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an go to Picture 2 from Picture 1? Last Sunday was a fine day, I got up early. After breakfast I did my homework in my bookroom. I helped …. ? Don’t fet the link words: and but or then when before after while as soon as .. not …until ... not only … but also… no matter how / where /when/ who… … … ? Body ? Conclusion/ End .5WH + .Main idea with 1 or 2 more proper sentences + .Right Link words and sentence paterns .Kill all the mistakes ( 包括 : 時態(tài) 人稱 句法 等等) A passage ? Title Thank you! Goodbye! ? A good passage= A right title + A healthy body + A nice conclusion/ end