【正文】 _________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Nick,How’s everything going?Our school is holding an English reading festival this June. I’m very interested in it. There are many different activation in the festival such as reading good English books. sharing good stories and so on. It’s a good chance for us to learn more about western cultures. However, I have some problems. First, I don’t have enough books. For example, I want to get some books about western history. Next, I’m not so good at English, I have trouble in reading. Would you please share some good books with me and give me some advice on reading?I expect to hear from you soon.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】這是一篇書信作文。假如你是李華，你校正舉辦英語(yǔ)讀書節(jié)活動(dòng),你在參與活動(dòng)的過程中遇到一些困難。請(qǐng)給你的英國(guó)朋友Nick寫一封向他求助。首先要注意書信的書寫格式，文章時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要為第一人稱。在寫作時(shí)，要注意理順要點(diǎn)，防止漏寫；注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查字?jǐn)?shù)是否符合要求。參考要點(diǎn)：(時(shí)間、內(nèi)容……)。(如：缺少相關(guān)書籍、英語(yǔ)閱讀困難……)；。8． 《朗讀者》、《中國(guó)詩(shī)詞大會(huì)》等文化類節(jié)目喚醒了中國(guó)人的閱讀情結(jié)。為了激發(fā)市民們的閱讀興趣,廣州開展了“書香羊城”活動(dòng)。 請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文,談?wù)勀銓?duì)閱讀的看法,并對(duì)如何培養(yǎng)閱讀習(xí)慣和開展班級(jí)閱讀活動(dòng)提出建議。閱讀的好處 閱讀使人睿智補(bǔ)充12個(gè)看法 培養(yǎng)閱讀習(xí)慣每天至少閱讀20分鐘補(bǔ)充12個(gè)建議開展班級(jí)閱讀活動(dòng)觀看《朗讀者》,分享節(jié)目推薦的好作品。補(bǔ)充12個(gè)建議注意::《朗讀者》(Readers): 作品: works (n.):(文章的開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)):、姓名等任何個(gè)人信息,否則不予評(píng)分.The activity of “Reading in Guangzhou “has been held in Guangzhou for quite a while.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】The activity of “Reading in Guangzhou” has been held in Guangzhou for quite a while. Reading makes us wise . It can not only help us learn more about the world but also bring us happiness. Keeping reading every day is a good habit. We should spend at least twenty minutes in reading after class. What’s more, try to make notes for good points while reading. We can also hold some reading activities in our class. For example, watch some good programs such as Readers and then share some good books introduced by the readers. Also, a book corner can be set up in our classroom so that we can read at any time after class.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文，內(nèi)容包括提示內(nèi)容以及談?wù)勛约簩?duì)閱讀的看法，并對(duì)培養(yǎng)閱讀習(xí)慣和開展班級(jí)閱讀活動(dòng)方面提出建議，人稱為第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，同時(shí)注意恰當(dāng)使用連詞使文章邏輯關(guān)系更為緊密。高分句型：1. It can not only help us learn more about the world but also bring us happiness. 它不僅能幫助我們更多地了解這個(gè)世界，而且能帶給我們幸福。not only …but also… 不但……而且……，并列連詞短語(yǔ)。2. Keeping reading every day is a good habit. 每天堅(jiān)持閱讀是一個(gè)好習(xí)慣。Keeping reading every day動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)作主語(yǔ)。3. Also, a book corner can be set up in our classroom so that we can read at any time after ，我們的教室里還可以設(shè)置一個(gè)讀書角，以便課后隨時(shí)閱讀。此句是一個(gè)復(fù)合句，主句是含有情態(tài)動(dòng)詞的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，so that引導(dǎo)的是目的狀語(yǔ)從句。9．“苔花如米小,也學(xué)牡丹開?！蔽覀兇蠖鄶?shù)人雖然微不足道,但也能有所作為。請(qǐng)以O(shè)ne thing I felt very proud of 為題用英語(yǔ)寫以寫一篇短文,描述你曾經(jīng)做過得引以自豪一件事情。要求:。 【答案】One thing I felt very proud ofI will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday. I tried many times but failed before she came back. Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned. However, I didn’t give up, and finally I succeeded. Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears. I felt proud of cooking on my own.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以O(shè)ne thing I felt very proud of為題，介紹自己曾經(jīng)做過的一件令自己感到自豪的事情。作文是開放式的，題目中只給了主題，具體的寫作內(nèi)容，需要學(xué)生們自己發(fā)揮想象力去補(bǔ)充。審題可知，體裁是記敘文，記敘一件自己做過的事情，且是能讓自己感到自豪的，故文章應(yīng)使用一般過去時(shí)，人稱以第一人稱為主。短文應(yīng)由開頭、主體和結(jié)尾三部分組成，開頭引出話題；第二部分為中心，具體描述事情的過程；最后一部分簡(jiǎn)要描寫一下自己的感受。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)是不同的，不能按照漢語(yǔ)思維逐詞翻譯，寫漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)，應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，使用較常見、易于把握的簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)，如主謂賓或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)。為提升作文檔次，穿插使用并列句或復(fù)合句，如賓語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句等。或使用祈使句、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞、感嘆句等特殊句式結(jié)構(gòu)。語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，以使文意連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求描述了自己做過的一件引以為豪的事情。短文有如下幾個(gè)特點(diǎn)：首先短文內(nèi)容完整、充實(shí)，敘述具體，詳細(xì)，作者描寫了自己做飯給媽媽慶祝生日這件事，符合題目要求。文章分三段，第一段用一句話引出話題；第二段詳細(xì)描寫了事情的過程；最后一段寫了自己的感受。結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，安排合理。其次短文里使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，文章以一般過去時(shí)、第一人稱敘述，注意了謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞過去式的變化，尤其是不規(guī)則動(dòng)詞的過去式。語(yǔ)言得體，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，句式結(jié)構(gòu)以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，也使用了時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句、并列句、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞等復(fù)雜句式結(jié)構(gòu)。短文中較好的句型和短語(yǔ)有：I will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.、To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday、Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned、Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears等。