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ging was such an interesting thing, up to now, I have learned over two hundred songs. In my spare time, I often sing songs to others. Everyone is happy to be my listeners, because of my passion and confidence. Even though I cannot be a professional singer, I still get a lot of fun from singing. Because of singing, my life bees more colourful.五 .練修改展示與評(píng)價(jià) biggest problem in my first draft is.2. a. I try to add/cut off/change/because I hope my readers can know/understand/realizebetter. b. I make such a change in my piece because I want to express/show/find a way to c. The best words/sentences/most interesting details in my pieces wrote them because. d. I am satisfied with the change most because. e. Compared with my first draft, the new version.3. What do you think of my new piece? Can you give me some advice for future improvement?Let’s edit the first draft on your own and then show.Before classWhen I wrote a story, I did/didn’t.During classI make such a little/much progress in.After classI need more/ want to. to edit your first draft and hand in your favourite version tomorrow.2. Do afterschool exercises.3. Prepare for next unit.