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it is high time that people all over China attached more importance to protect environment. For another, the government should issue strict laws and regulations in order to put the situation under control and individuals should enhance their awareness of the importance of_____.Only in this way, can our society bee more harmonious and beautiful. Whether can we persist in doing this bears on the construction of socialist harmonious society. (正負(fù)都有)To conclude, ebook are just like a doubleedged sword. With them, we may have less trouble dealing with problems in life and enjoy a betterlife. However, as an old proverb says that fire is a good servant and a bad master, one point should be kept in mind that we should make sensible use of them, always being the master of them.加:提高寫作 More and more = a grow number of 副詞inevitable、unassailable、undoubtedly 爭(zhēng)論問題There has existed an idea that, and the ideas vary from person to person(不要用People). Some wound claim_____, while the idea____ is still held by some others (不用some the other, 把idea 倒裝更好) Think =maintain 、suppose、suggest、advocateGood=beneficial、profitable、decent、helpfulBad=harmful、hazardousAdvantage =merit、virtue、profitDisadvantage =demerit、drawback Be indulged to 作文重點(diǎn)少重復(fù),少用惡俗詞語(people good bad 等),少用第一二人稱,多被動(dòng),結(jié)構(gòu)變化。