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y. She’s strict,but kind. The classrooms are on the right of the teaching building. You can see many flowers around the teaching building. Near the teaching building,you can see a park. It’s small but beautiful. There is a river in the park. You can see some fish swimming in the river. How lively they are! Over the river,there is a small bridge. There is a gym in our school. In the gym,you can see many sports equipments. Near the gym,there is a big playground. Look!There are many students playing football. They are so happy! I like my school very much! 評語:本篇作文條例清晰,邏輯清楚,用詞準(zhǔn)確。小作者很詳細(xì)、生動地介紹了自己的學(xué)校。