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【導(dǎo)讀】作者沒有一上來提示圖表內(nèi)容，而是直接奔向中心思想，也就是文章的主旨句。increaseinsth注意名詞increase后面常用到的介詞in. 對(duì)文章中心句的進(jìn)一步解釋說明，即具體說明increase. peopleaged65ormore,其中aged65ormore為后置定語，aged[adj],如aman. 說明了從起點(diǎn)到臨界點(diǎn)之前三個(gè)地區(qū)的數(shù)據(jù)變化情況，表示數(shù)據(jù)變化的表達(dá)是thefiguresgrowto,thefiguresdipto,thefigureriseto. [prep]將日本的兩段變化情形描述出來，這句話其實(shí)是兩句截然不同的兩層意思，第一層是日本2030到2040上漲幅度巨。雜化，這點(diǎn)需要不斷學(xué)習(xí)掌握。
【正文】 段都是說明起點(diǎn)的情況，先說牛排的情況，說明了兩點(diǎn)，消耗量和受歡迎的程度。 ? by far [adv] 與形容詞或副詞的比較級(jí)和最高級(jí)連用，表示強(qiáng)調(diào)程度的差異，注意by far有個(gè)獨(dú)特之處是，既可以放在 形容詞或副詞比較級(jí) 或 最高級(jí) 的前面，也可以放在它們的后面，如 It is by far the best film that I have seen for a long time. It is the best film by far that I have seen for a long time. ? with介詞短語表示補(bǔ)充 Lamb and chicken were eaten in similar quantities (around 150 grams), while much less fish was consumed (just over 50 grams). ? 用 while表示對(duì)比，把 lamb, chicken和 fish的情況均作了說明，而且一個(gè) much less說明了 fish的不受歡迎 主體二段 However, during this 25year period the consumption of beef and lamb fell dramatically to approximately 100 grams and 55 grams respectively. ? 說明了 beef, lamb的下降趨勢(shì)，由于 beef 和 lamb的下降趨勢(shì)類似，因此 放在一起講 The consumption of fish also declined, but much less significantly to just below 50 grams, so although it remained the least popular food, consumption levels were the most stable. ? fish情形說明了三個(gè)特征：下降（ decline），歡迎度最低（ the least popular food），消費(fèi)量很穩(wěn)定（ Consumption levels ere the most stable） ? 表示下降的趨勢(shì) fall to+數(shù)字， decline to + 數(shù)字 ? fall dramatically to 用 dramatically修飾 ? decline, but much less significantly to 用 but much less significantly修飾 主體三段 The consumption of chicken, on the other hand, showed an upward trend, overtaking that of lamb in 1980 and that of beef in 1989. ? 說明 chicken的上漲趨勢(shì)，表達(dá)為 show an upward trend ? overtake 表明了兩個(gè)交叉點(diǎn)，如果是 “被超越 ”，這句就可以改成 being overtaken by By 2020 it had soared to almost 250 grams per person per week. ? 說明了 chicken的終點(diǎn)，注意這里運(yùn)用了 had soared to過去完成時(shí)態(tài)，不是表示過 去的過去，而是表示過去的完成狀態(tài) 結(jié)尾段 Overall, the graph shows how the consumption of chicken increased dramatically while the popularity of these other foods decreased over the period. ? 典型的一句話總結(jié)， chicken, increased 而 other foods, decreased 詞匯句型積累 這時(shí)一篇經(jīng)典的線圖范文，無論從圖形和范文結(jié)構(gòu)都很 有代表性，寫法上采用總分總的寫作框架，大家需要好好體會(huì) 表示 增長(zhǎng)下降 的表達(dá) , 還需注意修飾這些變化的詞 ? 下降 fall dramatically to。 decline, but much less significantly to, decrease ? 增長(zhǎng) show an upward trend, soar to, increase dramatically。 ? 超越 overtake 注意 修飾數(shù)字 的詞 ? about 225 grams, approximately 100 grams, almost 250 grams ? just over 50 grams , just below grams 本文的主題就是消耗，和 B6T1一樣，也存在 消耗 的多樣表達(dá) ? 225 grams consumed, consumed過去分詞作后置定語 ? lamb and chicken were eaten, eat的被動(dòng)式作謂語 ? fish was consumed, consume的被動(dòng)式作謂語 ? the consumption of beef and lamb, consumption名詞
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