【正文】 she has some bad habits, too. She often eats junk food for breakfast. Sometimes she quarrels with her classmates in class. She doesn’t go home on time and she always watches TV or plays puter games for more than an hour in the evening. （This makes her parents unhappy. ）I think Zhang Ying is a very good girl. Do you think so?YoursHuang Deshun【解析】試題分析：這是一篇提綱類(lèi)作文，題目中給出的材料較為齊全。寫(xiě)作中注意將張穎的情況介紹清楚。根據(jù)材料可知，本文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，第三人稱(chēng)進(jìn)行敘述，寫(xiě)作中主語(yǔ)時(shí)態(tài)及主謂一致等問(wèn)題。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，做到語(yǔ)句通順。為了使意思更加連貫可適當(dāng)使用連接詞。【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文在寫(xiě)作中使用了很多固定句式，如：be glad to do sth高興做某事；a lot of許多；get up起床等。本文中時(shí)間詞如After supper，Sometimes，in the evening等的巧妙使用，使得本文看起來(lái)邏輯清楚，條理分明。在學(xué)習(xí)中，我們應(yīng)注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.考點(diǎn)：考查提綱類(lèi)作文9．近期某英文報(bào)紙就“Snowplow Parents（掃雪機(jī)式父母）”這一話(huà)題展開(kāi)討論?！皰哐C(jī)式父母”的特征是不惜一切代價(jià)為孩子掃除他們生活中遇到的一切障礙，解決一切困難，以便他們可以輕松擁有成功的人生。請(qǐng)從下表的兩種觀點(diǎn)中選擇一種觀點(diǎn)，并結(jié)合此觀點(diǎn)闡述自己的看法，用英文寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿。觀點(diǎn)理解不理解父母出于對(duì)孩子的愛(ài)才這么做。父母控制一切，孩子沒(méi)有自由。自己的看法自己的看法要求：詞數(shù)：6080詞。短文應(yīng)包括所選觀點(diǎn)中的要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文I really can39。t understand the snowplow these parents,they control clean all the obstacles in children39。s this case,they think children have a successful life ,Children have no freedom to do is the worst thing in their life.In my opinion,parents shouldn39。t do all the things for they also need the experiences in their these experiences play an important role in a successful this way,they know that they need to try their best to solve the problems by themselves when they are in ,they sometimes can gain friendship and more love in their lives.【解析】【詳解】：本文是一篇話(huà)題作文，要求就“Snowplow Parents（掃雪機(jī)式父母）” 這一話(huà)題展開(kāi)討論，并根據(jù)表格中所給出的提示內(nèi)容選擇一種觀點(diǎn)，結(jié)合此觀點(diǎn)闡述自己的看法。在解答寫(xiě)作這類(lèi)試題時(shí)，要根據(jù)短文的中心思想考慮如何開(kāi)頭、展開(kāi)和結(jié)尾，將主要句型、關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)草草記下，形成提綱，然后再動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作。： 本文時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱(chēng)主要為第三人稱(chēng)，輔以第一人稱(chēng)。文章首先說(shuō)明不理解掃雪機(jī)式父母的原因，接下來(lái)說(shuō)明自己的觀點(diǎn)，并闡述自己觀點(diǎn)的原因。：短語(yǔ)：in one39。s lives，in this case，in this way，in trouble。句型：高分句型一：Inthiscase，theythinkchildrenhaveasuccessfullifeeasily．Inthiscase在這樣的情況下；這句話(huà)意為：在這樣的情況下，他們認(rèn)為孩子會(huì)更加輕松擁有成功的人生。高分句型二：they know that they need to try their best to solve the problems by themselves when they are in trouble.beintrouble陷入麻煩，這句話(huà)意為：當(dāng)他們陷入麻煩時(shí)他們知道他們需要他們自己盡力去解決問(wèn)題。10．書(shū)面表達(dá)?！癏ow can a teenager have a successful life?”的討論，為此你采訪(fǎng)了一些同學(xué)（結(jié)果見(jiàn)下表）。請(qǐng)據(jù)上經(jīng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文參與討論，并闡述你的觀點(diǎn)。同學(xué)主要觀點(diǎn)你的觀點(diǎn)努力學(xué)習(xí)尊重父母服務(wù)社會(huì)計(jì)劃未來(lái)……（至少兩條）注意：（1）短文必須包括表中所有內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；（2）你的觀點(diǎn)至少兩條；（3）詞數(shù)：80—100；（4）短文首句僅供選擇使用，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：尊重respect短文首句：I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.【答案】I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. After all, study plays a key role in their life. They also agree they should respect their parents, who look after them every day. Besides, they’re ready to serve the society and in their opinion it’s really meaningful. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for future.From my point of view, we need to make some good friends so that we can learn from each other. Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful life.【解析】試題分析：英語(yǔ)教育網(wǎng)站開(kāi)展主題為“How can a teenager have a successful life?”的討論，采訪(fǎng)了一些同學(xué)參與討論，寫(xiě)出他們的觀點(diǎn)及自己的觀點(diǎn)。因?yàn)槭菙⑹鐾瑢W(xué)的現(xiàn)在的觀點(diǎn)，所以句子應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，敘述同學(xué)的觀點(diǎn)用第三人稱(chēng)，敘述自己的觀點(diǎn)用第一人稱(chēng)。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，所寫(xiě)的句子應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)法，不能是漢語(yǔ)式的句子，要使用一些高級(jí)詞匯及句式。寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：短文用了一些短語(yǔ)和句式，如：do a survey about sth關(guān)于某事做調(diào)查；respect their parents,尊敬他們的父母；look after照顧；make a good plan for sth為某事做一個(gè)好的計(jì)劃；make some good friends交一些好朋友；keep healthy保持健康。用了賓語(yǔ)從句，如：Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for ，如：Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful ，也是提分的經(jīng)典句子。考點(diǎn)：材料作文。