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d it39。s expensive to travel to the UK, which costs 20000 yuan, But I still want to travel to England.I hope I will have a good time there!【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文。中考后暑假即將開始,你和一些同學準備結(jié)伴出國旅行。旅行社提供了兩個國家供你選擇游玩。要求根據(jù)旅行社提供的信息將你的選擇用英文向同學們介紹。首先認真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點;然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達;然后緊扣要點,動筆寫作。在寫作時,注意連句成篇,保持文章的連貫性,要層次清楚,要點分明,中心突出。同時要注意語言的表述應該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應該符合英語的表達習慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫太長的復合句;盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細心復核檢查,確保正確無誤。6. 假如你叫李華, 三年的初中生活即將結(jié)束, 你將迎來漫長的暑假, 你的筆友Peter寫信來詢問你的暑假計劃。請根據(jù)表格中所給的基本信息給你的筆友回信, 告訴他你的暑假計劃。要求:1. 回信必須包含表格中的所有信息, 并可適當發(fā)揮, 字數(shù)在80字左右, 開頭和結(jié)尾不計入總字數(shù)。2. 回信中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名, 否則將以零分計。3. 書面表達必須寫在答題卡上, 如在本卷上作答, 一律不得分。Your planswhatwhyPlan onevisit grandparentsmiss themPlan twovisit Beijing and Shanghaiwant to open my eyesPlan threelearn senior(高中)English and math by myselfdream to go to a famous university………….Dear peter,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YoursLi Hua【答案】例文Dear peter ,Thank you for your letter, in the letter, you asked me how I planned my summer vacation, now, let me tell you all about it.Firstly I will visit my grandparents as soon as I leave school, I haven’t see them for a long time, I miss them so much. Then , I am going to take trip to Beijing and Shanghai to open up my eyes, as we all know, both cities are so beautiful and important, I believe I can learn a lot by travelling. After ing back, I will learn senior subjects by myself to get ready for the ing senior school, because I dream to go to a famous university. That’s all about my plans, please write me soon and tell me about yours. Yours Lihua【解析】【詳解】本文分三個自然段。第一段點出文章主題you asked me how I planned my summer vacation, now, let me tell you all about it。第二自然段用Firstly,Then ,After ing back有序列出三個計劃。文章結(jié)尾用That’s all about my plans, please write me soon and tell me about yours總結(jié)。另外,文中為第一人稱,時態(tài)主要為一般將來時will visit my grandparents,I am going to take trip,I will learn senior subjects等。7.書面表達初中的生活美好而短暫。臨近中考,壓力驟增,父母的嘮叨,老師的殷殷期望,自己的學業(yè)與夢想……傾訴是一副良方。請給七月的你寫一封信,談談你身邊存在的問題,你打算如何解決,鼓勵自己生活還有詩和遠方。請根據(jù)以下提示寫一封給自己的信。要求:1.表達清楚,語法正確,語句通順,上下文連貫; 2.必須包括思維導圖中所有的相關(guān)信息,并適當發(fā)揮; 3.詞數(shù):100詞左右(開頭結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)) Dear Future Me, It is pleasant to spare my free time to municate with you.I am so worried that … Your sincerely【答案】It is pleasant to spare my free time to municate with you.I am so worried that I can’t deal with all the problems present, which are mainly caused by two ,I can’t ignore my parents’ expectation .With the price of houses rising, they always work hard. However, they are more worried about their children’s exam as the final exam is approaching. Second, there is endless homework and tests every day. Therefore, I need change myself. In order to adapt to the situation better, I should develop good life habits to keep healthy. Then making friends and municating with them can make me happier. What’s more, there exist dreams and beautiful future waiting for us. I should not be pessimistic (悲觀的). So never give in to the difficulties and stress easily. I believe I deserve having success.【解析】【詳解】本文寫給未來的自己,目的在于傾訴壓力,尋求方法,并重拾信心。第一段指出導致壓力的兩個方面First,I can’t ignore my parents’ expectation . Second, there is endless homework and tests every , Second點出。第二自然段提到釋放壓力的方法,應用In order to表目的。用What’s more表遞進結(jié)構(gòu)。并用祈使句So never give in to the difficulties and stress easily點題呼吁。整篇文章層次分明,結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。8.書面表達請根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,以My lowcarbon life為題寫一篇英語短文,談談你的“低碳生活”,以及你對“低碳生活”的認識。提示:1. 出行方式2. 不浪費紙、水、電等3. 其他低碳生活的方式(補充一點)4. 低碳生活的作用注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右,開頭已經(jīng)寫好,不計入總詞數(shù);2.回復須包括所有要點,可適當發(fā)揮,使全文連貫、通順;3.文中不得提及真實的人名等相關(guān)信息。My lowcarbon lifeLowcarbon life is a kind of lifestyle. It’s a habit to save all the sources of energy around us. It’s important to protect our environment. ________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My lowcarbon lifeLowcarbon life is a kind of lifestyle. It’s a habit to save all the sources of energy around us. It’s important to protect our environment. First, I always go to school on foot and tell my parents to walk to work instead of driving the car. Second, I save water and electricity by turning off the taps , fans。 TV sets and lights in time when I don39。t need them. What39。s more, water is reused by us in my family all the time. Third, I use the both sides of the paper. I think it is good to make full use of paper. By doing this, we can save many trees. At last, I would go shopping with basket rather than plastic bags. I believe our life will bee better and better if we can do these things. Lower carbon, happier life. Let39。s take actions.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文。請根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,以My lowcarbon life為題寫一篇英語短文,談談你的“低碳生活”,以及你對“低碳生活”的認識。本文時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時。人稱主要為第一人稱。認真閱讀所給提示要點,確定主題,根據(jù)要點列出提綱,所寫內(nèi)容必須包括所有要點,可適當發(fā)揮,語句通順,意思連貫,書寫規(guī)范。寫完以后,注意再讀一遍,看看有無單詞拼寫、標點、語法錯誤(時態(tài)、主謂一致等)。本文提綱:我的低碳生活低碳生活是一種生活方式。節(jié)約我們周圍所有的能源是一種習慣。保護我們的環(huán)境很重要。首先,我總是步行去上學,告訴父母步行去上班,而不要開車。其次,當我不需要的時候,我會及時關(guān)掉水龍頭、風扇、電視機和電燈,以節(jié)約用水和用電。更重要的是,我們家里的水一直都在重復利用。第三,我使用紙張的兩面。我認為充分利用紙張是件好事。通過這樣做,我們可以拯救許多樹木。最后,我會帶著籃子購物而不使用塑料袋。我相信如果我們能做這些事情,我們的生活會越來越好。低碳,快樂生活。我們采取行動吧。【點睛】書面表達要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。語言要規(guī)范,時態(tài)運用要正確,敘述清楚條里,學習中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用。注意書寫的規(guī)范:大小寫、標點符號等的正確運用。注意檢查:單詞拼寫、語法、動詞時態(tài)、語序、主謂一致等。寫作六步法::文體,時態(tài),人稱。:要點是否齊全,適當補充。:通過增加狀語,定語,連詞,使句子意思飽滿充實。,合理使用連詞。:拼寫是否錯誤,語法時態(tài)是否正確,連詞是否恰當?shù)取#鹤⒁鈺鴮懝ふ烙^整潔。9.你校正在舉辦以“社會主義核心價值觀”為主題的英語演講比賽,你準備從“和善”這一點展開論述,請根據(jù)提示,以“Kindness is a gift”為題,寫一篇英語演講稿。要求: 1)表達清楚,語法正確,上下文連貫;2)必須包括提示中所有信息,并適當發(fā)揮;3)詞數(shù):100詞左右(開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù));4)不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。Kindness is a giftDear classmates,I think kindness is a special gift to everyone. How can we show it to others in our daily life?