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daughter)Tom(Mary)(2)Dear Dad(Mum),You’re so busy every day that you don’t pay much attention to your am worried about hope you can keep often drive to your is not about walking there because it can make you much stronger?I’d like you to play basketball or go swimming in the gym at least once a is important to eat healthy food such as vegetables, meat, eggs and your work is hard, I still hope that you can go to bed early so that you can get enough ’m looking forward to receiving your loving son(daughter)Tom(Mary)這兩篇作文使用了I’d like to?,Why not??It is important to do?,Try not to do?,I hope that?,What about doing??I’d like you to do?,You’d better do?等婉轉(zhuǎn)口氣的請(qǐng)求句式,表達(dá)出了作者對(duì)父(母)的關(guān)心,信息點(diǎn)完整,內(nèi)容充實(shí),注重了書(shū)信的結(jié)尾形式。中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)優(yōu)秀范文賞析:運(yùn)動(dòng)中考即將到來(lái)的時(shí)刻,英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)應(yīng)更多地集中在中、難度題型的練習(xí)上,今天和同學(xué)們談?wù)剷?shū)面表達(dá)這個(gè)題型。寫(xiě)作是英語(yǔ)綜合能力的形式,這個(gè)形式體現(xiàn)學(xué)生本人的詞匯量大小;單詞、詞組和句子的運(yùn)用能力及邏輯思維能力。下面就一個(gè)有關(guān)鍛煉身體的話題和一封寫(xiě)給父母的信,從構(gòu)思、文章結(jié)構(gòu)到寫(xiě)作的方法來(lái)看如何完成這樣的書(shū)面表達(dá)。例1:隨著陽(yáng)光體育運(yùn)動(dòng)在全國(guó)開(kāi)展,政府對(duì)中學(xué)生身體素質(zhì)有所下降這個(gè)問(wèn)題給予了高度重視,提出了這樣的標(biāo)語(yǔ):“EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY, KEEP ILLNESS AWAY”。同學(xué)們參加了各種體育鍛煉之后,校園里出現(xiàn)了可喜的變化,強(qiáng)身健體,增強(qiáng)了學(xué)習(xí)效果,校園生活豐富了。請(qǐng)你報(bào)道一下學(xué)校開(kāi)展這一活動(dòng)的情況。注意:—100左右。、內(nèi)容通順、句子連貫。參考詞匯:build up one’s body strength 強(qiáng)健身體reduce diseases 減少疾病構(gòu)思方法:、理解和思考題目中給出的所有信息點(diǎn)。信息點(diǎn)是圍繞著提示從文字中扣出來(lái)的。:;;;;;;。寫(xiě)作方法:。、詞組、固定句型將所有信息點(diǎn)表現(xiàn)在文章中。(the Sunny Sports, pay attention to the health of the students, raise the slogan, take part in the exercise, build up one’s body strength, reduce diseases, make study effective, school life, colourful)(觀點(diǎn))。下面是學(xué)生的作文:(1)As the Sunny Sports is developing in our country, the government has paid attention to the health of the students and raised, “EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY, KEEP ILLNESS AWAY”.So far our school life has changed a we have more time to do sport in the morning or after play football, basketball, badminton and let our brains relax and make our school life more have bee more all our study has all been ’s take exercise every can build up our body strength and reduce diseases.(2)Doing sport builds up our body strength and reduces we lead a better life, our health is being worse “EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY,KEEP ILLNESS AWAY” has been raised by the noon or after school we play ball games, swimming and !The playground seems smaller because lots of students are playing on school life has bee colorful and we are a result we study harder and Sunny Sports has brought an exciting change to ’s keep on doing ,他們分別以獨(dú)特的思路和風(fēng)格,利用豐富的詞匯、準(zhǔn)確的時(shí)態(tài)、簡(jiǎn)單句和復(fù)合句的搭配、合理的構(gòu)思使文章語(yǔ)言流利,一氣呵成,展現(xiàn)了扎實(shí)的英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)法功底和綜合運(yùn)用能力。中學(xué)英語(yǔ)作文:我們?cè)鯓舆^(guò)教師節(jié)How We Spent Teachers39。 Day Yesterday was Teachers39。 was a great dale for all the teachers and also a happy time for us the morning,we went to school early and put a bunch of flowers on our class master39。s desk to give him a big of us stood at the school gate to say hello to every teacher when they entered the the afternoon, we held a sang and danced with the said the best reward for the teachers was to see that we were making :我愛(ài)你,祖國(guó)Good morning, ladies and gentlemen, I’m very glad to make a speech my topic is “I love you, China.” Since the day I was born, I began to have a proud name— the day I began to talk, the most beautiful sentence I’ve ever learnt has been “I love you, China!”I love you, China, and I’m so proud of being a ’m proud that I’ve got the beautiful yellow skin, black eyes and black ’m also proud that I speak the most beautiful language in the world— love you, China, for I can feel the deep love you give me every day, every year, I got an opportunity to visit the United States of my staying there, my father’s boss once invited my family to at , he looked at me and asked: “Little boy, how long have you been in America?” “About a month,” I answered, “How lucky you are!” he said, “If you were living in China, how could you learn such perfect English?” I smiled and told him proudly that all the students in China are able to learn English at saw his surprised eyes and said to myself, “I’m proud of you, China ”中學(xué)生暑假趣事英語(yǔ)作文I spent this summer vacation in quite a different used to run about every day in previous summer vacations, but this summer vacation I simply could not afford to do would soon be in the last year of my highschool education and would after graduation be up against the college entrance those examinations were still a year away, I had to start early to make myself well prepared by reviewing all those things I had learned at school and this summer vacation was the ideal time for me to do first I was rather dismayed at the thought of this, but later I thought it was better this way because by working hard this summer I could count on endless happy summers to this in mind I then set to work like anything and only occasionally went out for a change or did some was not at all bored by this kind of life, for I was sustained by a I Spent My Summer Vacation我如何渡我的暑假The summer vacation had e round was happy that I could forget about school at least for a I fool around all through this summer vacation, I made a plan as to how to spend , I thought I should go over all those things my teachers taught in the previous term so that I could have a better understanding of I thought I should take up some forms of exercise, such as walking, running and rowing, to keep me physically stood to reason that with such a good plan I should make the best of my vacation did, because I lived up to what I had piano playerWhat do I want to do when I’m older? Someone wants to be a wants to be a basketball player because they are good at wants to be a writer and to make the wants to be a teacher because they like teaching like playing the piano and I good at I want to bee a piano the piano is very you can learn something of can make you like lot of musician and singer are love playing play the piano when I’m ten years I’m in grand hope when I’m sixteen years old , I can bee grand ’ll be harder and harder to a piano play is a hard I believe I can do DayChristmas Day falls on the twentyfifth of is a very happy day for many boys and the