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g is not necessary Alice was not too brave (多余之處) White Rabbit. ∥ ∥ enough . story . Check up the story you write. Make ments about the story. ? Excellent in every way. ? Make reader feel moved/excited. ? Ideas are great. ? Meaning is clear. ? Lots of words and word groups . ? Paragraphs are ordered . ? Correct spelling of all the words. Sample writing : ? Alice read the note and thought carefully, “If the cake makes me smaller, I can creep under the door , and if it makes me larger , I can reach the key . ” ? Alice ate the cake .Then she was quite surprised to find that the cake made her grow taller and taller. When she looked down at her feet , they were so far away. Alice was very frightened . She sat down and began to cry . After a while ,there was a large pool full of tears round her . ? Suddenly ,Alice heard someone ing . It was the white rabbit returning .The white rabbit was so frightened by Alice that he quickly ran away .Alice had to swim through her own tears and met a mouse and some other animals. They were all swimming in the tears . Homework: Go on writing Mister Simple moves the mountain . (愚公移山 ) Thanks so much ! Goodbye ! Wele to Xuyi !