渡銜接詞語，使文章條理清晰、銜接緊密。[5]“with+賓語+賓補(bǔ)”的獨(dú)立結(jié)構(gòu)。[6]“我保證…”，that引導(dǎo)同位語從句。[7]“不遺余力”。佳句臨摩：To make matters worse, my mother has suddenly fallen ill and is expecting a major ：令人更迷惑不解的是，很多飛機(jī)都從大海上離奇消失了。：Therefore, the college tuition being a much heavier burden on my family, I am pelled to apply a RMB20,000 bank ：由于周圍交通不便利，人們只得步行回家。：Meanwhile, I’ll spare no effort to work hard both in the study and my future career in order to pay back the ：全國人民都不遺余力地支持北京舉辦奧運(yùn)會(huì)。第三篇：英語作文好詞好句Useful sayingsWealth is nothing without ，錢再多也沒用。Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and 。All work and no play makes Jack a dull ，不玩耍，聰明小孩也變傻。An apple a day keeps the doctor ，醫(yī)生遠(yuǎn)離你。Well begun is half ，、Time and tide wait for no 。Practice makes 。Confidence in yourself is the first step on the road to 。Where there is a will, there is a 。Nothing is impossible to a willing ，沒事不成。1No pains, no 1Rome was not built in a 。1The more books we read, the more learned we ，越有學(xué)問。1Knowledge is 。1It39。s never too old to ，學(xué)到老。1A friend in need is a friend 1Action speaks louder than 。1East or west, home is the 。1Honesty is the best A penny saved is a penny 。作文常用句型：開頭：There’s no doubt that … 毫無疑問，….As we all know / As everyone knows, … 眾所周知，…It’s generally believed that … 普遍認(rèn)為, …We have reasons to believe that … 我們有理由相信…More and more people have e to realize that… 越來越多的人相信…No one can deny that … 沒人可以否認(rèn)….As an old saying goes, “...” 俗話說得好, … 連接：There’re many ways to do There’re many reasons for What’s more, …另外，…In addition, … 而且，…Besides, … 除此之外，…Last but not leastIn my opinion, …以我看來，…That is to say, … 那就是說…A very important way of doing to do …One basic way to do to do …1More importantly, …更重要的是…1It’s also necessary/important/… to do …也很必要/重要…1On one hand, … On the other hand, … 一方面, … 另一方面…結(jié)尾：In a word, … / In short, …/ To sum up, … / Generally speaking, 總之, …好句：There is no denying that life is a mixture of laughter and far as I am concerned，In brief, the more confident you are, the better result you’ll is obvious to see that …We still have a long way to full use of / take advantage of suffer from heavier work pressurehave a high sense of responsibility / humor keep / have a positive attitude towards 1）There are three reasons for ）The reasons for this are as ）The reason for this is ）The reason for this is that …5）We have good reasons to believe that … 1）It has the following ）It does us a lot of ）It benefits us quite a ）It is of great benefit to 1）It has more disadvantages than ）It does us much ）It is harmful to 、必要、困難、方便、可能1）It is important（necessary，difficult，convenient，possible）for do ）We think it necessary to do ）It plays an important role in our We should try our best to overe the long as we stay hungry for education and let the hunger be our North Star, there39。s nothing that we cannot ObamaStay hungry, stay JobsNever be satisfied, never feel fulfilled, always feel thirsty, hungry for knowledge, success and another many funny jokes in the newspaper make me laugh to l am in a bad mood, l tell my friend all that l feel and it listens without feeling newspaper makes me knowledgeable, shares my