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ents …Maybe he feels … I (don’t) think … because …Introduction(Para1)Main body(Para2amp。3)Conclusion(Para4)Step 3 Writing.The standards:Step 4 要點(diǎn) 布局 連貫 時(shí)態(tài) 拼寫(xiě) 書(shū)寫(xiě) 字?jǐn)?shù)3 4 1 1 2 2 1 1Sample writingThe man in the advertisement is wearing an orange Tshirt and blue trousers. This is interesting because these two colours have different meanings Orange represents joy and it can cheer you up if you are feeling blue. Blue represents sadness and calm. I think he is very happy ,but he also looks very busy and stressed so he needs to calm down.His glasses are black, which represents power and trust. Maybe the man wants to show his power in order to let others believe in him and buy the mobile phone. His shoes are white, which represents calm and peace. It balances the powerful black.Generally speaking on the whole ,I do not think that this is a good mobile phone advertisement because most people would rather relax and feel calm than be busy like the man in the advertisement. It seems that with such a mobile phone, you will be as busy as he is .Rome isn’t built in a day. The more you read, the more you get。The more you practice, the better your writing will b