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May 11th Today I had a school trip. 考點必研探究 中考話題作文 審題指導 “學校郊游 ”方面的內容。 ,時態(tài)上宜用一般過去時 ,人稱上主要以第一人稱和第三人稱為主。 ,不可遺漏。 寫作技法 本文是圖表作文。圖表作文的特點是 :材料清晰 ,一目了然 ,內容充足 ,稍作發(fā)揮即可??捎?“五步法 ”寫圖表類作文。 第一步 :看清要求 ,仔細審表。 第二步 :分好段落或層次 ,列好提綱。 第三步 :初定手稿。 第四步 :潤色修改。 第五步 :最后定稿。 考點必研探究 中考話題作文 寫作提綱 導圖一 導圖二 考點必研探究 中考話題作文 遣詞造句 單詞 cl as s m at es ,t r i p,pi ck, f ee d,w at ch 短語 b y bus ,by s ubw a y ,pl a y ch es s ,s et of f 句子 M y cl as s m at es an d I s et of f t o Ho ngx i ng F ar m . Then w e f e d t he chi c ken s . The m os t ex ci t i ng t hi ng w as t hat w e p i cke d s t r aw ber r i es a f t er l unc h . 考點必研探究 中考話題作文 滿分作文 Friday,May 11th Today I had a school weather was classmates and I set off to Hongxing Farm by bus early in the morning. The minute we arrived,we took a walk around the we fed the I threw some food to them,they ran over to me with excitement and some of them even walked into their most exciting thing was that we picked strawberries after we were picking,we ate a sweet they were! I had a wonderful time today!I do hope to go there again in the near future! 考點必研探究 中考話題作文 名師點評 本文是日記 ,屬于應用文。文章分三段。第一段 :開頭點明主題。第二段 :正文部分詳細介紹當天的經歷。第三段 :敘述當天的感受 ,結尾緊扣主題。 出彩點 :set off,with excitement,hope to do when引導的時間狀語從句及過去時的使用 ,充分體現(xiàn)了作者駕馭語言的能力和嫻熟的寫作技巧。 考點必研探究 中考話題作文 對應訓練 (2022湖南長沙 ) 假如你是李華 ,于 4月 13日星期五這一天參加了學校組織的郊游活動。請你以 school trip 為主題 ,寫一則英文日記 ,內容包括參加活動的人員、集合時間、郊游地點、交通方式、活動內容以及個人感受等。 要求 :(1)80~100詞 (開頭已給出 ,不計入總詞數(shù) )。 (2)可適當增加細節(jié) ,以使行文連貫 。 (3)日記中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名。 Friday,April 13th 考點必研探究 中考話題作文 It was sunny went on a school trip with my classmates. We visited the Greenery Farm and it was great fun. All of us met at the school gate at 7:00 went to the farm by arriving there,we were given a warm wele by the farm one of the workers showed us around the farm,where we learned a lot about farming. At noon,we had a piic,during which we enjoyed ourselves in the sunshine,singing,dancing and flying did love the fresh air and the beauty of took lots of pictures. Time flied!It was time for us to leave though we didn’t want was really an unfettable and meaningful trip for me.