【正文】 ____________________________________________________________【答案】題目一：Dear John, I39。m sorry to ask for absence fom your English lesson. I39。m going to aend a traditional talent show at 2:00 tomorrow aftermoon.In order to let the foreign students in our school know more about Chinese culture, our school holds this talent show. I will introduce Chinese painting in English.I will ask my classmates to help me with my English. And I promise to finish my homework on time.Your loring student Li Hua題目二：Among all my teachers, my English teacher impressed me most. She is always kind and helpful.last year, I did badly in a big test and I found English too hard. As soon as she found out this, she talked with me and gave me some helpful advice. With her encouragement, I have made great progress.I really want to sayThank you for helping me. I love you! to my English teacher.【解析】【詳解】、題目①本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，作文要求寫一張請假條，因此格式要遵循假條的格式。假條的內(nèi)容——時間和事由均給出，結(jié)合提示問題可知假條主要從三個方面寫，這三個方面需要作者自由發(fā)揮一部分內(nèi)容。本例文是一篇應(yīng)用文，人稱為第一人稱，時態(tài)是以一般將來時為主。例文分成三段，根據(jù)提示問題，每段成一行，這種寫法條理清晰，分段明確。高分亮點：ask for；absence from；一般將來時；in order to；help sb with sth；promise to do；on time。題目②題目二是一篇話題作文，根據(jù)話題可知這是一篇感謝老師的文章。人稱應(yīng)該為第一人稱。注意給出的提示問題，文章要包含這三部分的內(nèi)容。本例文以第一人稱書寫，時態(tài)主要是一般過去時和一般現(xiàn)在時。文章第一段介紹“我”要感謝的老師，第二段用一般過去時介紹為什么“我”要感謝老師，第三段表達 “我”的感謝。分段明確，語句簡潔不啰嗦，時態(tài)運用合理。高分亮點：Among all my teachers；did badly in；As soon as；found out；talked with；現(xiàn)在完成時；want to do sth。8． 人類只有一個地球。根據(jù)提示，以“Saving the Earth”為題，寫一篇80詞左右的短文。提示: ；，損害健康；，亂排廢水；，使我們的家園更加美麗。 【答案】Saving the EarthThe earth is our home. We should take care of it. But some things we have done are bad for the earth. We have polluted the earth and made it sick. We cut down too many trees and change rich land into desert. Many factories pour waste water into rivers and lakes. Pollution has caused some serious problems. For example, much of the land is poor, some rivers and lakes are dirty. Even the temperature of the earth is rising. The earth is crying for help.What shall we do to save it? My suggestions are that we should plant more trees, put the rubbish into dustbins and stop factories from pouring waste water directly into rivers. After all, we have only one earth. We should do everything we can to protect it, or we’ll be punished and lose our home.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文,動筆前首先要認(rèn)真審題,弄清題意。然后根據(jù)主題組織材料，確定寫作內(nèi)容。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)進行敘述。語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系?！玖咙c說明】這篇短文包含了所有要點，能圍繞內(nèi)容要點適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，內(nèi)容具體、豐富。應(yīng)用了較豐富的語言結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯，用詞準(zhǔn)確、句子通順、行文連貫、表達清楚，具有較強的語言運用能力。層次清晰，語言地道，主題鮮明，內(nèi)容翔實，格式正確，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。使用了一些比較好的字句。比如：one of the biggest problems in the world；such as比如；not only……but also……；We must try our best to……等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用, 讓文章更出彩?？键c：考查提綱類作文9．假如你是李華，你的美國朋友Johnson打算暑假來合肥玩，而合肥的夏天經(jīng)常持續(xù)高溫，請你根據(jù)以下提示，用英文給他寫一封郵件，告訴他防暑降溫的方法?！?清淡飲食； ● 合理休息； ● 適當(dāng)運動； ● ……注意: ；，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；、學(xué)校名和地名；，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Johnson Wele to Hefei. It’s a very beautiful city. But it’s often very hot in summer. Here is some advice on how to beat the summer I hope the advice is useful to you. Wish you a good holiday! Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jack, Wele to Hefei. It’s a very beautiful city. But it’s often very hot in summer. Here is some advice on how to beat the summer heat. First of all, you should drink more water and eat light meals, such as salads, fruit and vegetables. Next, you’d better get some sleep after lunch. Don’t stay up and make sure you get enough sleep. It’s not a good idea to stay out when it’s very hot. What39。s more, take some exercise properly. Why not take a warm shower before going to bed. Finally, if you have to go out, please remember to wear sunglasses and a hat. I hope the advice is useful to you. Wish you a good holiday! Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇關(guān)于防暑的建議，所以寫作時，比較多地用到表示建議的句型，比如You’d better… ,You should…. , It’s a good idea to do…., Why not do….? Why don’t you do….? 提出建議時要條理清晰，可以使用First,…. Second, ….. At last….等表示次序的詞。在文章最后可以提出自己的期望和祝福。寫完后記得對文章檢查復(fù)合，避免單詞拼寫及語法錯誤。本篇文章首先第一段對別人的到來表示歡迎，接著對合肥的天氣進行總的描述，并引出下文自己的建議。第二段也是文章的主體部分。用first of all, Next, What39。s more, Finally,提出了四點建議，其中用到建議的句型，例如you should，you’d better, Don’t…, It’s not a good idea to….., Why not…., please…...等。結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，層次分明，詞語及句型使用正確，很不錯的一篇文章。