【正文】 ，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達的關鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關的寫作材料。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關鍵。初寫短文。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。9．中學生在成長過程中經(jīng)常會碰到一些煩惱。假設你是李華，請根據(jù)下表提示，用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，在班會上談談你遇到的煩惱以及你自己的做法。你的煩惱你的做法個頭不高，相貌平常不必在意，相信自己父母不理解，朋友少學會溝通，友善待人學習壓力大，課外活動少……（自主發(fā)揮，至少兩點）要求：1. 詞數(shù)100左右，開頭及結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。2. 所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表格中所有的信息，并作適當?shù)陌l(fā)揮。3. 不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名、地名等相關信息。Hello everyone,Hello everyone,I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them. That’s all. Thank you!【答案】Hello everyone,I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them.I am not very tall and very mon. But I don’t care and I believe in myself.My parents don’t understand me and I have very few friends. I encourage myself to be kind to others and learn to municate with others very well.I often feel stressed because of my study and I don’t have many chances to join the afterclass activities. I will plan my time very carefully and improve my study in a very good way. Try to join as many activities as possible and achieve a balance between study and hobbies.That’s all. Thank you!【解析】試題分析：本題是一篇給材料作文，要求用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，在班會上談談你遇到的煩惱以及你自己的做法。要求從個人外貌特點、與人溝通及學習壓力等方面進行寫作。要包含表格中所有的信息，并作適當?shù)陌l(fā)揮。短文用第一人稱形式，一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。寫作亮點：短文開頭直奔主題：我想要談談我的煩惱及怎樣處理他們；后面三段分別從外貌上的煩惱、與父母交流上的障礙、學習上的壓力幾方面分別談論自己的煩惱及處理的方式，生動具體，條理分明。文中的不定式作賓補、作定語、作賓語用得準確恰當；and連接的并列句、并列謂語等等都使短文顯得簡捷生動?！究键c定位】 考查提綱類作文。10．假如你是李華，你的美國朋友Jack熱愛中國的唐詩宋詞。最近他對母親節(jié)你在博客里發(fā)的《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）很感興趣，給你寫信想了解該詩，請你根據(jù)以下提示給他回信：：孟郊：唐朝：母親為兒子做衣服：母愛的偉大注意：；，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；: 80100詞左右，信件的開頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Jack,I’m glad to hear from you. I know you are interested in this poem Song of the parting son.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,【答案】Dear Jack,I’m glad to hear from you. I know you are interested in this poem Song of the parting son. Now I’m writing to tell you something about it.Song of the parting son is one of the most popular Chinese poems. It was written by Meng Jiao, a famous poet in Tang Dynasty. It describes a mon matter in daily life—a mother making clothes for her son, which is familiar to most of us. It mainly shows how great a mother’s love can be. In a word, this short poem has touched many people’s hearts. If you have any other questions about this poem, please tell me.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】這是一篇材料作文。【詳解】根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知，這是一篇書信類文章。時態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時。人稱是第一人稱和第三人稱。英語作文一般分為三個部分：第一部分：交代寫信目的——朋友Jack熱愛中國的唐詩宋詞。我將給你介紹《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）這首詩。第二部分：文章主體部分——具體介紹《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）這首詩。：孟郊：唐朝：母親為兒子做衣服：母愛的偉大第三部分：信的結(jié)語——如果對方有任何問題，可以繼續(xù)問自己，并期待收到對方的來信。