【正文】 n。在臨場的匆忙之中仍然想出來一個很好的題目Make Our Voice Heard，并且將自己的論述分為兩部分，有條不紊，令人感嘆。Why those people are afraid of these kind of literature? I39。m afraid that they are afraid of that teenagers are liked to imitate teenager is just a crucial point for us to shape our personality, our view of life, and our value of the 39。re afraid of that we follow the bad example and lead a bad life in the that39。s why my parents, my family, and even the government would like to propose where thought those kind of literature as cynical ：擔(dān)心青少年模仿。思路很清晰。也正是在正文中cover the main points。但大概由于臨場的因素，出現(xiàn)了一些浯法方面的錯誤，如：I39。m afraid of that?，they are afraid of that?，雖然不影響理解，仍然是個遺憾。演講人將《麥田守望者》與郭敬明的作品相比較，為下文打下鋪墊。用文學(xué)名著作為論證的材料，很有說服力。But I would like to share some of my thoughts with I read the book of Jingming39。s novel, I read another fiction called the Catcher the that book, I also read sex, violence, murder, and that book was regarded as one of the masterpiece in American history and awarded the Pulitzer could not see any difference between Jingming39。s novel and The Cateber in the Rye, because they expressed the attitude as our teenagers and adolescents we feel about the let me give you my three reasons, why we can read this kind of a book and f am not afraid of tile fears of the side , those literatures are not all have some positive advocate friendship, love, loyalty, and so of my roommates even cried after reading those books, He said that it is the first.., it was the first time in his life that he felt that a friendship was that precious, because the stories depicted in his novel, reflect him of the old times he spent in his high he bought four books of Jingming39。s Never Flowers in Never Dream(Meng Li Hua Luo Zhi Duo Shao)and sent them to his his friends wrote a long letter to think this is what we lack today, the munication between the literature seems to bridge the 。首先指出第一個作品本身亦有其可取之處。并以其宦友的親身經(jīng)歷為例作出了令人信服的論證。這樣就使演講personalized，so that audience can relate more easily to personal topics—they probably have similar experiences．And the second reason is that we are not living in a world where everything is depicted as are living in a world of good and evil, evil and , to that extent, if I am confined in a world where everything is depicted as good, I will feel quite perplexed when I am facing the real the real world really resemble what I read in the novel? We need something positive, also we need something the third reason is that our generation, I believe, have the sense of can make our own our parents, for our families and for the government, they should resume, assume the responsibility to remind us that what is good, what is bad, what is cynical Make our voice be is my answer and I am not afraid of tile side effects of those you very ：世界亦非完美無暇，文學(xué)就應(yīng)該反應(yīng)真實的世界。最后一點原因：當(dāng)代年輕人可以自律。至此就分別從文學(xué)作品、社會、個人三個方面透徹地闡釋了演講人的觀點。也正是通過從不同角度的分析，使聽眾接受演講人的觀點。這一段中也出現(xiàn)了較為明顯的問題。Host: And, the topic for your speech will be...In spite of the fact that there is cutthroat petition within the film industry in China, there continues to be a steep increase in the number of applicants for places at Chinese art to a Beiiingbased newspaper, more than ten thousand applicants waited in line on a single day to register to apply for the Beijing Film do you perceive this struggle for stardom?Thank you for the difficult , to be honest with you, I39。m not really familiar with the struggle for stardom thing in in the city where I e from, there is this also as cutthroat as the one in Beijing here petition going on, and perhaps I can share with you the experience we have me tell you the city where I e from, there is this famous singing petition going on every what they do is that pick the best one, and the best one goes to the next week and it goes on and on until one day that person is 。因為這與普通的接題方式Thank you for the question不同。演講者是香港人，雖然她對主持人所問的內(nèi)地的情況不甚了解，是一大劣勢，但她卻巧妙的地使用but轉(zhuǎn)而談到香港的情況；also的使用使演講的主題不變。同時聽眾理解到演講者要從另外一個角度解釋同一個問題。這種角度的變換使演講者的劣勢變成了優(yōu)勢。聽眾既為其率真而打動，又為其智慧而折服。And there39。s this little five year old boy, and he has won five consecutive championships, and then, of course, there were interviews and the news coverage, and when the general public read the frown at said, “what a silly idea, to think about being a star.” And when Andy LauI39。m sure all of you blow him, tile famous singer and actorwhen he read the newspaper, he said, “Wow, that39。s great!But ask the boy to work 39。s not easy.”這里演講人以演唱比賽為切人點，以小男孩的參舞，點出了香港人對當(dāng)明星十分熱衷。以此呼應(yīng)主持人提問。并且演講人Support points with specifics．以典型的例子支持論點。明星劉德華在內(nèi) 地有很高的知名度，他的勤奮也是眾所周知，以他的話為例，讓人十分信服。本段對general public和Andy Lau不同態(tài)度的對 比，可以引起聽眾的思考。對比之中必有抑揚，也讓聽眾對下段演講人過渡到自己的觀點有了思想上的準(zhǔn)備Ladies and gentlemen, I think if we use the word “struggle”, isn39。t it a bit too negative? I think better word for it is “strive.” Being a star is also is also a job that you need to work hard does not e , if we take a look at famous actors and actresses such as lackie Chart, Chow Yun Fat, Andy Lau, Tony Lun, they are all in their midforties, and even , what do they have in mon? When they first became..., when they first started their careers as a star, or as an actor, they were described as “Cinema Poison,” meaning nobody would see their did they give up? No, they didn39。t, they didn39。t give have been working hard all the now they are over the over are they proud of themselves? Well, I suppose still they work very at Andy 39。s still striving for the best all the year are 。并且在臨場仍然明確地區(qū)分struggle和strive，顯示出演講人深厚的語言功底。演講人接著由例子過渡到談話主題：當(dāng)明星是一種職業(yè)，巧妙地把struggle的主題過渡到strive，進(jìn)而談到Being a star is also a profession．把不熟悉的主題struggle過渡到談明星的成功這個比較熟悉的話題。這種演講技巧十分重要，因為在短暫的幾十秒鐘內(nèi)談?wù)撘粋€十分陌生的話題，實在有難度，但是這位演講者的巧妙過渡，既沒有跑題，又談了熟悉的話題，因此這種技巧值得學(xué)習(xí)。同時，本段列舉眾多內(nèi)地觀眾十分熟悉地明星成名經(jīng)歷作為brief examples，做論據(jù)，支持自己的觀點，使論據(jù)可靠而有力。這兩句話Al lover the world．All over Asia．若能調(diào)換順序，就更加順暢。Ladies and gentlemen, I think there39。s nothing wrong if you want to be a 39。s a 39。s a job that everybody can work for it if you really want there are qualities that you need to possess if you want to be