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ields such as graduation practice in factory and mercial negotiation also reinforces my value to your pany. I enjoy thinking, enjoy learning, enjoy working, (and I am )able to bear work pressure. In my free time, I often participate (in) activities such as table tennis (and) badminton. I am expecting to bee your colleague on some day. (More tactful to say ’I would love to bee you colleague/join the pany) Because being offhand in advance, let’s leave it at that. (This sentence makes no sense. ’Being offhand’ means to be rude, inconsiderate, illmannered so I don’t think that is whay you mean! In advance of what? ’Let’s leave it at that’ is a mand, it sounds rather abrupt and illmannered to me, again I don’t think this is what you meant. How about ’I would love to join your pany and you would not regret giving me this opportunity.’ and just finish with a smile!) Thanks. 看了外企面試自我介紹的人還看了: