【正文】 自己滿意的答案。根據上述提示，請以“My Unforgettable Junior High School Life”為題寫一篇文章，記錄你難忘的校園生活。首句已給出。注意：. ，句子連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；2. 短文中不得出現任何人名、校名或能夠透露你個人身份的相關信息。，信件的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。My Unforgettable Junior High School LifeHow time flies! 【答案】How time flies! My colorful junior high school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think of about myself.In the past, I was busy learning my subjects and worked hard at them. I got on well with my classmates. I was good at English. I liked playing basketball / football / volleyball. But now I am interested in history, because it is very interesting. I have many interests such as reading books, playing sports and so on. In this way, I’ve got more knowledge and improved my life.In the future, I’ll try my best to do better. I’ll learn to enjoy my school life. I’ll make it more and more beautiful. Believing myself is the key to success.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文要求我們以My Unforgettable Junior High School Life為題，回想一下自己即將過去的初中，講述難忘的初中生活。題目中用思維導圖，列出了一些文章中會用到的關鍵詞，供學生們參考使用。審題可知，這篇短文應以一般過去時、第一人稱為主來敘述。題目中并沒有給出具體的寫作內容，學生們應發(fā)揮自己的想象力，可以從自己的學習、愛好、與同學的交往、與老師的相處以及自己的感受等方面進行詳細闡述。寫作時應注意：首先要展開合理想象，補充文章細節(jié)內容，注意各部分內容之間的層次，內容要完整、充實，結構要清晰。其次應注意英語的表達習慣和漢語是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯。句子的結構要完整，可以簡單句結構為主，如主謂賓或主系表結構。為提升作文檔次，應穿插使用并列句、復合句及其他復雜句式。語句之間使用恰當的連接成分，使文意連貫、自然?！军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據題目要求，回憶了自己的初中生活，并描述了自己的感受。短文有以下幾個優(yōu)點：首先文章內容充實、完整，符合題目要求。短文中作者從自己的學習情況、與同學的交往、愛好、特長等方面進行了總結，在最后提出了對未來的希望。層次清晰，結構合理。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，文章第一段引出主題，使用了一般現在時；第二段回憶過去的生活，主要使用了一般過去時；最后對未來提出希望，用到了一般將來時。語法規(guī)范，用詞準確，注意了名詞、動詞、形容詞等的正確形式。句式結構完整，以簡單句為主，也使用了并列句、賓語從句、狀語從句等復合句句型，調整了文章節(jié)奏，提升了作文檔次。短文中較好的句型有：In the past, I was busy learning my subjects and worked hard at them、But now I am interested in history, because it is very interesting、In this way, I’ve got more knowledge and improved my life.、I’ll make it more and more beautiful. Believing myself is the key to success等等。9．“書山有路勤為徑, 學海無涯苦作舟”, 成功不會從天而降, 美好的未來需要靠不斷努力來創(chuàng)造?某英文網站正在開展以“天道酬勤” 為主題的征文活動?假如你是李華, 請用英文寫一篇短文投稿, 講述你通過勤奮, 取得進步甚至成功的經歷, 并談談你的感受?提示詞語: diligence (勤奮), make progress, effort, proud提示問題: ? What did you achieve by working hard?? What did you do to make it?? How did you feel about it?【答案】Diligence is a must for us to reach our goals. I never realized it until I tried every effort to win the English speech petition last year. It was quite a big challenge for me because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in public. To give a better performance, I made full use of my spare time to prepare for it. I recorded my lines and asked my foreign teacher to correct my pronunciation. Then I kept practising day and night. Besides, I seized every chance to speak in front of my family or friends. The more I practised, the more confident I became. In the end, I won the petition and got a prize. It was so great that all my efforts paid off. I felt so proud of myself.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文，根據材料中的相關信息介紹一下你通過勤奮, 取得進步甚至成功的經歷。所提供的材料中列舉了“書山有路勤為徑, 學海無涯苦作舟”, 成功不會從天而降, 美好的未來需要靠不斷努力來創(chuàng)造。主要從：你努力工作取得了什么成績？?你是怎么做到的？?你覺得怎么樣？這幾個方面去介紹。時態(tài)為一般過去時，人稱為第一人稱。注意作文中必須包含材料和提示詞的所有信息，并適當發(fā)揮。寫作時，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確，表達要符合英語習慣，注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯系緊密，符合邏輯關系，表達具有條理性?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縄t was quite a big challenge for me because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in public. 這對我來說是一個很大的挑戰(zhàn)，因為我對自己的英語口語沒有那么自信，在公共場合說話也很害羞。句子because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in ?！靖叻志湫投縏he more I practised, the more confident I became. 我練習得越多，就越自信。這句話用到了“the+比較級，the+比較級”結構。表示“越……，就越……”的意思。