【正文】 外，07年高考語文湖北卷作文題也是以母語為話題的，這三者之間似乎有某種聯(lián)系。不過，本題對(duì)語言本身要求更具體，甚至討論到了成語的用法。應(yīng)該說，能討論這么細(xì)致的漢語問題對(duì)于中學(xué)生學(xué)英語而言是一個(gè)很大的刺激或促進(jìn)。而且，毫不夸張地說，跨語言、跨文化的啟示意義深蘊(yùn)其間，對(duì)其他各卷種的命題思路不無裨益。十三、（）某英語報(bào)社擬成立“微笑俱樂部”，現(xiàn)向癸未征募會(huì)員。要求申請(qǐng)者提交一篇題為“I want to Smile”的英語短文。請(qǐng)你以申請(qǐng)者的身份，根據(jù)以下思路圖的提示用英語寫一篇短文。注意：，以使行文連貫； ：120左右There are many advantages of can not only make us happy, but also please we smile at life, life will smile on us in I want to smile at all whenever and wherever possible, First, I would like to smile at my parents because they have given me life and take all the trouble to bring me arrange almost everything for their help, I have made great would like to say “Thank you” to them with a my smile should go to myself, for only in this way can I gain more confidence in smiling my troubles away and live a better a word, let’s greet every day with a is another day.【解析】本文為圖畫式作文，做題的關(guān)鍵是審題，考生要把握如下幾點(diǎn)： ：說明文。：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。：第一人稱。：①微笑的優(yōu)點(diǎn)；②想對(duì)其微笑的人物（父母）；③對(duì)父母微笑的理由；④對(duì)自己微笑的理由；⑤總結(jié)?！緦＜液喸u(píng)】本題是一個(gè)好的標(biāo)題作文（05福建卷：My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations）。六年來，福建卷基本上使用的是議論性質(zhì)的寫作文體（04陳說，006議論，008陳說+議論），09年是一個(gè)典型的議論性質(zhì)的文體。話題也非常好，和安徽卷一樣，非常適合中學(xué)生表達(dá)。但從命題的角度看，寫作難度較高，因?yàn)楸绢}的控制方法不是采用漢語提綱形式，而是采用圖文形式，在語言轉(zhuǎn)換上較安徽卷難。從所給范文看，語言難度不高，但思維難度不低?？忌梅植灰住Ｊ?、（）第一節(jié) 基礎(chǔ)寫作（共1小題，滿分15分）你是校報(bào)小記者，最近進(jìn)行了一次采訪。以下是這次采訪的情況: 時(shí)間: 上周末對(duì)象: 眼科醫(yī)生（eyedoctor）王教授主題: 我國中小學(xué)生近視（shortsightedness）問題基本信息:（1）發(fā)生率: 略高于50％（2）人數(shù): 世界第一專家解讀:（1）原因: 很復(fù)雜（2）治療: 沒有哪一種藥物能治愈近視（3）建議: 不要過度用眼；多參加戶外活動(dòng)（4）特別提示: 如何握筆也和近視有關(guān) [寫作內(nèi)容] 根據(jù)以上情況寫一篇采訪報(bào)道，并包括如下內(nèi)容: 、對(duì)象和主題； ； 。[寫作要求] 只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部內(nèi)容。[評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)] 句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫?！緟⒖挤段摹?Last weekend, I had an interview with eyedoctor Professor Wang about our country primary and middle students’ is said that slightly more than 50% students, which ranks the in the world, are Wang said the reason of shortsightedness is plicated and three is still no cure for suggested that we should not overuse our eyes and do more outdoor ’s more, since the holding of pen has something to do with the shortsightedness, we need to pay attention to using the pen.【解析】本文題材貼近學(xué)生實(shí)際生活，這個(gè)話題真正的做到“話題來源于學(xué)生實(shí)際生活”。近視眼是每個(gè)校園所必不可少的現(xiàn)象，是學(xué)生校園生活得隱形熱點(diǎn)。因此今年的基礎(chǔ)寫作題目讓每個(gè)學(xué)生都有話可說。考生要注意三大要點(diǎn)和表格內(nèi)容，恰當(dāng)表達(dá)即可?！緦＜液喸u(píng)】本題話題為近視問題，天津卷曾涉及過（07天津卷：How to Protect Our Eyesight）。但角度有不同。廣東卷側(cè)重的是問題本身的描述，而天津則是強(qiáng)調(diào)的如何保護(hù)視力。不過，能有做天津卷的經(jīng)驗(yàn)，對(duì)廣東卷也就不會(huì)有難的感覺。更何況廣東卷所給信息非常充分，對(duì)于考生而言，剩下的主要是組織句子了。需要特別指出的是，陳說性質(zhì)的文體其核心在于陳述和說明（包括介紹），即講清楚一樁事情。第二節(jié) 讀寫任務(wù)（共1小題，滿分25分）閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。Jackie is perhaps the most easily annoyed koala（考拉）at the Featherdale Wildlife Park in southern the koalas there are unhappy and would be too if you were used to night activities and someone kept waking you up all day while you were trying to sleep it ’s right—sleep it average koala is always half asleep because it feeds on the leaves of a special kind that makes it Jackie and her fellow koalas are repeatedly awoken from their deep sleep is so they can be hugged and photographed by tourists，who make the trips to Featherdale and an increasing number of other national parks for just that special department in the Aussie government in charge of such things is now moving to make the practice illegal，which is would you react，my friend，if you were trying to sleep off a dozen times and some round，furry creature smelling of grass kept waking you? * 考拉即樹袋熊 [寫作內(nèi)容] ；“該不該禁止游客和動(dòng)物拍照”進(jìn)行議論，內(nèi)容包括:（1）人們?cè)趨⒂^動(dòng)物園時(shí)為什么喜歡和動(dòng)物拍照；（2）假如你處在那些動(dòng)物的處境，你會(huì)有什么反應(yīng)；（3）你認(rèn)為是否應(yīng)該禁止游客和動(dòng)物拍照。[寫作要求] ，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；。[評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)] 概括準(zhǔn)確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫?！緟⒖挤段摹縏he passage narrates that koalas who are repeatedly awoken from their deep sleep are unhappy and plaining for tourists taking author appeals to us to be more kind to reasons why tourists like taking photos of the animals in the zoo perhaps vary from people to think it a happy reminder of their visit to the zoo or the animals, while others may consider it just sort of fun to anyway they may not share the deep feelings of the I were in the same position as the animal in the zoo, my reaction would be very severe strongly against being having peaceful surroundings tosleep, don’t you suffer restless and doubt we do and so do the think it necessary to ban tourists’ taking pictures with animals, making a fortable environment for them to live and regarding them as our friends, so as to found harmonious relations with animals.【解析】今年的讀寫任務(wù)讓學(xué)生就“該不該禁止游客和動(dòng)物拍照”展開議論。議論文的寫作有助于培養(yǎng)學(xué)生正確的價(jià)值觀，糾正不正確的價(jià)值觀。今年的讀寫任務(wù)暗中旨在培養(yǎng)學(xué)生保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物的觀念、把多一點(diǎn)的空間還給動(dòng)物的觀念、與動(dòng)物和諧共存的觀念。如果考生從“應(yīng)該禁止游客和動(dòng)物拍照”這一觀點(diǎn)入手的話就迎合了閱讀材料，同時(shí)也能夠受到改卷老師的青睞?！緦＜液喸u(píng)】自2007年廣東卷改革以來，寫作部分的兩個(gè)試題在寫作要求上均過于詳細(xì)，控制程度很高。尤其是后者，盡管是閱讀后的寫作，但要領(lǐng)已經(jīng)被列出，實(shí)際上難度已經(jīng)大大下降。當(dāng)然，廣東卷這么做的主要目的無外乎便于教師閱卷，收縮考生的思維，不給考生跑題的機(jī)會(huì)。但是若往深的追問，本題給學(xué)生的思維空間并不多，這個(gè)值得考量。三年來，廣東卷已經(jīng)在短文寫作上逐漸形成定勢(shì)。十五、（）假定你住在一個(gè)涉外小區(qū)。社區(qū)委員會(huì)請(qǐng)你幫忙用英文以短文的形式寫一封電子郵件，將周末農(nóng)家采摘活動(dòng)的安排傳達(dá)給住戶。要點(diǎn)：時(shí)間：下周六上午8：00至11：00 內(nèi)容：采摘蘋果報(bào)名：辦公室，下周四下午5：00前提示：帶帽子、手套注意：，開頭已為你寫好。：社區(qū) munity 第二節(jié)：一、評(píng)分原則，按5個(gè)檔次給分。，先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來衡量，確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。，從總分中減去2分。：內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、應(yīng)用詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)的豐富性和準(zhǔn)確性及上下文的連貫性。評(píng)分時(shí)，應(yīng)視其對(duì)交際的影響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫及詞匯用法均可接受。，將其分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。二、內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：下周六上午8：00 至 11：00 ：采摘蘋果：辦公室，下周四下午5：00前 ：帶帽子、手套【參考范文】 Dear neighbors, We are very happy announce that our munity is going to organize an activity for all the munity Saturday, we going to pick apples in a village 20 kilometers away from our town, and all are will meet at 8:00 am at the gate, where a blue bus will be outdoor activity will last 3 hours, and we’ll be back at about 11 o’ you are interested, please sign up at the office before 5:00 pm next Thursday so that we will make necessary suggest that you bring with you a hat and a pair of are looking forward to your joining Office 【解析】本題命制穩(wěn)健，是中學(xué)教學(xué)中最為常見的提綱式作文。給出要點(diǎn)學(xué)生有話可說。第一步：審題看要求：本題要求以短文的形式寫一封電子郵件，將周末農(nóng)家采摘活動(dòng)的安排傳達(dá)給住戶。開頭已經(jīng)寫好，這樣格式應(yīng)該已經(jīng)給出，審題的重點(diǎn)放在要點(diǎn)和要求上：要點(diǎn)有五項(xiàng)，注意有三項(xiàng)，但注意的第一項(xiàng)是重要的一項(xiàng)。理思路：調(diào)整要點(diǎn)，講清本次活動(dòng)的安排?？梢韵葘⒒顒?dòng)的時(shí)間，活動(dòng)的內(nèi)容，要求、注意事項(xiàng)表達(dá)出來；然后再寫5和3要點(diǎn)，這樣邏輯清晰表達(dá)合理。第二步：寫作可以先在草紙上起草，用自己最有把握的句型、單詞、短語去表達(dá)，要嘗試最簡單的復(fù)雜句，如用定語從句、賓語從句等，但句式不易過于復(fù)雜，要用一些恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句與句之間、段與段之間過渡自然。第三步：檢查作文寫完后，最后要進(jìn)行檢查。重點(diǎn)放在要點(diǎn)寫全了嗎？時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)、動(dòng)詞的數(shù)、單詞拼寫對(duì)了嗎？標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)、大小寫用對(duì)了嗎？檢查完后再抄寫在試卷上，注意卷面的整潔。【專家簡評(píng)】主題與考生學(xué)習(xí)生活或?qū)W?；顒?dòng)無關(guān)，但由于是以涉外小區(qū)為背景所