【正文】 . we can use shopping basskets not plastic bags when we go shopping and we can use both sides of the paper when we write . In a word ,if everyone pays more attention to our environment , there will be less pollution and our lives will be better.　　“There is only one earth”,I hope everyone will protect our environment well.　　Thanks!學(xué)會(huì)互助題目：請(qǐng)以“Everyone Needs Help”為題，寫一篇不少于60單詞的作文?！　veryone Needs Help1 Did you get any help from others?2 Did you give any help to people when they needed?3 Tell your story參考作文　　In our daily life, we are dealing with different kinds of people, no matter at home, in school, or at some other places. Everyone needs help, I think. And only who are willing to help others will also be helped.　 One day I saw a little girl in the street carrying a heavy schoolbag on her back. She was walking happily.　 Then suddenly an old man fell down while he was crossing a street. She ran towards him at once, but she was too short to help him to stand. I helped her and we together brought the old man to safety. He thanked us over and over. I think the little girl was, though very young, a very warmhearted person.五個(gè)妙招助你中考英語(yǔ)寫作提分一、認(rèn)真審題，確定時(shí)態(tài)人稱，同時(shí)關(guān)注題材格式　　時(shí)態(tài)：故事性文章一般用過(guò)去時(shí)，其中表達(dá)感受時(shí)可用現(xiàn)在時(shí)。說(shuō)明性或議論性文章一般用現(xiàn)在時(shí)，舉例時(shí)可用過(guò)去時(shí)?！　「鶕?jù)題目要求也會(huì)出現(xiàn)時(shí)態(tài)的交錯(cuò)使用，如過(guò)去和現(xiàn)在的對(duì)比等。如果句中出現(xiàn)了時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)，時(shí)態(tài)則要遵循時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)。如ago，last…——過(guò)去時(shí)。next，in…——將來(lái)時(shí)等?！　∪朔Q：注意在句子中人稱的統(tǒng)一?！　±纾篢hanks to the teachers, we have improved our English. 其中we和our就是人稱的統(tǒng)一?！　「袷剑鹤⒁鈺鸥袷降拈_頭和結(jié)尾?！　《?、找全信息點(diǎn)，緊扣主題，突出重點(diǎn)　　切忌只看表格中或所列3中的信息點(diǎn)。一定把題讀全，找齊信息點(diǎn)，建議用鉛筆標(biāo)出，寫完后再涂掉。根據(jù)題目，可適當(dāng)增加合理內(nèi)容?！　√貏e注意文章要有開頭和結(jié)尾?！　∪?、成文時(shí)表述正確，文字流暢　　切忌與漢語(yǔ)提示的一一對(duì)應(yīng)，使用所學(xué)表達(dá)方法將語(yǔ)義表達(dá)出來(lái)即可。先考慮句子結(jié)構(gòu)(如主謂賓，主系表等)。同時(shí)注意短語(yǔ)的正確使用和單詞的拼寫，最好使用課本上學(xué)過(guò)的短語(yǔ)和句式。　　四、文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，重點(diǎn)句型出彩，可使文章在得分上提高一個(gè)檔次　　考慮文章的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)，使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接短語(yǔ)，使文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊?！　〕Ｓ眠B接詞：　?。篎irst of all，F(xiàn)irstly/First，Secondly/Second…And then，F(xiàn)inally，In the end，At last　?。篧hat is more，Besides，Moreover，F(xiàn)urthermore，In addition　?。篐owever，On the contrary，but ,Although+clause( 從句)，In spite of+n/doing　　On the one hand…On the other hand…Some…，while others…　　 ：Because，As, So，Thus，Therefore，As a result　?。篒n other words　?。篎or example，句子。 For instance，句子。 such as+n./doing　?。篒n fact　?。篈s far as I know，In my opinion　?。篒n short，In a word，In conclusion，In summary　　文中正確使用兩三個(gè)好的句型，如：賓語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句、動(dòng)名詞做主語(yǔ)等?！　≠e語(yǔ)從句舉例：I believe Tianjin will be more beautiful and prosperous.　　狀語(yǔ)從句舉例：If everyone does something for the environment, our hometown will bee clean and beautiful.　　動(dòng)名詞做主語(yǔ)舉例：Reading books in the sun is bad for our eyes.　　It39。s bad for our eyes to read books in the sun.　　常用狀語(yǔ)從句句型：　　1)時(shí)間 when，not…until，as soon as 2)目的 so that+clause。 to do(為了) 3)結(jié)果 so…that+clause，too…to do(太……以至于……) 4)條件 if，unless(除非)，as long as(只要) 5)讓步though，although，even though，even if, no matter what/when/where/who/which/how 6)比較as…as…，not so…as…，than　　五、認(rèn)真檢查，檢查信息點(diǎn)是否全面，時(shí)態(tài)、人稱是否一致，句子結(jié)構(gòu)是否清晰， 短語(yǔ)使用、 單詞拼寫是否準(zhǔn)確等。檢查后，將草稿謄寫在紙上，請(qǐng)注意按結(jié)構(gòu)分段，書寫清晰?！　∠旅媪信e一些在檢查中可發(fā)現(xiàn)的錯(cuò)誤：　　 live more and more fortable. 改正：fortably(副詞修飾動(dòng)詞)　　 can get many informations by reading ：much information(不可數(shù)名詞由much修飾)　　 has many programs in TV. 改正：There are many programs on TV.(There be句型和介詞短語(yǔ))　　 think ride a bike can keep our ：I think riding a bike can keep us healthy.(動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ))　　建議大家練習(xí)或模仿不同題材的文章，特別注意改錯(cuò)總結(jié)和吸取范文中好的結(jié)構(gòu)與表達(dá)方法，適當(dāng)運(yùn)用于自己的文章中。 7