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Free Blood Donation 1. 無償獻(xiàn)血的意義; 2. 作為一名大學(xué)生,你認(rèn)為該如何做? 【范文】 Free blood donation refers to healthy donators voluntarily giving a small amount of blood. It doesn39。t harm the donators39。 health as their bodies could make quick adjustment. It is a kind of way by which people can make contribution to society and realize selfvalue. However, some people are still unwilling to donate blood. As a college student, I think effective measures should be taken to encourage people to join in the team of blood donation. First of all, a nationwide campaign should be launched to educate people scientific knowledge about blood donation as well as the prevention and control of diseases spread via blood. Second, activities should be carried out to raise public awareness about its benefits and safety, letting them abandon their concerns. Last but not the least, government at all levels should cooperate to create a harmonious and healthy society, and improve people’s current spiritual civilization. 【點(diǎn)評】 文章 第一段 從獻(xiàn)血的定義入手,提及獻(xiàn)血對人體的影響以及獻(xiàn)血的意義,最后一句指出問題所在 有部分人不愿加入獻(xiàn)血的隊(duì)伍。第二段從自己作為大學(xué)生的角度,提出自己的意見:首先需要開展運(yùn)動(dòng),向人們傳授獻(xiàn)血方面的科學(xué)知識以及血液疾病預(yù)防知識;其次,開展提高公共意識的活動(dòng);最后各級政府部門應(yīng)該創(chuàng)建和諧健康的社會。 第一段中 make quick adjustment 意為 “快速調(diào)整 ”; make contribution to society 意為 “”為社會做貢獻(xiàn) ”; realize selfvalue 意為 “實(shí) 現(xiàn)自身價(jià)值 ”。第二段中多次使用被動(dòng)語態(tài),measures 與動(dòng)詞 take搭配, campaign 與動(dòng)詞 launch 搭配, activities 與動(dòng)詞 carry out搭配;表示列舉, First of all“首先 ”, Last but not the least“最后但并非最不重要 ”。