【正文】 have more pressure . I have much homework to do every day . I have less free time to do leisure activities. In my spare time , I join in the English corner to practice my spoken English. This improves my English a lot . I learn more knowledge . My life is busy but it is colorful and meaningful.Best wishes，Li Hua【解析】【分析】本文是一篇材料作文。【詳解】根據(jù)題干“假如你是李華，你最近認(rèn)識的美國筆友David給你發(fā)了一封電子郵件，向了解你進初三以來在學(xué)習(xí)和生活方面的一些變化、收獲和感受?！币罂芍?，本文用現(xiàn)在完成時、一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，人稱是第一人稱。英語作文一般分為三個部分：第一部分：開篇點題——介紹我進初三以來在學(xué)習(xí)和生活方面的一些變化、收獲和感受。第二部分：文章主體——根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，依次介紹我進初三以來在學(xué)習(xí)和生活方面的一些變化、收獲和感受。這里要分為三個小節(jié)：小節(jié)1：過去我的學(xué)習(xí)和生活是什么樣的——有肯多課余時間做自己喜歡的事情。用一般過去時。小節(jié)2：進初三以來在學(xué)習(xí)和生活方面發(fā)生了變化。用現(xiàn)在完成時。小節(jié)3：介紹現(xiàn)在的生活狀態(tài)——忙碌的學(xué)習(xí)。用一般現(xiàn)在時。第三部分：總結(jié)全文——我的生活很忙但是很有意義。8．書面表達。因?qū)W習(xí)壓力大，部分中學(xué)生的身體健康狀況有所下降，這一情況已經(jīng)引起社會的關(guān)注和教育部門的高度重視。假若你是來自九年級三班的李華，請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容，用英語寫一份不少于80詞的倡議書。建議大家積極多參加體育活動，提高身體素質(zhì)。不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名。要點：1. 鍛煉身體的好處： strong， healthy...2. 鍛煉身體的方式： play ball games， running， swimming...3. 請你談?wù)剬W(xué)校開展體育鍛煉的看法和建議。要求：1. 內(nèi)容必須包括以上要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；3. 語句通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；4. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名及校名。Dear schoolmates,I am Li Hua from Class Three, Grade Nine. Health is very important to us teenagers. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Li Hua【答案】Dear shoolmates,I am Li Hua from Class Three,Grade Nine. Health is very important to us teenagers. Either study or work is based on a strong body. Doing sports every day helps us keep healthy. If we don’t take any exercise, we may feel tired and get sick easily. Just as we often say, “Exercise one hour a day keeps illness away. ”There are many kinds of sports we can do, such as running, swimming and playing ball games. But we have to do too much homework after school, I hope teachers will give us less homework so that we can have more time to take part in sports. I also hope our school can organize more sports activities for us. In order to build ourselves stronger and stronger,let’s take active part in all kinds of sports in proper time. Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文。講述鍛煉身體的好處、鍛煉的方式，并建議大家積極參加體育活動。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如either...or..., be based on, keep healthy, such as, have time to do, take part in, in order to, stronger and stronger以及all kinds of等，增強邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達的關(guān)鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。9．“書山有路勤為徑, 學(xué)海無涯苦作舟”, 成功不會從天而降, 美好的未來需要靠不斷努力來創(chuàng)造?某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“天道酬勤” 為主題的征文活動?假如你是李華, 請用英文寫一篇短文投稿, 講述你通過勤奮, 取得進步甚至成功的經(jīng)歷, 并談?wù)勀愕母惺?提示詞語: diligence (勤奮), make progress, effort, proud提示問題: ? What did you achieve by working hard?? What did you do to make it?? How did you feel about it?【答案】Diligence is a must for us to reach our goals. I never realized it until I tried every effort to win the English speech petition last year. It was quite a big challenge for me because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in public. To give a better performance, I made full use of my spare time to prepare for it. I recorded my lines and asked my foreign teacher to correct my pronunciation. Then I kept practising day and night. Besides, I seized every chance to speak in front of my family or friends. The more I practised, the more confident I became. In the end, I won the petition and got a prize. It was so great that all my efforts paid off. I felt so proud of myself.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下你通過勤奮, 取得進步甚至成功的經(jīng)歷。所提供的材料中列舉了“書山有路勤為徑, 學(xué)海無涯苦作舟”, 成功不會從天而降, 美好的未來需要靠不斷努力來創(chuàng)造。主要從：你努力工作取得了什么成績？?你是怎么做到的？?你覺得怎么樣？這幾個方面去介紹。時態(tài)為一般過去時，人稱為第一人稱。注意作文中必須包含材料和提示詞的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確，表達要符合英語習(xí)慣，注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達具有條理性。【高分句型一】It was quite a big challenge for me because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in public. 這對我來說是一個很大的挑戰(zhàn)，因為我對自己的英語口語沒有那么自信，在公共場合說話也很害羞。句子because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in ?！靖叻志湫投縏he more I practised, the more confident I became. 我練習(xí)得越多，就越自信。這句話用到了“the+比較級，the+比較級”結(jié)構(gòu)。表示“越……，就越……”的意思。