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is a normal behavior in our society. There is no doubt that ___. As an old saying goes, ___. 38. If we can’t take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable result may e out unexpectedly, so what we should do is ___. 39. However, this graph may not predict the entire situation in the future. I believe ___. 40. From the graph it is evident that ___. 41. From all the reasons above, we know that great changes had taken place in ___. And I believe that ___. 42. Taking into account all of these factors, we may reach the conclusion that ___. 43. For the reasons given above, I strongly remend that ___. 44. Given the factors I have just outlined, I believe that ___. 45. Therefore, it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that ___. 46. Recognizing the fact that ___ should lead us to conclude that ___. 47. In short, I support the statement that it is better to ___ because ___. 48. After pondering this question on many occasions, I have finally reached the conclusion that ___ is something I truly want to do and it is worthwhile. 49. My point of view in ___ largely results from the fact that ___. 50. Now after close examination, it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that ___. 51. From what has been discussed above, you can get your preference. Personally, I think ___ has more advantages. 52. On the one hand, it has helped china ___. On the other hand, it has increased china’s ___, and at the same time, made great contributions to our national development. 53. In my opinion, to solve this problem there might be two ways. One way to tackle this question is ___. Another way that is worth adopting is ___. 54. As far as I am concerned, I trust the advantages mentioned above exceed the disadvantages. 55. For me, ___ is a glory and it is the most important thing I have to take into feasible consideration. 56. As regards me, I tend to pick ___, for ___. What’s more, ___. 57. If I were given a choice between ___ and ___, I would certainly prefer ___. For me, ___.1) 避免使用漢語(yǔ)式英語(yǔ),盡量使用自己熟悉的句型。幾種句型可交替使用,以避免重復(fù)和呆板。 (2) 多用簡(jiǎn)單句型,記事、寫人一般都不需要復(fù)雜的句型??蛇m當(dāng)多使用陳述句、一般疑問句、祈使句和感嘆句。不用或少用非謂語(yǔ)或情態(tài)動(dòng)詞等較復(fù)雜的句型。 (3).注意語(yǔ)法、句法知識(shí)的靈活運(yùn)用。 1) 語(yǔ)態(tài)、時(shí)態(tài)要準(zhǔn)確無誤。 2) 主謂語(yǔ)要一致,主語(yǔ)的人稱和數(shù)要和謂語(yǔ)一致。 3) 注意人稱代詞的賓格形式。 4) 注意冠詞用法,例如: He is an honest 。 5) 注意拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)和大小寫,例如:receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。 標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)特別注意漢英的不同,例如: 漢語(yǔ) 英語(yǔ) A. 句號(hào) 。 . B. 省略號(hào) …… … C. 頓號(hào) 、 無 (4) 描寫人物時(shí),要生動(dòng)具體,例如: 1) 外表特征:tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinarylooking 等。 2) 服飾顏色:red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。 3) 內(nèi)心境界:glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。 4) 感情描寫:love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。 5) 動(dòng)作描寫:e, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。 (5) 上下文要連貫。上下文的連貫性也是評(píng)分的一條原則,因此同學(xué)們應(yīng)把寫好的句子,根據(jù)故事情節(jié),事情發(fā)生的先后次序(時(shí)間或空間),使用一些表示并列、遞進(jìn)等過渡詞進(jìn)行加工整理,使文章連貫、自然、流暢。同學(xué)們應(yīng)注意下面過渡的用法: 1) 表示并列關(guān)系的過渡詞:and, as well as, or … 2) 表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的過渡詞:but, yet, however … 3) 表示時(shí)間關(guān)系的過渡詞:first, second, third, and then, finally, after, before, after a few days, at last, at that time, later, in the past, immediately, in the meanwhile, when, while, then, after that … 4) 表示空間關(guān)系的過渡詞:near (to), far (from), in the front of, beside, behind, beyond, above, below, to the right, to the left, on one side, on the other side of, outside … 5) 表示比較關(guān)系的過渡詞:in the same way, just like, just as … 6) 表示對(duì)照關(guān)系的過渡詞:but, still, yet, however, on the other hand, in spite of, even though … 7) 表示遞進(jìn)關(guān)系的過渡詞: also, and, then, too, in addition, moreover, again … 8) 表示因果關(guān)系的過渡詞:because, since, then, thus, otherwise, so, therefore ,as a result… 9) 表示解釋說明的過渡詞:for example, in fact, in this case, for, actually … 10) 表示強(qiáng)調(diào)的過渡詞:in fact, indeed, necessarily, certainly, without any doubt, truly, most important … 11) 表示目的的過渡詞:for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order that, so as to, in order to, … 12) 表示列舉的過渡詞:for example , such as … 13) 表示總結(jié)性的過渡詞:in conclusion, finally, at last, in brief, as has been stated, in a word, in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking … 4. 不會(huì)表達(dá),另辟蹊徑 中考作文給分是以要點(diǎn)和語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確度而定,不以文采打分。造句越簡(jiǎn)單準(zhǔn)確越好,造復(fù)合句容易出錯(cuò),容易被扣分,閱卷場(chǎng)上有句話:“錯(cuò)誤面前人人平等,文采好不加分”。如遇到個(gè)別要點(diǎn)表達(dá)不出來或難以表達(dá),可采用變通的辦法,化難為易,化繁為簡(jiǎn)??傊?,所造句子要正確、得體、符合英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣。 (1) 迂回而行 當(dāng)漢語(yǔ)詞義不會(huì)用英語(yǔ)表達(dá)時(shí),可以想一個(gè)與這個(gè)漢語(yǔ)詞義相似的幾種詞義。擴(kuò)展思路,然后從英語(yǔ)中找出一個(gè)與其詞義相近的代替。這樣可有異曲同工之妙。 (2) 小詞大用 漢語(yǔ)中有些語(yǔ)意看來很復(fù)雜很文雅,但在英語(yǔ)中可用一些常用詞表達(dá)。下面這些詞可能在你的書面表達(dá)中很有用:take, have, get, make, e, go, do, see, show, happy, nice, kind, help 等。 (3) 借花獻(xiàn)佛 有時(shí)書面表達(dá)中需要的單詞或詞組或許在試卷中的其他地方出現(xiàn)。因?yàn)閯倓傋鲞^題,記憶猶新,那么就可信手拈來,為我所用。 5. 錦上添花,量力而行 如果你還有時(shí)間和精力,想把書面表達(dá)寫得更好,那么,請(qǐng)注意以下幾點(diǎn): (1) 句型多樣化,不要I(We)……到底,使人覺得乏味。 (2) 適當(dāng)使用一些并列句或主從復(fù)合句。 (3) 進(jìn)一步描繪人或事物時(shí),適當(dāng)使用定語(yǔ)從句。 (4) 適當(dāng)使用分詞或分詞短語(yǔ),烘托謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。 (5) 偶爾使用一下倒裝句,增加新鮮感。 (6) 適當(dāng)調(diào)換一下狀語(yǔ)在句子中的位置,使句子不雷同。 (7) 上下句子緊接時(shí),其中完全相同的成分可以省略,以節(jié)省篇幅。 6. 書寫工整,卷面整潔 字跡要清晰,讓閱卷人看得清楚,不可字跡潦草,難以辨認(rèn),要保持卷面的整潔。 7. 寫完之后,勿忘檢查 中考作文時(shí),由于時(shí)間緊、內(nèi)容多,同學(xué)們出錯(cuò)在所難免。因此,改錯(cuò)這一環(huán)節(jié)必不可少。中考作文評(píng)卷是根據(jù)要點(diǎn)、語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確性、上下文的連貫性來給分,根據(jù)錯(cuò)誤多少來扣分。因此,中考時(shí)花幾分鐘時(shí)間用來檢查錯(cuò)誤顯得尤為重要。檢查錯(cuò)誤應(yīng)從以下幾個(gè)方面入手: (1) 格式是否有錯(cuò)。 (2) 拼寫有無錯(cuò)誤。 (3) 語(yǔ)言是否用錯(cuò)。 (4) 時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤。 (5) 標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。 (6) 人稱是否用錯(cuò)。:further more,moreover,besides,what’s more, in addition,then,etc:however,but,nevertheless,on the other hand, on the contrary, instead, etc:to tell you the truth, in fact, etc.:really,indeed,certainly,surely,above a11,etc:in the same way,just as,on the other hand,etc:in other words, that is to say, to put it another way, etc.:as long as, on the condition that, etc.: in brief,in conclusion,as a result, in short, thus, therefore, in a word, on the whole, all in all, in general, etc.