【正文】 定相應(yīng)的寫(xiě)作結(jié)構(gòu)。重點(diǎn)分析產(chǎn)生此現(xiàn)象的原因有哪些，把最重要的兩三點(diǎn)羅列下來(lái)。最后，根據(jù)分析出的原因提供相應(yīng)的建議。范文首段開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山，首先一句話總結(jié)如今社會(huì)上過(guò)度包裝現(xiàn)象盛行，而后舉出一些實(shí)例補(bǔ)充說(shuō)明。第二段重點(diǎn)從公司和消費(fèi)者兩方面論述產(chǎn)生過(guò)度包裝的原因。公司方面是為了吸引顧客，刺激消費(fèi)，贏取更多的利潤(rùn)；消費(fèi)者方面是認(rèn)為包裝越精美，質(zhì)量越好這種錯(cuò)誤的消費(fèi)意識(shí)。接下來(lái)作者表明自己的看法，認(rèn)為過(guò)度包裝會(huì)導(dǎo)致很多問(wèn)題：稀缺資源的流失；水，能源的過(guò)度消耗以及產(chǎn)生不必要的垃圾場(chǎng)等。2011年12月四級(jí)作文Directions: You39。re allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will by menting on the humorous saying, “Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the ’ve done it hundreds of time.”You39。d write at least 120 words but no more than 180 :。，不刻苦學(xué)習(xí)，終究不會(huì)成為有用之才Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong WillWith the ing of a brand new era full of opportunities and innovations, the issue of how to succeed has aroused growing concern in the there are thousands of ways to success, in my opinion, a strong will is the important guarantee of success, just as a proverb says, “Where there is a will there is a way”.The long history of human being has proved that only those who have a strong will can fulfill great mission and achieve success at succeeds without a strong Mao Zedong, one of the great founders of the People’s Republic of China, as an without the strong will to save Chinese people from heavy disaster and build a prosperous, democratic and civilized new country, how could he drive Japanese out of China and bee such a famous leader in the world?If we as a student want to be successful in the future, the strong will on hardworking is the most , we have been entering an information age with rapid update of firstly seizes and keeps up with the development of advanced information can succeeds at , studying hard to get more knowledge and improve our ability to handle plicated problems as possible is the only way to lay the solid foundation of future Succeeds Without a Strong Will“Where there is a will, there is way” is an old proverb which almost everyone knows, but not all understand it so , it means that if you are really resolved to do something, no matter how difficult it might be, never give fact, strong will is a kind of good quality which successful people should great man is always one who has a firm resolution and an inflexible will never succeed all his life without a firm will to get the final a rule, great tasks are acplished by men of strong example, Yatsen, the founder of the Republic of China, set the Chinese people free from the Manchurian rule through a long period of hard of his attempts failed and many of his followers were killed, but he had an inflexible spirit and stuck to his , he made the revolution of 1911 a same is true of men in all walks of is quite obvious that there is nothing difficult in the world, if you make up your mind to do it, you will certainly acplish your stands to as for students like us, we should have a good attitude towards with difficulties and failures, keep heads up and never give , we should make full preparation, though strong will help us overe the difficulties, it is not for person who has no 標(biāo)準(zhǔn)版Doing Shopping OnlineWith the development of the Internet, shopping is no longer a tiring click your mouse to choose the articles you like, and the purchase is don39。t even have to step out of the seems all easy and , people39。s opinions vary on this believe that on line shopping is time and money plentiful selection options, they can buy whatever they like at any time others insist that mispurchasing alone is annoying enough, not to mention the credibility of the sellers and the safety of their my opinion, the convenience and excitement of on line shopping is beyond all the meantime, we must always bear in mind that certain traps do exist, so we39。d better make sure the sellers are trustworthy before addition, we should also guard ourselves from the potential hackers who might steal our account ：這是一篇“中等偏上”的學(xué)生作文。本文先對(duì)網(wǎng)購(gòu)熱潮進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)介，引出全篇；接著對(duì)網(wǎng)絡(luò)購(gòu)物的正反兩方面進(jìn)行對(duì)比；最后提出自己的看法結(jié)束全篇。整體看思路清晰，邏輯嚴(yán)密，行文流暢，用語(yǔ)較為地道。下面說(shuō)一下這篇文章的有待提高之處：，能看得出該同學(xué)試圖采用議論文的“三段式”（提出問(wèn)題、分析問(wèn)題、解決問(wèn)題）。但是，以“With the development of the Internet”為開(kāi)首語(yǔ)，有些落入俗套，有硬套模板的嫌疑。稍加注意，應(yīng)該能寫(xiě)出更好的句子。，有些語(yǔ)句稍顯啰嗦，比如With plentiful selection options? 簡(jiǎn)化成With plentiful selections? 更好，意思沒(méi)有絲毫減損，表達(dá)力反而增強(qiáng)許多。高分版With the help of the ever rapid development of internet technology, online shopping is ing into fashion in most of shopping is weled by most people due to various the perspective of consumer, it can save some time for people who don39。t have much spare click the mouse, they can get whatever they want while staying at the retailers, it can cut some costs for those who don39。t have much circulating don39。t have to rent a house and spend money on employees pared with the traditional trade , there are still some defects in online , lace of face to face deal makes online shopping less reliable and , people will lose the fun of is undeniable that shopping on the internet has bee an irresistible trend in modern 39。s of great urgency that we need to regulate the relative laws accordance with the rapid growth of online in this way can we enjoy the pleasure and convenience of online shopping without the concern of being ：本次四級(jí)作文探討的是最近的熱點(diǎn)話題之一——互聯(lián)網(wǎng)網(wǎng)購(gòu)。目前網(wǎng)購(gòu)的風(fēng)靡程度是眾所周知，因此，考生對(duì)于該話題還是比較熟悉的。但是，比較特殊的是，題干所列出的要求的是考生從一個(gè)客觀的角度來(lái)闡述該話題，而不是簡(jiǎn)單陳述自己的意見(jiàn)。所以，考生應(yīng)當(dāng)審清楚題，在寫(xiě)作時(shí)不僅僅要列出網(wǎng)購(gòu)的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，還必須給出相應(yīng)的缺點(diǎn)。按照四級(jí)作文的要求，考生在第一段時(shí)應(yīng)該總述現(xiàn)象并引出話題；第二段考生應(yīng)當(dāng)從正反兩方面來(lái)論述網(wǎng)購(gòu)，分別鋪陳其優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)；關(guān)于優(yōu)點(diǎn)，網(wǎng)購(gòu)的優(yōu)點(diǎn)很多，考生可擇其最突出顯著的方面來(lái)闡述，比如說(shuō)網(wǎng)購(gòu)可以節(jié)省很多時(shí)間；網(wǎng)購(gòu)可以節(jié)省很多成本開(kāi)支等；其次，缺點(diǎn)方面考生可以把重心放在誠(chéng)信方面；為了不至于跟優(yōu)點(diǎn)相比，缺點(diǎn)方面太輕，考生可以考慮稍微提一下其他缺點(diǎn)，比如說(shuō)與傳統(tǒng)購(gòu)物相比，網(wǎng)購(gòu)少去了很多砍價(jià)的樂(lè)趣；第三點(diǎn)要求考生對(duì)于第二段列出的缺點(diǎn)給出自己的建議。此處我們可以根據(jù)第二段列出的缺點(diǎn)方面給出相應(yīng)的防范應(yīng)對(duì)措施。整篇作文話題比較好展開(kāi)，難度不大，只要考生審好題，列出相應(yīng)點(diǎn)，相信作文不會(huì)他是難題。2010年12月大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)考試How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent?, 父母應(yīng)該……Nowadays, an increasing number of families in China have only one parents love and care for children so much as to help children deal with every , children get used to depending on their parents in everything and lack the ability to solve problems are some effective ways for parents to help their children to be start with, parents should give their children more chan