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LEschool day start time school day finish timelunchtimesubjectsfacilities(設(shè) 施 )afterschool activitiesSummary good ideas a good structure +a discussion ora questionnaire put several aspects together My ideal school The writing evaluation table (評(píng)價(jià)表 ) 評(píng) 分 標(biāo) 準(zhǔn) 評(píng) 分分 值2 1 0相關(guān)性 1 Are all the paragraphs about your ideal schools?得體性 2 Do you use ‘I ’ or ‘we’ in your letter?3 Do you use the Simple Present Tense?4 Do you try to tell your reasons?準(zhǔn)確性 5Are there any errors in tense of the verbs, the usage of the vocabulary and mistakes in spelling, capital letters or punctuations?創(chuàng) 造性6 Do you try to use good phrases and different sentence structures to write about your ideal school?7 Do you try to make your aspects interesting?連貫 性 8 Do you try to use proper linking words to make your letter more fluent (流 暢 )?美 觀 性 9 Is your handwriting beautiful and tidy? /Final marksWhat do you think of your own first draft?Write an article about your ideal school.