【正文】 據(jù)要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，列出提綱。短文必須包含所給要點(diǎn)，條理清楚，字?jǐn)?shù)80100左右。要運(yùn)用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有連貫性。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無(wú)單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤（時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致等）。本文提綱：大家好！以下是本周發(fā)生的一些重要事件。我來(lái)告訴你一些演講比賽的情況。我的同學(xué)李佳這些天一直在練習(xí)口語(yǔ)。在老師的幫助下，她努力工作，在周三下午的英語(yǔ)演講比賽中獲得了第一名。現(xiàn)在我們來(lái)談?wù)勎覀儼嗌习l(fā)生的好事。為“希望工程”捐贈(zèng)了200本書(shū)、50個(gè)書(shū)包和4200元。另外，李明周一生病，班長(zhǎng)親自送他去醫(yī)院。我們豐富多彩的學(xué)校生活帶給我們?nèi)绱硕嗟男腋?，我們將永遠(yuǎn)記住這些日子。就這些，謝謝！【點(diǎn)睛】書(shū)面表達(dá)要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力?？忌荒苓z漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。語(yǔ)言要規(guī)范，時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用要正確，敘述清楚條里，學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。注意書(shū)寫的規(guī)范：大小寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)等的正確運(yùn)用。注意檢查：?jiǎn)卧~拼寫、語(yǔ)法、動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)序、主謂一致等。寫作六步法：：文體，時(shí)態(tài)，人稱。：要點(diǎn)是否齊全，適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充。：通過(guò)增加狀語(yǔ)，定語(yǔ)，連詞，使句子意思飽滿充實(shí)。，合理使用連詞。：拼寫是否錯(cuò)誤，語(yǔ)法時(shí)態(tài)是否正確，連詞是否恰當(dāng)?shù)取＃鹤⒁鈺?shū)寫工整美觀整潔。6．親愛(ài)的同學(xué)們，初中生活即將結(jié)束，,名城中學(xué)九（1）班的學(xué)生。請(qǐng)以 My junior high school life為題,寫一篇80詞左右的短文。提示：（校園干凈而美麗，活動(dòng)非富多彩）；老師（傳授知識(shí)，教會(huì)做人,經(jīng)常鼓勵(lì)）；同學(xué)（和睦相處，互相學(xué)習(xí)，共同進(jìn)步）。、老師、同學(xué)表達(dá)感謝和祝福。要求：1. 文章包含以上提示內(nèi)容，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。 。【答案】My junior high school lifeMy name is Tony. I am studying in Grade time goes by, my colorful junior middle school life is ing to an end. I’m glad to tell you something about my school life. Our campus is clean and beautiful, and there are all kinds of activities. Our teachers teach us rich knowledge and how to behave ourselves. They also encourage us to work hard. We all get on well with our classmates. Besides, we learn from each other and make progress together. I thanks for my school, my teachers and my classmates. Wish them better.【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我的初中生活?！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：My name is……，I’m glad to……，Our campus is……，Our teachers teach us……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。【點(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了我的個(gè)人情況，接下來(lái)介紹我們的校園，老師和同學(xué)，最后對(duì)學(xué)校、老師、同學(xué)表達(dá)感謝和祝福。此處go by, e to an end, tell sb about sth, all kinds of, behave oneself, encourage sb to do sth, get on with, learn from, make progress等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。7．書(shū)面表達(dá)86. 請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的提示和要求，寫一篇展望2060年的短文。某些人可能到月球上去度假：某些科學(xué)家可能在海底生活。每家都有可視電話（vidcophones），孩子可在家通過(guò)電視和廣播學(xué)習(xí)，接受教育，機(jī)器人為你做家務(wù)……要求：短文必須包括所有提示內(nèi)容，同學(xué)們可以展開(kāi)想象，做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。詞數(shù)：90調(diào)左右。（開(kāi)頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總調(diào)數(shù)）。The life in2060Sometimes I dream about life in 2060. What will it______________________________________________Keys：【答案】The life in 2060Sometimes I dream about life in 2060. What will it be like？Perhaps some people will go to the moon for a holiday，and some scientists will live under the sea. Maybe we39。ll have videophones in every home. We can have a medical examination or do some shopping without leaving our homes. And I39。m sure there39。ll be more educational programmers on the radio and TV，so perhaps some children won39。t need to go to school every day. They39。ll study at home. Many people don39。t like doing housework. Maybe in 2060 each family will have a robot to do shopping. housework，and so on. I believe the dream will be realized.【解析】【分析】這是一篇材料作文【詳解】根據(jù)題目要求，寫一篇展望2060年的短文，可知是一般將來(lái)時(shí)。人稱用第一人稱和第三人稱。英語(yǔ)作文一般分為三個(gè)部分：第一部分：開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題——展望2060年的生活。第二部分：具體內(nèi)容——某些人可能到月球上去度假：某些科學(xué)家可能在海底生活。每家都有可視電話（vidcophones），孩子可在家通過(guò)電視和廣播學(xué)習(xí)，接受教育，機(jī)器人為你做家務(wù)……第三部分：再次點(diǎn)題——我相信未來(lái)會(huì)更好8．書(shū)面表達(dá)為感受母愛(ài)情深，弘揚(yáng)知恩圖報(bào)，某英語(yǔ)網(wǎng)站正在舉辦以MyMother為主題的征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列思維導(dǎo)圖所提供的信息，寫一篇短文，介紹你的母親和你之間的故事。參考詞匯：givemuchto…，It39。smyturnto…，trymybestto…提示：1）短文內(nèi)容須包括所給內(nèi)容，含母親曾為你所做的事和你將為母親所做的事各一件，并闡述原因；2）請(qǐng)注意短文結(jié)構(gòu)層次、時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用和卷面整潔度；3）詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右，短文開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；4）文中不得出現(xiàn)學(xué)校和個(gè)人的相關(guān)信息。MyMotherWeneedlove．Wealsoneedtoshowlove．ThepersonIlovemostismymother．___．【答案】My motherWe need love．We also need toshow love．The person I love most is my mother．My mother is 41 years old．She is of medium build with long black hair．She is quiet．She is a history teacher in a middle school．She likes dancing．She can cook delicious food．She did a lot for me when I was a child．She bought whatever I needed for my study，even though she didn39。t have much money．She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend．She cooked delicious and healthy food for me．When I grow up，I will do what I can to make my mother happy．I will find a good job after I graduate from college．I39。ll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young．I39。ll take her to wonderful sights around China．Most importantly，I will stay with her when I have free time．That39。s what she wants most，I think．【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文。為感受母愛(ài)情深，弘揚(yáng)知恩圖報(bào)，要求以MyMother為主題寫一篇短文介紹你的母親和你之間的故事，參加某英語(yǔ)網(wǎng)站正在舉辦的征文活動(dòng)。在寫作時(shí)，注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)；注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩?！军c(diǎn)睛】首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫作，在寫作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；同時(shí)注意語(yǔ)句要通順，詞匯書(shū)寫無(wú)誤，不要出現(xiàn)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤。9．今年初《流浪地球》在中國(guó)火熱上映。影片故事設(shè)定在2075年，講述太陽(yáng)即將毀火，已經(jīng)不適合人類生存，而面對(duì)絕境，人類將開(kāi)啟“流浪地球”計(jì)劃，試圖帶著地球一起逃離太陽(yáng)系，尋找人類新家園的故事。影片多次提到“希望”。比如，老師問(wèn):希望是什么?班長(zhǎng)回答:希望是我們這個(gè)年代鉆石一樣的東西。你的筆友Demon觀看后，印象深刻，給你寫了一封郵件。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)郵件內(nèi)容結(jié)合你的情況，用英語(yǔ)回復(fù)。To: LiHua@China. From: Demon@ America. Subject:Problems and hopeDear Li Hua, How are you? I hope you are well. I have watched a movie called Wandering Earth. I am deeply moved by those Chinese people who never give up. You Chinese are really brave and full of wisdom. As my Chinese pen pal, what will you do when you meet difficulty? Would you please tell me the following things?What problems do you often meet in your school life?How do you usually solve your problems?Who has influenced you most in your life and what do you think of him/her?What do you think about hope? Please write back and tell me everything.Best wishes,Demon注意：，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順。、校名等相關(guān)信息。Dear DemonI39。m glad that you like the film. Indeed, I have learned a lot from it as Please write to me and tell me your view.Yours,LiHua【答案】Dear Demon，I39。m glad that you like the film. Indeed, I have learned a lot from it as well. In school, I also encounter some problems, the biggest problem is how to strike a balance between study and life. Whenever I want to play and don39。t want to study, I will think of the Chin