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upport the statement that it is better to _________.五:范文對照 1:A much debated issue these days is whether the CCTV Spring Festival Gala(慶典,演出)should be :People who believe it should be cancelled point out that it is old and the programs are not interesting. 3:They also say that people can do many other interesting things such as visit friends and play puter games. 4:In spite of all these claims, quiet a few people agree that the CCTV Spring Festival Gala has bee an important part of our new :For one thing,it brings family members together,and for another,some programs are very :Some programs make people think. 7:To be franc,I am inclined to side with the :I believe watching the CCTV Spring Festival Gala has bee our :It is our tradition .10:I hope the CCTV Spring Festival Gala will bee better with every new year. 修改范文 1: A much debated issue these days is whether the CCTV Spring Festival Gala,the nationwide live new year celebration party,should be retained or :Its opponents insist that the Gala should not be allowed to :They point out that the evening obsolete and the programs are far from :They also say that bored viewers may as well choose many other substitutes on New Year39。s Eave,for example ,visiting close friends,playing fascinating puter games,or simply chatting with longparted parents. 5:In spite of all these claims, quiet a few people agree that the celebration has bee an indispensable part of our new :For one thing,it brings family members,far or near,together,seated into the same sofa,and for another,some short plays and crosstalks are very funny while other shows are thoughtprovoking. 7:To be franc,I am inclined to side with the :I believe that all Chinese people have been accustomed to appreciating this night show,and it has bee part of our :I hope the CCTV Gala will add more flavor and pleasure to our Spring Festival in the years to e. 六:小結(jié)作文奪高分,在不跑題的基礎(chǔ)上,內(nèi)容雖重要,但關(guān)鍵是語言的包裝。在寫作過程中或事后檢查時,將相同的詞換成同義詞,上意詞或代詞,小詞換成大詞,概括的詞換成具體的詞,名詞前面加形容詞,形容詞前面加副詞,名詞前面加同位語或后置定語,動詞前加副詞。簡單句可以按照他們之間的關(guān)系進行連接,變成并列句或者主從復(fù)合句。分?jǐn)?shù)就可以上升了!