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them in my spare time. I can get along well with my teachers and classmates. I can help each other with my classmates. At the same time, I expect my school life is colorful, after class I can listen to music, play chess and basketball. To get more useful knowledge or information, I can surf the Internet. I will keep a good eating habit. Do exercise often to stay in good spirits. Try my best to make great progress.As long as I stick to it, I can achieve my dream.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文,題目中給出的材料較為齊全。動筆前應根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語言,列出簡單提綱,確定句子的時態(tài),關鍵單詞等問題。寫作中注意將以前的自己和現(xiàn)在的自己介紹清楚,并介紹一下自己的愿望。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)和將來時態(tài),注意時態(tài)和主謂一致等問題。寫作中注意使用連詞,做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關系。8.“ 業(yè)精于勤而荒于嬉, 行成于思而毀于隨” 。 良好的學習習慣是成功的一半, 只有擁有了良好的學習習慣, 學習才能得到提高。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“如何養(yǎng)成良好的學習習慣”為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華,請用英語寫一篇短文投稿,談談你是怎么做的,以及為什么這樣做。提示詞語: get ready for, take notes, on time提示問題: ●What do you do to develop your good learning habits in your daily life?●Why do you do so?As a middle school student,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】As a middle school student, it39。s important for us to develop our good learning habits. I often do some things in my daily life:First, I get ready for new lessons before class. Second, I listen to the teachers carefully and take notes of the important points in every class. Third, I always finish my homework on time. At the same time, I do much reading every day. Finally, I work hard and turn to the teachers and classmates when I have difficulties.Only in this way can I learn better and improve myself faster.【解析】【詳解】1. 題干解讀:這是一篇提綱式作文。以“如何養(yǎng)成良好的學習習慣”為主題寫一篇英文稿件,主要談談自己的好的學習習慣。在寫作時,要根據(jù)提出的幾個問題為中心圍繞展開,再進行適當?shù)难由臁?. 例文點評:文章采用三段式,以總分總的形式將文章主題描述的清晰明了。文中采用first, second, finally表述自己的觀點,語言層次感很強,表達準確。3. 高分亮點:短語:get ready for;take notes;on time;daily life;important points。句型:It is +adj. for sb. to do sth.;when引導的時間狀語從句。9.你校正在舉辦以“社會主義核心價值觀”為主題的英語演講比賽,你準備從“和善”這一點展開論述,請根據(jù)提示,以“Kindness is a gift”為題,寫一篇英語演講稿。要求: 1)表達清楚,語法正確,上下文連貫;2)必須包括提示中所有信息,并適當發(fā)揮;3)詞數(shù):100詞左右(開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù));4)不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。Kindness is a giftDear classmates,I think kindness is a special gift to everyone. How can we show it to others in our daily life? That’s all for my speech. Thank you!【答案】例文Dear classmates,I think kindness is a special gift to everyone. How can we show it to others in our daily life?When we’re at home, it’s important to show our respect to our parents. Helping them do some housework will make us close to each other. We should also be kind enough to our neighbours in our neighborhood. While they’re away from home, we can keep an eye on their houses. At school, tell our classmates to ask for help whenever they need. If one of them is absent from school, we can help them with the lesson. On the bus, we should take care of the elderly by giving them our seats. And once there is someone who tries to fight with the bus driver, it’s better for us to stop him.I hope everyone can be kind to others so that we can live in a world full of love.That’s all for my speech. Thank you!【解析】【詳解】你校正在舉辦以“社會主義核心價值觀”為主題的英語演講比賽,你準備從“和善”這一點展開論述,請根據(jù)提示,以“Kindness is a gift”為題,寫一篇英語演講稿。內(nèi)容要求中指出了寫作要點,動筆前一定要認真閱讀內(nèi)容要點,根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點組織材料,確定句子人稱,時態(tài)等問題。可以先把各要點用句子表達出來,然后再組合成文。寫作中注意語意通順,符合邏輯關系,為了使短文更顯得有邏輯性,在列舉自己的優(yōu)勢時,可以適當使用序數(shù)詞。舉出的例子要有說服力,想象合理并適當發(fā)揮,不能遺漏要點。注意采用一些習慣的句式,固定短語,以使自己的演講稿更有文采。寫完后多讀幾遍,適當修改?!军c睛】這是一篇非常優(yōu)秀的文章,作者用到了一些好的句型:it’s important to show our respect to our parents. Helping them do some housework will make us close to each other.;If one of them is absent from school, we can help them with the 。