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al phrases. Instead, make them into more general statements.4. Use of You Your We Us OurPlease do not use these words in a formal essay. Not only are they not formal language, but readers may be insulted if the author of the paper insinuates that You/We do something. It brings too personal of an approach to the writing and can make the reader unfortable.Examples:I think/ In my opinionChange to: more general statementsI think War is a pointless activity.War is a pointless activity.You/YourChange to: A person/ people/ His/ Her/ One/ One39。sYou think that reading is boring.One may think that reading is boring.Our/ We/ Uschange to: His/ Her/ PeopleWe all have to work together for a better society.people need to work together in order to create a better societ