【正文】 _________【答案】During the May Day Holiday, I went to Beijing for a visit with my parents. We left Tianjin at 7:30 on the morning of May 1st, and we took the BeijingTianjin Intercity Railway to get there. It was a fast and fortable journey and it took us about half an hour to arrive there. To our joy, the weather was pleasant. And we began our twodaytrip in Beijing.First of all, we went to see the Palace Museum as soon as we got to Beijing. We were very excited when we saw the Palace Museum and took a lot of photos there. We listened to the tour guide, and knew more knowledge about our Chinese history and traditional culture. What39。s more, I bought my good friends many lovely presents which is related to the theme of the Palace Museum.On early morning of the second day, we went to walk up the Great Wall. It was one of the most famous wonders in the world. Millions of tourists from all over the world visit it every year. After that, we took the underground to the city center, Wangfujing Street .At that moment, we all felt very hungry, so we decided to try Peking Roast Duck. In my opinion, Beijing food was very delicious.During this trip, I not only tried the delicious Beijing food, but also learned more about the Chinese traditional culture as well as the long history of China. Though I felt tired after the trip, it was a meaningful experience and I will never forget it.【解析】【詳解】以 “A Trip to Beijing”為題，寫一篇短文，向你的同學(xué)們講述一下你的北京之旅。記敘自己的一次旅行，審題時注意本文使用一般過去時，敘述事實的時候以時間為順序。用合適的連詞把各句連接成一個有機(jī)的整體，同時要用相對高級的詞匯提升文章的層次和文采。在發(fā)表你的看法的時候，寫作的時候要注意要點(diǎn)的全覆蓋，不能有遺漏或省略，同時要注意使用合適的連接詞和較高級的詞匯。注意所使用的語法規(guī)則的準(zhǔn)確性和合理性。變化使用多種句式讓文章更有亮點(diǎn)?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。同時要注意使用合適的連接詞和較高級的詞匯。注意所使用的語法規(guī)則的準(zhǔn)確性和合理性。變化使用多種句式讓文章更有亮點(diǎn)。We listened to the tour guide, and knew more knowledge about our Chinese history and traditional culture. What39。s more, I bought my good friends many lovely presents which is related to the theme of the Palace Museum..等這些句子運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。8．書面表達(dá)根據(jù)要求完成短文寫作，請將作文寫在答題卡指定的位置上。每年春節(jié)，每個孩子都能收到來自長輩的壓歲錢（lucky money）。隨著生活水平的提高，大部分孩子得到越來越多的壓歲錢，有些甚至通過微信(WeChat)或支付寶(Alipay)收壓歲錢。同學(xué)們該如何管理自己的錢，讓自己的錢用得更有意義？請結(jié)合自己的實際寫一篇文章，詞數(shù) 80 詞以上，文中不能出現(xiàn)真實校名和人名。內(nèi)容包括如下：1. 你的壓歲錢的來源和用途；2. 對合理使用壓歲錢的建議（至少 3 點(diǎn)）；3. 呼吁大家節(jié)約用錢，把自己的壓歲錢用在最需要、最有意義的地方?！敬鸢浮縀very Spring Festival I receive a lot of lucky money from my parents and relatives. Now I even get it through WeChat or Alipay. I usually buy some of my favorite books, school things and some fancy clothes. Sometimes I also buy some gifts for my parents.In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video games. Second, it is a good idea to buy something useful for our parents or teachers so that we can show our love to them. What is more, why not donate our lucky money to the poor kids in need? Helping others makes us happy.All in all, let us manage our lucky money properly. We should use our money in a meaningful way.【解析】【詳解】每年春節(jié)，每個孩子都能收到來自長輩的壓歲錢（luckymoney）。隨著生活水平的提高，大部分孩子得到越來越多的壓歲錢，有些甚至通過微信(WeChat)或支付寶(Alipay)收壓歲錢。同學(xué)們該如何管理自己的錢，讓自己的錢用得更有意義？這是一篇給材料作文，本題所給材料比較詳細(xì)，寫作中注意將所給內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，不能逐字翻譯。通過閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱就是第一人稱，時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意謂語動詞的變化。動筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡單提綱，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞?！军c(diǎn)睛】文章使用了很好的短語和句子：In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video 。9．假如你是李華，下周你們學(xué)校將要組織學(xué)生開展“父親節(jié)活動計劃”分享活動，你打算先分享給你們班交換生Peter，希望聽聽他的看法。請用英語寫一封電子郵件，告訴他你的計劃是什么，你為什么這么做，并表達(dá)你渴望得到他建議的心情。提示詞語： gift, love, opinion提示問題： ● What’s your plan for Father’s Day? ● Why do you do so? ● What do you want Peter to do?Dear Peter,How is it going? We will share the plan for Father’s Day next Yours,Li Hua【答案】例文Dear Peter,How is it going?We will share the plan for Father’s Day next week. I am going to do some meaningful things for my father. Firstly, I am going to buy a beautiful card for him. And then, I plan to cook him a big meal. Though I am not good at cooking, I can ask my mother for help.I will do this because I love my father deeply. He works very hard every day to support my family. Would you please give me some advice? I am eager to receive your early reply. Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫作，但寫作時要按郵件格式寫。在寫作時應(yīng)承接短文開頭；第二段寫你為什么這么做；第三段表達(dá)你渴望得到他建議的心情。例文點(diǎn)評：例文采用的是三段式；用第一人稱來敘述父親節(jié)計劃；時態(tài)采用的是一般現(xiàn)在時為主，描述具體建議時，描寫細(xì)致，條理清晰。高分亮點(diǎn)：短語：the plan for Father’s Day；some meaningful things；buy a beautiful card for him；give me some advice。句型：Though I am not good at cooking, I can ask my mother for help；I am eager to receive your early reply。