【正文】 active and lively, and has a wide range of interests. He likes playing football and does well in playing chess. We live and study together. I have learned a lot from him, he often helps me with my English on his own initiative, so I have improved my English a lot. What’s more , I have learned to share and look after my family.I’m lucky and happy to have an exchange student. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours,Li Ming【解析】【詳解】試題分析：先讀提示，要點(diǎn)與格式要弄清；時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)態(tài)要當(dāng)心，前后呼應(yīng)要一致，結(jié)構(gòu)搭配莫違背；文章寫好細(xì)檢查，點(diǎn)滴小錯(cuò)別忽視。學(xué)生在明確目的和掌握要領(lǐng)后，要嚴(yán)格按照規(guī)定的時(shí)間去完成作文訓(xùn)練任務(wù)。最后要檢查（1）要點(diǎn)是否齊全，有無(wú)遺漏。（2）內(nèi)容是否連貫，有無(wú)缺詞。（3）語(yǔ)法是否正確，人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、名詞單復(fù)數(shù)等有無(wú)錯(cuò)誤。（4）用詞是否得當(dāng)，有無(wú)習(xí)語(yǔ)及固定搭配等方面的錯(cuò)誤?！军c(diǎn)睛】好作文應(yīng)該是緊扣文章主題，遵循書(shū)信格式，選用恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z(yǔ)言合理組織文章結(jié)構(gòu)，內(nèi)容統(tǒng)一、連貫，語(yǔ)法、拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確，用詞恰當(dāng)。為了避免太多單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤，語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，不要為了追求詞語(yǔ)的華麗而堆積一些自己也沒(méi)把握的單詞，不要刻意追求長(zhǎng)句而寫一些自己不知對(duì)錯(cuò)的有多個(gè)從句組成的長(zhǎng)句。考試時(shí)最好選擇自己最有把握的詞匯，短語(yǔ)，句式。7． 人類只有一個(gè)地球。根據(jù)提示，以“Saving the Earth”為題，寫一篇80詞左右的短文。提示: ；，損害健康；，亂排廢水；，使我們的家園更加美麗。 【答案】Saving the EarthThe earth is our home. We should take care of it. But some things we have done are bad for the earth. We have polluted the earth and made it sick. We cut down too many trees and change rich land into desert. Many factories pour waste water into rivers and lakes. Pollution has caused some serious problems. For example, much of the land is poor, some rivers and lakes are dirty. Even the temperature of the earth is rising. The earth is crying for help.What shall we do to save it? My suggestions are that we should plant more trees, put the rubbish into dustbins and stop factories from pouring waste water directly into rivers. After all, we have only one earth. We should do everything we can to protect it, or we’ll be punished and lose our home.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文,動(dòng)筆前首先要認(rèn)真審題,弄清題意。然后根據(jù)主題組織材料，確定寫作內(nèi)容。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述。語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系?！玖咙c(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文包含了所有要點(diǎn)，能圍繞內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，內(nèi)容具體、豐富。應(yīng)用了較豐富的語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯，用詞準(zhǔn)確、句子通順、行文連貫、表達(dá)清楚，具有較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力。層次清晰，語(yǔ)言地道，主題鮮明，內(nèi)容翔實(shí)，格式正確，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。使用了一些比較好的字句。比如：one of the biggest problems in the world；such as比如；not only……but also……；We must try our best to……等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用, 讓文章更出彩?？键c(diǎn)：考查提綱類作文8．書(shū)面表達(dá)。職業(yè)生涯規(guī)劃（career planning）一詞源于1908年的美國(guó)，指的是對(duì)職業(yè)生涯乃至人生進(jìn)行持續(xù)的系統(tǒng)的計(jì)劃的過(guò)程。作為即將畢業(yè)的初中學(xué)生，我們也是時(shí)候該思考我們的職業(yè)生涯規(guī)劃了。請(qǐng)以此為主題寫一篇短文。寫作要求:：80—120詞；。參考要點(diǎn)：1. 職業(yè)選擇及原因；2. 現(xiàn)階段的準(zhǔn)備(學(xué)習(xí)、興趣發(fā)展等)；3. ……My Career Planning_____________________________________________________________________________【答案】My Career PlanningEverybody has his or her dream and career. Different person has different ideas in choosing their career. For me, my ideal career is to be a teacher.When I was still a little child in the primary school, I found it was so great to be a teacher. In my heart I think the teachers can teach students a variety of knowledge. What39。s more, to be a teacher could contribute a lot both to their students and to the society. To be a teacher should be interesting but challenging. So I must study hard to learn a lot of knowledge and I should learn how to get on well with others. If I have a chance one day, I will choose to be a teacher.【解析】【分析】這是一篇話題作文，以My Career Planning為話題，介紹我的職業(yè)規(guī)劃?！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：Everybody has……，my ideal career is……，When I was……，So I must……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了我的理想職業(yè)是當(dāng)一名教師，接下來(lái)介紹我選擇當(dāng)老師的原因以及我現(xiàn)階段的準(zhǔn)備，最后表示只要我有機(jī)會(huì)，我將會(huì)選擇做一名老師。此處a variety of, what’s more, both…and…，get on well with, choose to do sth等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。9．(B) 《朗讀者》第五期節(jié)目中，主持人在開(kāi)場(chǎng)白中說(shuō)道：“我們的一生，會(huì)經(jīng)歷很多的第一次，難忘而又寶貴，它意味著我們的成長(zhǎng)?！闭?qǐng)談?wù)勀闳松凶铍y忘的“第一次”，或許是第一次做家務(wù)、第一次旅行、第一次成功……并說(shuō)說(shuō)你從中學(xué)到了什么或有哪些收獲。不少于80詞。（文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名）【答案】The First CookingLast weekend, my parents went out and only I stayed at home. So I had to cook a meal for myself. First I washed the cabbages and then cooked it. But I didn39。t know how to cook them I put too much salt into the cabbages. So they tasted too salty. I had to throw them away. But I didn39。t lose my heart. This weekend, I asked my mother to teach me how to cook. She taught me how much salt I should use. Wow, the cabbages tasted good. My mother praised me and I felt very happy. Now I know that if I try hard, I will succeed.【解析】【分析】本文為材料作文，需要寫出第一次做某事，人生中有許多第一次，可以挑選一件讓自己感覺(jué)深刻，并且從中學(xué)到了許多東西的事件來(lái)寫，這樣的話，貼近生活實(shí)際，學(xué)生有話可說(shuō)。【詳解】本文寫了我的第一次做飯，先交代背景知識(shí)，因?yàn)楦改覆辉诩遥晕也坏貌蛔约簞?dòng)手，動(dòng)手做的過(guò)程中，由于沒(méi)有經(jīng)驗(yàn)，理所當(dāng)然地失敗了。但是，我不能氣餒，要從失敗中找原因，從哪里跌倒，就從哪里起來(lái)，所以，第二周，我讓媽媽教我做菜，獲得了成功，而且知道了，只要不放棄，就能獲得成功?！军c(diǎn)睛】本篇作文貼近實(shí)際，每個(gè)人都有第一次，挑選一件自己有話可說(shuō)的來(lái)寫即可。但是需要注意文章邏輯，語(yǔ)篇順序，注意連接詞的使用和長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合。這樣的話，文章符合英文造句習(xí)慣，更容易獲得高分。